But What Of Earth?
by
Piers Anthony


But What Of Earth?

A Novel Rendered Into A Bad Example

TABLE OF CONTENTS

Introduction

But What of Earth?

Notes

Conclusion

Introduction This is not exactly a novel.  It is the story of a novel a
book that was lured into an unfortunate liaison, then brutally violated
and cast out upon the cynical market to expire in shame.  It was not
the fairest of books to begin with, though it had its secret
aspirations; after its degradation it was sad indeed.  In this volume I
shall describe in graphic detail exactly what happened.

But for those who simply want entertainment without didactic
complications, that too is available.  Skip the rest of this
introduction, go to the novel proper, and read it through without
paying attention to the numerous superscripts (elevated numbers) that
call out the footnotes massed in the rear.  But What of Earth?  may not
be the best novel written, but neither is it the worst; it is merely
the least significant of the novels I have done.  It is, ironically,
intimately associated with my most significant novel, Tarot but irony
permeates this whole situation.

Those who prefer to assimilate the complete sordid story at the outset
should read the rest of this introduction, then go through the novel,
looking up the footnotes along the way.  A traveling bookmark or two
should help one to keep place in the main text, another to do it for
the footnotes.  Why haven't I put the notes at the feet of the pages
where they are called out?  Because some of the notes are pages long!
This novel was the offspring of my fancy, and my anger at its treatment
cannot be contained in token notes.  For perhaps the first time in this
genre, the Writer is talking back to the Copy-Editor in public, on the
pages of the manuscript.  The whole story is capped by the Conclusion,
which describes what I did about the affront at the time.  I trust that
the reader who goes the whole route Introduction, Text, Notes, and
Conclusion will feel rewarded for his effort; certainly he should
understand more about writing and publishing than he did before.

Some may prefer to compromise: read the novel, then go through the
Notes in a mass, trusting memory to make their contexts clear.  These
are not research paper-type notes; they are in a number of cases
separate little essays that can be grasped apart from the particular
passages to which they relate.  Some readers may sample Notes randomly,
or look up only those that promise to be interesting.

Whatever it's optional.  Now let's get on with the story about the
genesis of the novel.

I keep records of just about everything.  My Daily Work Record notes
how I have spent every day of my life since retiring to full-time
professional writing in 1966, and that record is available now.  It
indicates that I wrote to the person I shall simply call "Editor" on
January 4, 1974, sending him some material for consideration for
publication.  I didn't do this blindly; I remember that he had phoned
me to request a submission, so I had obliged.  Thus I believe I first
heard from him in December 1973, and waited for the holidays to clear
before trusting my material to the mail.  Like some folk who depend on
the mails for delivery of both product and payment, I tend to be
moderately paranoid about it, and try not to provide any pretext for
the loss of anything therein.  Glutted December is dangerous; cold
January is relatively safe.

Editor did not accept the material; it wasn't quite what he was looking
for.

This is standard Editorialese; these folk normally keep what they are
looking for a secret from writers.  After all, who would respect an
easy editor?  And in due course he sent me a letter suggesting that I
try something really ambitious, in the mode of Isaac Asimov's
Foundation trilogy.  (Since then, Dr.  Asimov has profited from a
system I believe I pioneered, and added a fourth novel to that trilogy.
Trilogies stretch farther if they run to four, five, or six novels.)
The notion intrigued me; why not show that I could create on just as
grand a scale as the Good Doctor A?  So I settled down and worked it
out, formulating the Cluster trilogy.  I sent a sixty-page presentation
to Editor and he rejected it.

I was in the process of learning the hard way: if there is one thing an
editor is sure to bounce, it is exactly what he says he is looking for.
Later my agent showed Cluster to Avon, who hadn't asked for anything
like it, and therefore bought and published it.  That series,
incidentally, has done better commercially than anything Editor
published, which illustrates another rule that writers understand: what
an editor rejects is often superior to what he accepts.

Somewhere along the way, he suggested that I try what he termed an
"Anti-Homosexual" novel; he could virtually guarantee a sale on that,
he said.

So I worked up a notion and routed it to him through my agent.  More is
possible in science fiction than in the mundane world, so I had
consequences of homosexual involvement such as men bearing babies.  I
happen to be emphatically heterosexual myself, but my fiction does not
necessarily indicate my preference on anything; it indicates my ability
as a writer.  Evidently this treatment wasn't what Editor wanted, for
he never responded, not even to reject it, to the annoyance of my
agent, who was left with an unsettled file.  In retrospect I find this
interesting this direct invitation to write on the subject, and then
this complete tuning-out.  Could this suggest that I was dealing with a
closet member of this persuasion?  I have no idea.  I regard each
person's sexual preference as his own business, and that of his partner
except when it impinges on my writing-time.  I really don't like having
my time wasted.

My record indicates that I made my first notes on the project that was
to become But What of Earth?  on February 6, 1975.  Editor had informed
me that the new line of science fiction books he would be publishing
was intended to appeal to a mundane readership, so as to draw in
readers who normally did not enter the S-F-genre section of the store.
He wanted none of the hard-core space opera that ordinary folk would
not comprehend.  He explained that by appealing to this broader market,
he hoped to sell a quarter-million copies of each novel in the line.
Impressed, I agreed to try that sort of writing.  Today I have sales in
that range for my series-fantasies, but then it was more like 50,000
copies per novel.  What writer could resist a shot at such a moon?

So I worked up a summary for a notion I had: that the level of
civilization in the world may be governed by population.  Just as an
elephant is more complicated than an amoeba because it is larger, not
larger because it is more complicated, so also may civilization have
come to mankind because of increasing numbers, not vice versa.  Such
notions intrigue me, and I like to work them out especially if I can
earn my living while doing so.  But how could I test this, fictively?
Well, suppose I reversed it?  Arranged to have the population decline,
and see whether civilization declined with it?  Yes an excellent
thought-experiment!

But what would account for a non-catastrophic decline in population?
Remember, this was for a mundane audience that wouldn't understand
alien invasion by slimy Snail-men or some loathsome
telepathically-transmitted disease, attractive as those notions may be
to hardened genre addicts.  Well, I did have this framework in which
people were being matter-transmitted to colony planets, in Cluster.

Could I adapt an aspect of this?  Peaceful emigration that steadily
depopulates Earth?  Yes that should do nicely.  Thus I developed But
What of Earth?

On March 8 Editor phoned me to accept my summary.  In fact he expressed
interest in a sequel.  Always ready to oblige such a request, I quickly
worked up a summary for And What of Conquest?  that ran into immediate
difficulty: my agent rejected it.  That is, the man who represented the
commercial side of my literary interests, and who marketed my fiction
for me, getting me decent terms and better treatment than I had had
when I was on my own, refused to market Conquest.  He found it
unconvincing, and it was not his policy to inflict such material on
editors.  Now don't get outraged about this; there will be occasion
enough for outrage later in this narrative.  Agents, increasingly,
serve the useful function of winnowing out the chaff in the literary
marketplace; that's one reason they can get better terms for an author.
Editors claim to be deluged with appallingly bad material "over the
transom" from unagented writers; they hate to wade through that slush
pile.  But when they receive a submission from an agent, they know that
this is far more likely to be good material, and they approach it with
a more positive attitude.  Thus an agent can get faster attention for a
writer, and sometimes can sell material that the author would not have,
because of its getting lost in the slush from the transom.  My agent
was doing his job.  BUT this was a solicited submission.  That put it
in a different category, and he should not have rejected it.  Even the
best of agents can make mistakes.  So I sent it directly to Editor who
liked the notion, but rejected it because he felt it was too juvenile
in treatment.  This was not an insult; the Juvenile market is perfectly
respectable.  He just wasn't publishing Juveniles.  Actually, I had not
pitched Conquest as a Juvenile; it had adult theme and treatment.  But
it is an editor's privilege to purchase what he wishes, and to reject
what he wishes, for whatever irrelevant reason he chooses.  At least I
had the sale on Earth?  to keep my creative juices flowing, as Editor
liked to phrase it.

