Episode Five
Not a great deal to say about this Episode I'm afraid,
folks. The story moves along and we get the truth about Jana
just in time for her to die. Looking back at this now, I think
I handled her very badly - I did what I'd call an 'Eric
Saward' on her and just killed her off when her function in
the story had ceased. Except that she doesn't actually have
one - I'm rather appalled at this. She's there to get Liz to
L'ithe and then provide a cliffhanger. Beyond that, she's
rather irrelevant to the whole thing. What a shame. Sorry.
The idea of the pale young man having a scar that
immediately tells the reader who he is but not the story's
characters is an unashamed rip-off from Malcolm Hulke's
novelisation of Invasion of the Dinosaurs where the character
of Butler is only identified by his scar. I didn't even have
the wherewithall to change it from a scar! That's outrageous.
Naughty Gary. I do love the fact he has crosshairs instead of
eyes, however. A spark of originality at last - but only
because it's something I wrote in a story when I was eight.
Ooh look, Tom Osgood from The Daemons makes his appearance.
So does Champion and (in conversation) Robins from The
Silurians plus Tracy from The Invasion. Shipman and Farley are
the names of people I knew at school and have turned up in
other things I've written. I wonder where they are now. Oh
well, one for Friends, Reunited I suppose...
The Nestene Energy Sphere going to the National Space
Museum is of course a precursor to Terror of the Autons. I
like the conversation here between Mike Yates and Masie Hawke.
I'd forgotten that I'd paired her off with Captain Hawkins
from The Silurians. This is a nice moment - something that's
always bothered me about the casual death count in UNIT
stories was always what do they tell the families. If UNIT's
this top secret organisation (or was at the time of Season
Seven), then what could they be told. I loved the fact that
Masie couldn't tell Sam Hawkins' family about his death
because of the Official Secrets Act, and that she had to write
all the letters full of lies and half-truths to other
families. Oh, and I also like Dairy Milk chocolate bars.
Finally we end up back with the Third Doctor doing what he
does best - trying to broker a peace deal and losing when
stupid humans turn up with guns and things.
Oh well, next time, the Myrka probably turns up...