The new line of books was shaping up to be pretty classy.  Several
novels were to be published each month and put on sale in separate
racks set apart from the common S-F herd.  There would be a distinctive
series-format, and one of the top genre artists was to paint every
cover.  Editor really was going for that quarter-million sales
figure.

The contract on Earth?  arrived and I discovered to my dismay that it
gave me only two months to deliver the novel.  I had told Editor I
needed at least three months, because I do three drafts, and even a
short novel takes time to do properly.  But the contract was dated
April 16, 1975, and had a delivery deadline of June 15, 1975.  I had
started to work on it, in anticipation of the contract, so I had a
couple weeks head start; even so, this was going to be close.  For one
thing, there were mundane distractions: we were in the process of
buying land in the forest.  I was raised in the forest and retain a
liking for it; we had managed to save up some money, because my wife
had a regular job (writers seldom are able to save money on what they
make writing: this is a matter of economics, not lack of discipline),
and we were investing it in land.  We had made two trips to the country
eighty miles to our north to look at acreage, and had gotten mired in
sugar-sand for an hour and a half, but had found some we really
liked.

It was in fact the land we now live on.  Buying land and building a
homestead on it can be a time-consuming process.  We really had to be
sure it was right.  But writing novels is how I earn the money to
survive, so I buckled down to the novel.  Two months?  I would do it
somehow!

Then I discovered another problem: the contract also specified a length
of 55,000 words.  Now that's short; I was then moving into the 100,000
word territory, which category I have been comfortable with ever since;
it seems to be my natural length.  My typical novels now run 120,000
words.  This one for Editor had to be half that length, and it is not
easier to write short than long.  I need room to express myself; 55,000
words was like squeezing through a narrow drainpipe, instead of walking
freely along the surface.  But I feared that if I ran over length
Editor would simply lop off some to make it fit his format.

I had to keep it short!  So I eliminated chapterization so there would
be no space-consuming chapter-ends, and struggled valiantly, and
finally managed to come in at exactly 55,000 words.  Whew!  It was not
the best work I could do, because of the double-bind of time and
wordage, but I felt I had risen to the occasion and done a decent job
despite the handicaps.

I shipped it off, and Editor accepted it as it stood, sending my agent
written notice to that effect, and in due course I received payment for
it.  All well and good.  This should ordinarily have been the end of
the matter.  (Do you hear that faint but sinister music in the
background?) Had I But Known...!

Meanwhile, other things were developing.  Not long after signing the
Earth?

contract I discovered that my research for the novel was expanding
voluminously, and of course I just didn't have time for that.  But a
juxtaposition of events led to the sudden revelation of what was to
become the major project of my career, Tarot.  Some of the research was
religious, for Brother Paul, who is a character in this novel.  I had
met a disciple of a semi-religious group in the course of my classes in
judo; he and I were helping to haul out the heavy mats that form the
tatami or cushion to protect students when taking falls.  He arranged
to send me some of their literature.  It arrived on the same day as a
recording of a lecture by John White on an aspect of a seemingly
supernatural phenomenon.  So I played the recording while going through
the voluminous literature and Tarot was born, extending the framework I
had used for Cluster and Earth?  The sale of the Cluster trilogy to
Avon occurred at about that time, so it was easy to integrate the three
projects.  Tarot was to have a more complex history than either of the
other two projects, and the three wound up spread across three and a
half publishers (Jove was the half), but it all started here in Earth?
I never showed Tarot to Editor, having realized that if Cluster was too
strong for him, Tarot would give him a stroke.  As it was, it almost
gave the editors at Avon, Del Rey, and Berkley strokes, before Jove
bought it and was in turn bought by the conglomerate that owned
Berkley.  Tarot, like Cluster, has been more successful in print than
most of the novels published by the publishers that bounced it.  I
mention this in an offhand manner, but with enormous private
satisfaction.

Editor called me: there were some spot changes he would like to have me
make in Earth?  A prologue, an epilogue, that sort of thing.  His
suggestions seemed reasonable, and I immediately wrote up the material,
which included a technical clarification in the body of the novel, and
sent it to him.  I really hadn't had to do this, as the novel had
already been accepted as it stood, but I always try to give an editor
what he wants.  (Do you hear that background music getting louder?)
Then he called again: he wanted additional editorial revisions.  He
said that he had hired a new and excellent copy-editor, who had gone
over my manuscript and come up with some points: minor items, scattered
throughout the text.  There were so many that it would be better to
retype the manuscript for the printer.  (The music is now deafening,
but like the folk in movies, I simply did not hear it.) He assured me
that I need not concern myself with this; he would simply have another
writer do the job of retyping and incorporation.  Now, I really did not
believe that my novel needed this attention, but certainly I didn't
want to retype it just to include scattered minor changes.  My
commitments had multiplied while I worked on Earth?; I had sold four
novels in a single month (the Cluster trilogy and a non-genre
collaborative martial-arts novel) and my time was really hard-pressed.
So I went along with this, since Editor planned to pay the other writer
a fee for the retyping, and the other writer happened to be a friend of
mine.  Why torpedo an easy buck for a friend?  Editor was sure I would
like the result, and of course the other writer would send me a letter
to clarify exactly what was being done.  (Absolute chaos in the
orchestral score!) Time passed.  I received no letter from Writer, and
no further word by mail or phone from Editor.  Maybe they hadn't
bothered with the changes after all.  I wasn't worried.

But when I received no galley-proofs to correct, I queried.  When two
queries brought no tangible result, I had my agent speak for me more
firmly.  A writer does after all have to put his foot down somewhere.

Editor responded with a copy of the printed brochure covering the
forthcoming novels 34 through 48, which listed Earth?  as number 44. My
jaw dropped for it was listed as a collaboration with the other writer.
Now this was crazy; the contract specified that it was a solo novel,
and it specifically prohibited any oral changes in the agreement. 
Until they had my written agreement, nothing could be done to my novel,
and I had signed no such agreement.  Naturally I challenged this
immediately.  (The music had finally penetrated!) Editor phoned.

It turned out that he was sure I had not only approved the
collaboration, but had agreed to give future profits from the novel to
the other writer, who had only been paid $500 for his services
initially.  The Editor may have convinced himself that I had consented.
I had not.  Where was the necessary revision of the contract?  (He had,
on the phone, described the retyping as being "like a collaboration"
that may be where he got the notion that I had no objection.  But his
description was a simile; had he said, "it is a collaboration," I would
have said, "No way.") Technically there was no question: the publisher
was in violation of the contract.  But Editor assured me that I would
be pleased with the book, and that if I were not, the other writer's
name would be stricken from future editions and no share of the profit
would be paid to him.  (I wonder what he told the other writer?) He
gave examples of the flaws I had had in the novel that had needed
correction.  I told him they were spurious; there were no such flaws. 
It was now evident to me that something was seriously amiss; what had
they done to my novel, and why?

Concerned, I bought a copy of the other writer's solo novel for that
line, which was already in print.  I had gotten to know him through
fandom, and long-time fans tend to think they can write better than the
professionals can.

Copy-editors seem to have the same notion.  That is seldom the case.

Certainly it was not the case here.  The novel was a conventional
post-holocaust effort, such as I had done for Battle Circle, basically
pedestrian in treatment, limited in perspective, and without literary
pretension.  He was adequate, but hardly a writer of ambition.  The
cover artist, who professed to pay meticulous attention to every
detail, had portrayed the protagonist reversed.  Since the chief
attribute of the protagonist was having half his face horrendously
scarred, this did make a difference.  It was reported to me via the
fannish grapevine that the artist had described Earth?  as unreadable
until the other writer had remedied its flaws.  Well, a larger jury
will now have opportunity to judge.  I had always admired the work of
that artist, and still do, and find it hard to believe he said such a
thing; the report may have been a misrepresentation of his attitude.

When Earth?  was published, I bought a copy and read it nervously.
Alas, my worst fears were realized: the thing had been entirely
reworked.  Major scenes had been deleted, and grammatical errors had
been introduced such as the run-on sentence, misuse of the preposition
"like" and abuse of the subjunctive mood.  It had been expurgated in
the areas of sex, race and religion.  Characterization had been fudged,
and the rationale of the protagonist's major mission had been deleted,
rendering the novel pointless.  I was ashamed to have my name
associated with this atrocity.  Delete the other writer's name?  Better
to delete mine!

Editor had assured me that all was well when he had in fact been
ravishing my innocent novel in the back room.  Not only was this
unethical and indeed a breach of contract, it was foolish on two
grounds.  First, a poor novel had in effect been substituted for a
decent one, so that the readers would be turned off and the line would
suffer.  Second, he had done this to Piers Anthony, who had a
well-deserved reputation as one of the most ornery authors of the
genre.  I don't look for quarrels, but I generally do finish them, and
only an idiot would quarrel with me twice.

I intended to have Editor's head.

But before we get to the manner in which I sought my objective, let's
present the novel, so that everyone can see what I'm talking about.
Perhaps my reader is assuming that I am overstating the case, reacting
with undue sensitivity to minor and necessary modifications.  Oh,
yeah?

I recovered the copy-edited manuscript from the other writer, who of
course had also been misled, being assured that I had approved the
rewrite.  His initial letter to me had been sent to the wrong address
(his error; he had my correct one but evidently had forgotten that I
had moved six years before, so used the defunct one) and so had never
reached me.  But he was basically a decent person;

I'm sure he thought he was improving my novel.  Very few living writers
can do what I do better than I do, which is one reason I am now well up
in the top one percent of all writers in commercial success, but he
honestly thought he could.

The more subtle aspects of my writing simply were not apparent to him.
I am sincerely sorry that he was brought into this mess; as I said, he
had been a friend of mine.

Read the novel now, with or without looking up the notes.  Then read my
Conclusion, wherein I detail what happened after publication of the
novel.  As I explained, handicaps of time and length caused this to be
the least of my novels, but it does have its points and it does fill in
some background in the Cluster and Tarot framework.

Piers Anthony

But What of Earth?1 "Here comes the love scene," Scot said.

"Care to keep pace, Fanny?"

"Stop it, Scot," the girl snapped as his arm encircled her shoulders a
bit too intimately.

"I want to see the movie, not wrestle it."

He relaxed his grip on her, concealing his irritation.  If she was this
stuffy at a drive-in, how would she be elsewhere?  He had spent his
whole week's entertainment allowance setting up for this, paying the
exorbitant prices for gasoline, restaurant food and theater admission:
the best he could afford on his student budget.2

At first he had respected her hands-off attitude, but it was becoming
increasingly awkward.  She was, after all, his fiancee; would the
barrier really drop when she was his wife?

She turned, alerted by his silence.

"Why don't you wait and find out?"  she asked him, brushing back the
loose strand of red hair from her face and smiling.  Fanny was an
exceptionally pretty girl, especially when she smiled.  She had a sense
of humor, she was intelligent, she finished whatever she started, and
she had other strong recommendations which was why she was his fiancee.
His irritation faded.

Actually, it wasn't much of a love scene, and not much of a movie,
despite its expense.  Either he was getting jaded, or the quality of
such entertainment was deteriorating as its price went up.  He would
have been better off taking her for a walk in the park except that the
park was hardly safe at night, Scot looked out the window, across the
massed cars to the city skyline beyond the edge of the roof.  The
atmosphere glowed with the diffused light of myriad streets and
buildings, the pinpoint sources fuzzed into a dull ambience by the
smog.  Once there had been strict environmental regulation, but that
had passed with the series of intensifying fuel crises.  Now only the
rich could afford to breathe really clean air, they had it piped into
their sealed houses and cars at phenomenal expense.

No stars were visible; the city atmosphere took care of that too.  Scot
looked up, experiencing a frustrated nostalgia.  He coughed, suddenly
aware of the acrid aftertaste of the air.  He felt suffocated, but knew
it was largely in his mind.

The really toxic wastes were still controlled, theoretically; breathing
might not be sweet, but it was government-certifiably safe.

The screen darkened and the speaker went silent.

"Oh no not another power failure!"  Scot groaned, though he had not
really been paying attention to the show.

Fanny shrugged.

"It'll come on again in a moment."

"That's not the point!  This is the third failure this week.  For the
rates they charge for electricity the least they could do is keep it
coming.  This business of " "Don't shout," she said.

"You know they can't help it.  Their facilities are overextended."

That was the difference between them.  He railed at interruptions,
price increases, inferior merchandise, poor service, false
representations; she accepted them as part of the price of a burgeoning
population.  Her way undoubtedly gave her greater equilibrium, but did
nothing to correct the situation.  Actually, neither did his own way.
So they were even but it was a fundamental difference that manifested
in times of stress.

"There are too many people on this Earth," he muttered.

She shrugged again.  That seemed to be much of her philosophy of life:
a shrug.

"How are you going to do anything about that?  You can't just murder
them."

"It's got to start with birth control," he said.

"An absolute moratorium on procreation for two or five years, to stop
the population surge.  Then very limited " "I thought you wanted a
family," she said.

"You have always seemed eager to start work on it."

Ouch!

"That's not the same.  I want " "Oh?"

Oh-oh.  She didn't believe in birth control not the artificial kind,
anyway.  She would be glad to wait five years to start a family, if
that meant no sex.  That wasn't his idea at all, as she well knew. Scot
didn't want to resume that argument with her.  So he punched on the car
radio.  The battery could take that amount of drain for a while, and it
was better than sitting in unromantic silence.

Raucous music blared out of the speaker, making Fanny wince.

"Turn it down.  Find some news," she said.

Good suggestion.  Her suggestions were always practical, in the minor
compass.

She had a mind in her head.  Too bad she seldom applied it to major
problems.

He cut across stations until he picked up news-in-progress.  It, like
the rest of his world, was routine but crowded: stock exchange down
four points, hit and run killing, provocative remark on national policy
by an ambitious senator, unemployment rate up again, weather cloudy and
cooling.

"They don't deign to mention the power failure," Scot muttered.

"It's broad enough to be newsworthy."  He looked out across the city
again.  The stoplights were dead, the skyscrapers dark.  This one
covered square miles!

"It happens all the time," Fanny said.

"That doesn't justify it!"  he snapped back.

"They should refund " "Sh," she interrupted him.

"Something interesting."

"I don't care what " Then, abruptly, his attention became riveted to
the news.  "matter transmission," the announcer was saying.

"Breakthrough in a years-long effort.

The procedure is said to be instantaneous, effective across thousands
of light-years.  It is claimed that it represents a window to the
stars."

That was all.  Obviously the item had been inserted as a fillip to
spice the news, like a rumor of a duck-footed man or interview with a
drunken ghost.

Everyone knew that instantaneous matter transport was impossible!

"But if it were true..."  Scot breathed.

"What difference would it make?"  Fanny asked, taking advantage of the
hiatus to do some knitting.  Many girls knitted today, as a necessary
hedge against the cost of clothing.3 "The space exploration program
doesn't improve our lives."

There was the narrow compass again.

"What difference!"  he cried.

"The light-speed limitation on velocity in space has stopped us from
doing much more than explore the nearest planets of our own system.  We
know there are other planets out there, circling other stars, but we
can't get to them.  If we had instant travel, we could colonize..."  He
drifted silent, overwhelmed by the sheer vision of it: walking on some
exotic far-distant world, two suns in the sky, one red and one blue,
humming vegetation, rainbow-hued streams, the fragrance of new-mown hay
everywhere... "Who would want to leave Earth?"  she asked
complacently.

"I would!"  he said and realized with a start that an inner truth had
sprung forth.  Even if it were some barren rock-planet, it was his
notion of heaven.  The very thought filled him with an enthusiasm akin
to love.

"I'm sick of Earth!

Everything here is sour; it just gets worse and with no remedy.  I'd
leave it all in a moment!"

"I wouldn't," Fanny said.4 He saw that another fundamental difference
had opened between them, but that only made him more vehement.

"I'd like nothing better than to say good-bye to Earth forever, to go
somewhere where I could breathe fresh air and see the stars at night,
have room to " "Remember Philip Nolan," Fanny told him.

"Who?"

"Philip Nolan.  The man without a country.  He said he never wanted to
hear the name of his country again, so the judge gave him his wish."

"Oh.  A story.  Well, I didn't mean it exactly that way.  I don't mind
if I hear about Earth but I would leave it for a pioneer planet."5 She
turned her chin away in a small, elegant gesture of negation.

"What's so good about Earth?"  he persisted unwisely.

"Do you like perpetual power failures?"

"Intermittent power failures.  I don't like them but it's better than
no power at all, which is what you'd have on a new world.  We're really
pretty comfortable here, all things considered."

"Comfortable?  We're stagnating!"

"If we were, we wouldn't be inventing matter transmission, would we?"

"What good is matter transmission, if the lights don't work?"  he
demanded.

"Exactly," she said, and he realized that he'd somehow lost an
argument.  He'd gotten reversed; she was the one who cared about the
creature comforts instead of theoretical explorations of space.

As if on cue, the power returned.  The movie picked up where it had
left off.

Fanny turned off the radio and returned to the film as though there had
been no interruption.

But the notion, so suddenly introduced, would not let go of Scot's
imagination.

Matter transmission could they mean it?  They had said it was
instantaneous, and that was suspicious.  The news service so often got
things muddled!  Not light speed, which one would reasonably expect,
but instant.  At light speed it would take four years to reach the
nearest star, and a hundred thousand to cross the entire galaxy.  That
was no good.  But instant travel 6 No.  It had to be a mistake.
Relativity said it was impossible.

But if it could be true, invoking some principle that Relativity didn't
apply to.  Not travel, but duplication at the receiving station, from
the human blueprint 7 "Will you stop muttering?"  Fanny said.

"I can't hear the dialogue."

"The universe opened to man, and all you care about is third-rate
dialogue!"

"Well, if you're going to be difficult about it " "Damn, I don't see
why " "Why what?"  she asked, turning to him.

Why we can't forget that damn movie and just neck, he thought
vehemently.  See how far we could go in a car.  But he couldn't say
that.  She would hit the roof.

"Why what?"  Fanny repeated.  She was challenging him to back down, to
apologize, as he had so many times before.  Yet there was a limit.

"Why we can't skip the movie and " "Let's go home," she said coldly.

He had been wrong.  She hadn't hit the roof.  She had frozen up.  But
he was mad now.

"What is it with you?"  he demanded.

"You don't care about the horizons of science, you don't care to neck."
In his mind he used a stronger term.

"Where does your mind orient, anyway?"

"There is a middle ground."

"The vast mediocrity of the radical center!"

"You ought to know.  You asked to marry it."

"I'm having second thoughts," he said.

"Oh?"  She put her hand to her engagement ring.

What was he doing!  She had called his bluff, and he had to back off
now.

"I

didn't mean it that way!  Of course I love you.  But why must we
quarrel?"

"Why?"  she asked, turning his question back at him in the way she
had.

Why, indeed?  She had started nothing; he was the dissatisfied one,
beating his head against walls foolishly.  By his own definitions, he
was stubborn and unreasonable.  Perhaps he saw in Fanny a stabilizing
complement to his headlong personality.  Her normalcy balancing his
abnormality.  It would be folly to throw that away.

"Because I'm an ornery ass," he said, defeated.  It was evident that
she could function better without him than he could function without
her.

"You are a dedicated person," she said, softening.  She was always a
gracious winner.

"Same thing."  And he had his second revelation of the evening; they
were the same thing.  To be dedicated was to be ornery.  Her way was to
yield gracefully to the necessities of existence, like a flexible
willow.  His was to stand firm like a gnarly oak and therefore risk
being uprooted by the storm.  Could the two of them really make it
together, or would that fundamental difference in nature inevitably
tear them apart?

He started the motor, put the car in gear, and eased out, using his
parking lights.  He made his way to the exit ramp and started down,
circling the building several times in descending spirals until
reaching ground level.  Down here not even the skyline was visible; it
was like the bottom of a foggy pit.  Perhaps that was the real
attraction of the rooftop cinemas: for a few hours they lifted a person
up out of the depths, nearer to seeming freedom.  Though the theaters
would soon close if many more people committed suicide by ramming their
vehicles over the ramparts to fall into the chasm of the street... He
drove Fanny home and kissed her chastely at the door.  Her attitude was
just right yet he knew she was upset.  They had fought, however
deviously, and there were hidden wounds.8

Scot circled the block for twelve minutes, watching his gas gauge nudge
down, before snatching a place to park.  Ordinarily he avoided
downtown, having little patience with the perpetual congestion.  But
the space colonization recruitment office was there.  Maybe he should
have taken the bus but the fares were so high now it would have been no
saving, and it would have taken three times as long.

He paused for a moment, staring at the neon MT emblem.  Already they
were accepting applicants for emigration!  People were crowding in.

In fact there was too much of a crowd.  There was no chance for any
interview.

His time on the parking meter would run out before he got through this
line.

Scot saw a pile of pamphlets on the counter: promotional literature. He
took one and squeezed on out.

A man was in his car, hands reaching under the dash.  Or a boy, by the
stature.

"Hey!"  Scot cried, breaking into a run.  He had removed the ignition
key, of course, but today's car-thieves were smarter than the
manufacturers.  He had never thought someone would want his old
clunker, but evidently even thieves were getting desperate.

Sure enough, the engine roared into life as Scot came up.  No doubt the
thief had seen him enter the MT station and thought he would be in
longer.

Scot dived at the driver's window of the car, grabbing at the boy
inside.  He knew the thief could not move his hands effectively while
driving the car, even if he had the ignition-shorting cables clamped
already.  The reach through the window was awkward, but he got hold of
the front of the shirt and yanked.  The material ripped away.  Scot
grabbed again, desperately, trying to bring the thief up against the
car door so he could not drive.  His fingers closed on flesh and
froze.

It was a woman.

But she didn't fight with her hands.  Not directly.  She used the car.
She backed it out rapidly, and Scot was dragged along by his arm in the
window, his fingers clenched around the material of shirt and bra.9
Then his arm dragged free and he was thrown clear.  He took a hard fall
on the pavement, cracking his head.

The cool pressure of a hand on his forehead woke him.  Scot opened his
eyes, fighting off the brief pain of too-bright light.

"Hello, Mom," he said.

Mrs.  Krebs smiled.  She was 45, but looked older, "I'm so glad you're
feeling better, dear," she said.  Her hair was tinted dark to conceal
the early gray hairs, but it didn't help.  The cheap quality of the
tint had not kept the color true.10 Actually, Scot felt awful, but he
smiled back.

"I know this sounds silly but I don't remember coming here.  What
happened?"

She paused, trying to smile and not quite succeeding.  She had more
wrinkles than she used to, perhaps because of the weight she had lost.
Once she had been short and plump; now she was lean, but somehow seemed
shorter yet.  Was she developing a permanent stoop?

"I'll bring your father," she said.

Then he knew it was bad; his mother did not like to discuss unpleasant
matters openly.  In that way she resembled Fanny.  Probably no
coincidence, Scot thought wryly; no matter how they cast about, men
generally would end up marrying women like their mothers.  Or so it was
said.

Arthur Krebs came in immediately.  He was taller than his wife, and
unashamedly graying.  He was three years older, but pride kept him
young.  He too had lost weight, though he remained hearty.

"How're you feeling, son?"  He started to reach out as if to embrace
Scot, then shifted to a proffered handshake, but paused as the two
truncated fingers of his right hand came into view, and went back to
the embrace.  Either gesture was awkward, since Scot was lying down.
They settled for a brief mutual elbow-grip, and Scot tried valiantly to
hide the sudden pain the pressure brought to his bruises there.  His
right arm had been lacerated, by the feel, though obviously it wasn't
that bad.

"I don't mind telling you, you gave us a start."

"Dad, I really don't know what happened.  One moment I was on the
street, and now " Scot shook his head and felt a headache he hadn't
been conscious of before.  And now he did remember pieces of it:11
ambulance siren, the quick sting of shots or blood tests, bandages.

"Was I mugged?"

"Look at you," Mr.  Krebs said.

"Lanky, brown-haired, intelligent face " "Dad " Mr.  Krebs looked at
him penetratingly.

"And as stubborn as ever.  You really don't remember?"

"Dad, you act as if you're playing games with me.  What is it?"

"You were clutching a an item of feminine apparel."

Scot wrinkled his brow.

"A what?"

"And you seemed to have been hit by a car.  Mostly bruises and scrapes,
but your shoulder's bashed pretty bad, and you had a concussion.  Must
have been some tiff."12 "My car!"  Scot cried, remembering.

"She was stealing my car!"

His father's expression cleared.

"The woman was not an acquaintance of yours?  We were afraid " "Of
course not.  The bitch was shorting out my ignition, and I grabbed her
shirt " He smiled.

"That was some grab!"

"Evidently.  The car was insured?"

"Yes."  Scot sighed.

"For the balance due.  So I get nothing.  The payments were too high
anyway."  He looked up at his father.

"So you thought I was a rapist or something " "Nothing like that, son.
But you might have been taken in by one of those hookers " "But you
took me in anyway."  That sounded wrong.

"They said you should stay in the hospital for observation, but there
was no room.  As it is, the doctor's bills " "I've got medical
insurance too."

"That was the first thing they verified.  They said it wasn't
enough."

"That figures.  You can't get enough insurance to cover today's medical
bills.

They just keep on going up, and the policies all have limits based on
last year's obsolete averages."

"Don't we know!"  Mr.  Krebs agreed with feeling.  He spread his
hands.

"So what else could we do?"

"I appreciate it," Scot said warmly.

"But you don't have room for me here, and " His father pushed him back
down, gently.

"You can't go back to your apartment.

The bills " "Oh, no!  You mean my trust income's been attached?"  A
moderately wealthy uncle had made arrangements for the most promising
children of the family to obtain college degrees despite the expense.
It had been a godsend for Scot.

"Afraid so, son.  The medics won't even treat you these days unless
someone signs the liability waiver.  We had to do it.  We " They had
had no choice; Scot knew that.  He could not blame them.

"I can camp out at the college for a while.  My tuition's paid through
the month."  But after that, what?  The trust had been a mainstay, and
now it was gone, swallowed in one gulp by one of the serpents of the
caduceus.

Mr.  Krebs shook his head.

"You can't leave town until the court settlement."

"Court settle Oh, you mean that business about the bra."13 "We had to
keep you here.  I know this business can be cleared up, now that we
know what happened.  Maybe they can use the clothing to identify the
girl; she's probably got a police record.  But that will take time."

"So meanwhile I'm broke."  Scot shook his head, carefully.

"No car, no home, no money."

"You have a home, son.  We'll take care of you, That's what families
are for."

"What's your current income?"  Scot asked, giving his father a direct
stare.  He knew Mr.  Krebs had worked many years at the machine shop,
going from blue collar to white collar to forced early retirement. That
meant a financial situation that was un fondly termed The Squeeze. All
too apt!

"We'll get by."

"You can't afford to feed yourselves, let alone me!  Look at the weight
you've lost already!  If I had known how bad it was with you, I'd have
shunted some of my trust income to you, somehow.  And you've hocked
most of your furniture " There was no denying the bareness of the
premises.

"Fixed income, and this damned inflation," Mr.  Krebs muttered.

"How do they expect a family to live?  But we've got to take care of
our own."

"I'll get a job.  Repay you..."  But they both knew there was little
chance of that.  With three years of college, Scot had not been able to
find steady work before.  He had tried, between semesters.  There were
too many unemployed with better credits.  With a degree, he'd have a
better chance.  But that was out, now.

One condition of his trust income had been that he stay out of debt and
thanks to his accident, he was in debt now.  And even if he weren't,
the trust was gone.

If only he had had the sense to let the thief take the car!  That would
have been expensive and inconvenient, but he could have gotten by.  But
the sudden medical bills had ruined him.  He had known something like
this could happen any time, but had never really believed it could
happen to him.  There were more bankruptcies owing to medical expense
than any other category.14 There was an awkward silence.

"You had stuff in your hand," Mr.  Krebs said.

"A bra.  I know.  She must have had fun driving that car in her bare "
"No, the other hand.  Pamphlet " Scot looked at it.

"MT!  That's the start of all this!"

"Empty?"  Mr.  Krebs right eyebrow screwed up.  He had never quite
mastered the elegant lift, but he still tried it.

"Letter M, letter T Matter Transmission.  I went down to their office,
picked up this bit of paper and now I'm here."  Now, for the first
time, he had a chance to read it.

PIONEERS WANTED, the heading proclaimed.  Though he knew it was sheer
promotional jazz, Scot felt a certain thrill, and his hands shook a
little.

It described in general terms an uninhabited planet, "Conquest,"
circling the star Gienah in the constellation Cygnus.  It was 63
light-years distant.  Four small moons revolved around it, but apart
from that it was quite Earthlike.

Gravity was 1.03, slightly greater than that of Earth but hardly
objectionable.

There was more land area, less water, making the overall climate more
vigorous but so much of the land was near the equator that many more
people could settle in the mild subtropics.  Plants and animals
differed from the familiar; there were no true trees, but many tree
like species.  The animals had vague resemblances to a number of
Earthlike species, being four-footed, furry and warm-bodied.  In short,
Conquest was highly habitable.15 Scot's eyes drifted past the paper. 
He visualized settling with Fanny in a mock wood log cabin, hunting
mock buffalo for food and hides, fetching fresh spring water in buckets
formed from the huge closed seashells there.  No cars, no machines, no
pollution, just clean wilderness.  Maybe every few months a
barn-raising, celebrating with mock pumpkin pie and homemade ice
cream.

"Conquest..."

To be a genuine pioneer!  To plow virgin spring turf behind mock horses
and it would take only a few weeks to come to think of them as real
horses, and what difference did it make, since there were hardly any
genuine horses available on Earth itself for such mundane chores,
anymore?  Skid logs in the winter's snow.

To be free of the rat race!  By the sweat of one's own brow, to earn
one's own living from the soil.

"It's a pipe dream, son," Mr.  Krebs warned.

"I looked at that pamphlet.  How can you judge a new world, where
nobody's settled before?  The original Western Hemisphere pioneers
didn't have it easy; a lot of them died."

"Maybe so..."  But the vision was upon him.  He could accept a lot of
uncertainty and hazard on a distant world, if only to be free of the
certainty of this Earthly grind.

"And think of the cost," his father persisted.

"Several million dollars per person.  None of us can afford even a
hundredth of that."

The vision began to dissipate, like mist beneath the morning sun.  What
good was an unspoiled world, when there was no way to get to it?
Sixty-three light-years... "The way we have it figured," Mr.  Krebs
said, "we'll keep you a week.  Then you can stay with your brother
Tully a week.  Maybe by then " "Spread the burden," Scot agreed.  How
sad a commentary on the times, that two weeks was all they could afford
to plan ahead!

"So we won't all go bankrupt.

God, I wish I could get off this planet!"16 "Don't we all!"  An
expression of futile longing crossed Mr.  Krebs' face, surprising Scot.
He had supposed the dream belonged to him alone, or at least to his
generation.

"Now you rest and recover.  We'll get by somehow.  You can listen to
the radio, sleep just don't aggravate anything."

Scot didn't ask why he couldn't watch the TV.  He could guess: it had
been repossessed when they tried to assume responsibility for his
medical indigence.

A medical shock was a financial shock, and any financial shock was too
much.

Better to spare them the embarrassment of telling him; what was done
was done.17 "I'll rest for a while," he promised.

"I'll find some way to make it up to you."

"Of course, son."  His father stood up, smiling but not quite
concealing the tension he felt, and left the room.  The prodigal son
had returned, bringing inadvertent ruin... Scot shook his head.  There
was no question his folks wanted to help him but the mathematics of
financial solvency indicated that they could not support him without
being drawn under themselves.  The years-long depression, somehow never
reflected in official statistics but now considered normal economy,
left no leeway for frills.  Every person had to pull his own weight
even when there was no rope to pull on, no place to stand.

No wonder crime was rampant!  The woman who had stolen Scot's car had
done it in order to make her own living.  Probably she had children at
home, hungry.  All Earth was becoming a ghetto of poverty and crime.
However bad it was in this neighborhood, it was worse elsewhere.

And that very poverty, his greatest inducement to leave Earth,
prevented him from doing so.

In a bleak mood, he turned on the little radio.  It crackled as it
warmed up, showing signs of age and fatigue, but at least it was cheap
and it worked.  For fifteen minutes he listened to popular songs mixed
with ads and patter.  Perhaps by no coincidence, these things mirrored
his own concerns.  The craving for release, the desire to be free,
productive, secure; the need to establish new horizons, broader and
better than the old.

Oh, the old standby love songs were there too, but their love seemed to
be less for attractive young women and more for attractive new
lifestyles.  It was possible to learn a lot about a culture simply by
listening to its songs, its humor, and its advertising.  When the focus
was on pretty girls, Texas spending and larger cars, times were good;
now it was on marketable skills, unemployment jokes, and super gas
mileage.

Then the news.

"The Matter Transmission Agency has announced a new bonus recruiting
program.  Any volunteer found suitable for planetary colonization and
willing to revoke all his Earthly holdings will have his transport to a
new planet provided by the government."

Scot stiffened as though electrified.  Transport was free!  Well, not
exactly free but for poor people like him it amounted to much the same
thing.  He could afford to go!18 For the rest of the week, while his
body slowly recovered, Scot moved in suppressed jubilation.  He tried
to eat very little, but his folks forced more food on him, going hungry
themselves.  It was spring, but still too early for the little garden
patch in the back yard to bear, so money was their only source of food.
The excitement of the new MT program was his best medicine.

"It's one-way, son," Mr.  Krebs warned.

"If it doesn't work out, you can't come back.  You don't even get your
choice of planets; you're at the mercy of the bureaucratic process. The
decision is irrevocable, for better or worse.  There's a lot they
aren't telling us."

"I've got to check it out, though," Scot said.

"Not until you've recovered!"  his father said firmly.

"Remember what happened the last time you were downtown!"

Scot smiled ruefully.

"You win, Dad!"  And he felt a warm surge of appreciation for what his
folks were doing for him.

Fanny came to see him, dutifully, having borrowed her folks' old car.
She was very solicitous, and Scot had the nagging impression that she
was overcompensating, that she liked him better this way than in full
health.  He showed her the literature and told her about the bonus
program.

She shook her head dubiously.

"Why can't you be satisfied here?  It's probably just a gimmick to get
rid of poor people.  Better than conscription, or sending out press
gangs.  A one-way trip how do we know they're doing well?  Or that the
emigres are even alive?"

Scot paused, shaken.  His father had implied as much, but from Fanny,
who had to go with him, the objection was more compelling.

"No our government isn't a mass murderer.  And the other big nations
are setting up similar programs.  It's got to be legitimate."

"All the same, I'd prefer to meet someone who's been to one of these
fine colony-planets and returned."

They took a slow walk around the block.  It was another chill, windy
day, with snow in the air belying the season; it seemed that the very
world was becoming colder as the new ice age dawned.  Lack of adequate
clothing intensified the effect.  Fanny wouldn't even kiss him in the
open, so the emotional climate seemed as thin as the physical.  But at
least she had taken the trouble to visit him.  His excitement over the
MT program was wearing down, and he was at a low ebb, and he really
appreciated her brief presence, however restricted.

The following week Scot went to his brother's suburb-farm.  Tully Krebs
was five years older than Scot, shorter but more powerfully built, with
a sturdy wife and two children.  They were health nuts, eager to
proselytize.  Scot would not have gone there, had he any real choice.
But he had to stay somewhere while his body healed.

Tully didn't have a car.  He came on a tandem bike.  Scot mounted the
rear seat and pedaled19 until his leg-muscles went numb and his breath
rasped, while his brother seemed unaffected.

"Take it easy," Tully said.

"I know you aren't used to this, and you've been ill.  Just let your
feet go round, and I'll do the pushing."

"Thanks."  As much for the excuse as for the physical relief.  He would
not have done much better had he been in normal health.  The distance
to go was ten miles nothing in a car, but a real chore this way.  At
least it wasn't snowing!

What was there to do but put a positive face on it, as Fanny would
do?

"You know I wouldn't be here if I could avoid it," Scot said.

"But maybe I won't be with you long."  He showed Tully the MT pamphlet
as they waited at a busy intersection.  He expected the same objections
his father and Fanny had raised.

Tully only glanced at it.

"We're familiar with the program, and we approve of it.  You might say
we've been preparing for it for years."

"For years!  They only announced it ten days ago!"

"By learning how to do for ourselves.  We use bicycles instead of a
car; we raise most of our own food here on the farm; we burn wood
instead of using oil heat;

and we have a solar water heater.  I'm going to put up a windmill when
I can scrounge the materials; then we'll be almost entirely free of
commercial power."

"All those things are to save money," Scot objected.

"Lots of people do them."

"True but they'll work just as well on a wilderness world.  Probably
better.  We plan to emigrate ourselves, as soon as we can wrap up our
affairs here.  Maybe next year."

Scot stared at Tully's neck.

"You really mean it?  I thought you were the down-to-Earth one in the
family."

"Why not?  Think we want to raise our children on super-refined foods,
in a polluted environment?"

There was the health fanaticism again.  Scot turned that subject
aside.

"But their schooling " Tully laughed shortly.

"Fifty kids in a classroom built for thirty?  You call that education?
Even their up-to-date texts are way outdated in attitude.  Do you know
they still distribute General Mills propaganda directly through the
classrooms?"  His voice went into a high mimicry: "Sugar-cereal is good
for children, and especially for their dentists!"  He hawked and spat,
literally.

"Better to get 'em out in the wide open wilderness, learn about nature.
Better for all of us."

"Except for General Mills and the dentists."20 This time Tully's laugh
was wholehearted.

"Let 'em eat sugar!  No, we're going!"

Scot could have asked for no better recommendation yet now he hung
back.

"How do you know it's legitimate?  That there really are good planets
out there?  That volunteers aren't just being duped, maybe dumped in
radioactive mines or sold into slavery?"

"We don't.  The first parties will have to go on trust.  But they'll
win the best territory on the best worlds, if they win their gamble.
They'll send messages back; that won't cost much, comparatively.  In
fact, I'll bet the government provides free postage, as a publicity
mechanism.  Nothing like a satisfied customer."

"What's to stop the government from faking the messages?  Making
Hellhole IV sound like Paradise III?"

Tully sobered.

"There is that.  We both know our government is corrupt enough to do
that.  Any government is."  He pondered a moment.

"Tell you what: if you're uncertain and I don't blame you one bit I'll
send you word.  Some key only you and I know.  Maybe a nonsense word
from our childhood code: FREB if it's good, DOLP if it's bad, no matter
what the rest of the message says.  The message may be censored on the
way but if it doesn't contain one of those words, you'll know it's
fake.  How's that?"

"That's great!"  Scot agreed.  His older brother had always had a ready
way with problems.

They were cruising through a factory area.  The smog was worse here,
and unkempt men loitered.  Three young punks moved out across the road
in front of the bike as though to cut it off.  Scot quailed but he saw
Tully's shoulders hunch, the muscle bunching, and knew his brother was
staring the pedestrians down.

And the three gave way.  Scot could never have bluffed them down like
that but Tully was no bluffer.  His fists, on the few occasions he used
them, were like sledgehammers.

Suppose I had been alone?  Scot thought.  And dared not answer
himself.

The trip only took an hour, thanks to Tully's indefatigable pedaling.
Maybe there was something to be said for the healthy life; if anybody
was ready for the wilderness, it was Tully!

"You go on in; Jan's expecting you," Tully said.

"I've got to go fetch the mail."21 Not even tired!  Scot got off, and
watched his brother pedal on down to his bike shed.  Yet now Tully
looked nervous.  Why?  Scot turned and approached the house.

Janice met him at the door, her seven-year-old son Tyler peeking from
behind her skirt.

"Come in, Scot; I know you're tired."

She was not even aware of her condescension.  This was part of the
problem about being a freeloader.  Scot changed the subject as he
entered: "I hear you're going to emigrate."

She made a noncommittal sound as she closed the door.  The house was
unheated;

they were economizing on their fuel, of course, even though it was only
free wood.22 Tully was right: they were already halfway into the
pioneer mode, right here on Earth.

"Let me heat some soup for you," Janice said.

"Don't waste power for that," Scot said, half-facetiously.

She brushed back her dark hair with a callused hand.  Scot was
momentarily repelled: muscle and callus on a woman?23 And then he
thought: Is this what Fanny would look like, as a pioneer?

"No waste," she said.

"We make bouillon with our hot water."

And the hot water was free, from their solar system.  They really had
it down to a science.

"Thanks anyway; I'm not really hungry."  He sat down on a homemade
bench.  This place looked more like a workshop than a home!

"But I really am impressed that you plan to emigrate " She shook her
head.

"Tully wants to, but I'm afraid I'm not ready to make the irrevocable
commitment.  I'm just not much of a gambler.  I want to know more.  I
admit it's very tempting, but "24 The door opened and a little girl,
only four or five years old, came in.  In one hand she clutched a
ragged graham cracker; in the other she held a paper cup tied to a
length of string.  She was crying.

"What is it, dear?"  Janice inquired, kneeling down to take the child
in her arms.  The pair of them together were an inspiring sight: the
mother a well-fleshed woman, seemingly constructed precisely for
enfolding and comforting children; the daughter almost comically cute
in her misery, bearing a strong family resemblance that suggested what
the mother had looked like ten years ago.

What the daughter would look like, in ten or twelve years.25 But the
child, supported, only cried harder, her words tumbling over each other
so rapidly that nothing could be distinguished.

Then the phone rang.  Scot was surprised to discover they had one but
of course they did, for they had arranged to pick him up by phone.26
Janice tried to disengage herself, but the little girl clutched her
tightly.

"I'll get it," Scot said quickly.

It was Tully.

"Now don't make an exclamation," Tully said.

"I don't want the children to hear."

"Right," Scot said, wondering what was up.  Why should his brother
phone from in sight of the house?

"Actually, I'm glad you answered," Tully continued.

"Look I've been laid off my job at the plant.  I've been afraid of
this; been checking the mail personally, to intercept the letter."27 So
that was why he had seemed nervous!

"I want to break the news to Jan gently, without the kids.  Are they
with you now?"

Scot looked at Jan and the child.  The boy was watching him, too.

"Yes."  He could not say much more, lest he give it away.  Whatever it
was that remained to be given away; obviously they knew something was
up, already.

"I " Tully paused.

"Damn!  She's going to take this hard, and I can't hold you on the
phone while I make up my mind.  I shouldn't have called like this, but
it came as a shock even though I I mean, to have your livelihood
knocked out from under " "I understand completely," Scot said.

"Yes, yes of course you do.  Sorry.  Well, I've got to tell her
something.  Can you I mean No, of course I'll have to tell her myself.
No way out.  Put her on."

"Yes."  His brother was really shaken, for ordinarily he was a decisive
man.  Scot had never seen this weakness in Tully before, and was
embarrassed.  But he certainly did understand.  The loss of a job was
no longer a mere inconvenience;

it meant a complete change of lifestyles, and for the worse.  Far, far
easier to fall into the black hole of unemployment and deprivation,
than to climb out of it!  There were not enough jobs!28 Scot steeled
himself, then called out to Janice.

"It's Tully.  Something's come up."

"Oh, no!"  she exclaimed.

"He's been " She glanced from one child to the other, her lips
thinning.  Little lines appeared around her mouth.  She was taking it
hard, all right!

"Tyler, go upstairs and do your homework.  Jody, why don't you go
outside with Uncle Scot and tell him all about it.  I know he can fix
it."  She looked up pleadingly at Scot.

"Oh, sure," Scot said awkwardly.

"Come on, Jody I'll give you a piggy back ride."  He put out his hands,
and to his surprise she came into them, still sniffling.

"Piggy bank ride," she said.

"Piggy bank ride?"  He started to lift her, then felt his healing
bruises and had to renege.

"I forgot I was banged by a car last week, and I can't pick you up."

"That's all right," she said obligingly.29 They went outside.

"Now what happened?"

"Mona hit me," Jody said clearly.

So it was something tangible.  Already Scot felt more competent.

"Who is Mona?"

"Little girl, like me.  I took her this cracker, and she hit me."

Scot knew there was a missing element.

"Why don't we go and get her side of it?"

"All right."  He was surprised again by the child's ready agreement.
She certainly didn't seem to be difficult to get along with.  Why would
a playmate strike her?

Meanwhile, this was giving Janice and Tully time to talk, to work it
out without the children listening.  The new poverty... Jody led him
around the house, across the back yard, past assorted stacks of cut
wood and compost piles, and to a neighbor's house.  No other child was
in evidence.

"Are you sure " Scot asked gently.

"I was going to play telephone with her," Jody said positively, showing
her cup and string.  Now Scot recognized it; he had made similar
devices as a child.  A length of string was stretched tight between two
cups, so that it really did function as a crude voice-transmission
system.  A great novelty for children.

"Maybe she didn't want to play the game," he suggested.

"She did Anna didn't," Jody said firmly.

"There were two children?"  Already the ramifications were
developing.

"Anna was the one who ?"

"Mona threw sand at me and hit me."

"Mona wanted to play with you but Mona hit you?"  He knew something was
amiss.

"Yes."  Jody looked at her bedraggled cracker and began to cry again.

"I'll talk with Mona's folks," Scot said quickly.

"You're sure this is her house?"

The child nodded.  He rang the bell.

A young woman answered.

"I'm Scot Krebs, this little girl's uncle," he said.

"It seems your daughter hit her, and I'm not sure I have the whole
story."

"We prefer to let children handle their own problems," the woman said
coolly.

Scot suppressed a flash of ire.  He could see part of the problem
already.

Parents who didn't even want to know what their children were doing...
"I prefer to get the facts before taking action," he said.

The woman came out.

"Mona get over here!"

Mona turned out to be playing with another little girl of similar
size.

Reluctantly, she came.

"Why did you hit Jody?"

"She wasn't playing nice," Mona said.

Just like that, a confession.  Scot had anticipated some evasion, but
evidently the children were not that sophisticated.

"Did she hit you?"  the woman demanded.

"No..."

"Then why did you hit her?"

"Anna said to..."

"Well, you get right on into the house," the woman said severely.

"I suppose Anna felt three was a crowd," Scot suggested.  But the woman
was already going back to her house, obviously not pleased at having
been brought into this.  Probably he had interrupted a favorite TV
program.

"Let's go home," he said to Jody.  Had he done the right thing?  He had
gotten a little girl punished, but that was unlikely to improve
neighborhood relations.30 Janice was off the phone and composed when
they got back.

"What's the story?"

she inquired, evidently not eager to talk about the layoff yet, There
was a continuing tightness about her mouth that made her un pretty but
her voice was controlled.

"It seems Jody went out to play with Mona," Scot said, feeling like a
detective at the denouement of a successful case.

"But Anna didn't want to share her playmate, so instigated hostilities.
She talked Mona into hitting Jody."  A small case, but a good one; he
had solved the problem.

"The hypocrites!"  Janice said vehemently.

"Anna didn't actually do " "I know what Anna did.  We've had trouble
with her family for a long time.  We caught their boy committing
vandalism on our property, so we took him home and told them we wanted
it stopped.  We always go to the concerned party first, instead of
going roundabout or making anonymous complaints.  After that, the
vandalism got worse, and the boy started threatening and then attacking
our children.  Last time it happened we called the police, and Tully
had a confrontation with the other father that almost came to violence.
So now they don't do anything directly; they just instigate."

So there was more to it than had met his eye!

"Nice neighbors," Scot commented.

Setting one little girl on another, to "get even" for a prior complaint
the complaint being that direct action was taken to halt that family's
unsocial behavior.  Just the way a gangster would try to get even with
the police who jailed him, as though no law could apply to him.31
Janice waved one hand.

"All too typical.  Sometimes I think the whole world's like that.  We
try to raise our children to be gentle maybe we should be teaching them
how to handle guns."

She was vehement because of her distress about the layoff.  Scot could
hardly condemn that.  Now his brother was in the same fix he was but
his brother had a family to support.  Everything seemed to be crumbling
at an accelerating rate, cutting down even those who tried to help
themselves.  If Tully could be brought low by the imponderable flux of
society's economy, who on Earth could survive?32 "This is the last
straw," Janice said.

"We'll emigrate."

The neighbors could be just as bad on a colony planet, Scot thought.
And there would not be very effective police to call.  But he could
hardly blame her and anyway, it was not really the neighbors who were
driving them out.  It was Earth its entire, decaying structure.  When
the ship was sinking... "I I'd like to go with you," Scot said, feeling
a bit like a rat deserting the sinking ship he had just visualized.

"If I can talk Fanny into it."

"Call her," Janice said.

"I'm going to pack."33 So suddenly was the decision made!  But without
work, without prospects, what real chance was there?  Better to go down
fighting a legitimate wilderness, than to be chipped away by the
wilderness of Earth's deterioration.34

Fanny came, though it was evident that she had serious misgivings.
Tully picked her up on his tandem bike, because the gasoline shortage
prevented the use of her family's car.  This in itself was a bad omen:
she would not arrive in a good mood.35 They swung into the drive, and
Scot saw that Fanny was pedaling too.  There was something elegant
about the synchronous movement of their legs and the gliding motion of
the bicycle; like a canoe, it coasted smoothly to the door.  We are
bilaterally symmetrical, Scot thought.  Two arm, two eyes, two legs
things in pairs please us esthetically.  Hence the beauty of dancing
and of the bicycle built for two.  Odd he had never appreciated it
before.36 "Here she is!"  Tully said cheerfully.

Fanny dismounted with neat efficiency and nodded to Scot.  She wore a
nicely tailored riding habit complete with cap, and was so pretty he
wanted to take her in his arms right there.  But of course she would
have none of that.

Tully parked the bike and busied himself with preparations for
departure, sorting out things to store and things to dispose of.  He
had an orderly mind, and would leave the farm in good order even though
he knew he would never see it again.

Scot took Fanny in to meet Janice.  The two women shook hands
diffidently, then Janice returned to her own work.  Apparently Janice
didn't quite approve of Scot's taste in fiancees.

He showed Fanny the literature.

"Planet Conquest is the first one a giant step for mankind," he told
her.

"It's just about Earth's size, but it's mostly land, so it has much
more area to settle.  They're going to transport a million people there
in the course of the next month or so.  It costs something like a
million dollars to ship each one, but we can get it free if we act in
time.  Maybe they'll find another planet just as good, and maybe
they'll pay the pioneers' way there too but why gamble on that?  Soon
the money'll run out, and the colonization program will stop, and our
chance will be gone.  I think it's now or never and I want to go along
with Tully.  So we can stay together.  If only you'll come too!  Will
you?"

"Yes," she said.

"It's really a nice world, with deep forests and such pretty
dragonflies look at the photographs!  The soil is rich, it's never been
depleted, and there are hundreds of species of fruit trees and hardly
any dangerous animals."  He paused, something incredible sinking in.

"What did you say?"

"Yes."

"Yes, it's a good world, or ?"

"Yes, I'll emigrate with you."

Scot had been so sickly certain she would refuse, at least on the first
several importunings, that he didn't quite know what to make of this.

"You'll come with us to Conquest?"

"This becomes repetitive," she said, frowning prettily.

"Do you want me to change my mind?"37 "Oh, no, no, no, of course not! I
just thought This is great!"  He drew her over for a kiss.  She yielded
with a graceful lack of enthusiasm.  She never did like to have her
makeup disturbed; it was too expensive and time-consuming to apply.

Why she chose to use such attractants when she obviously didn't care to
have them work as intended was one of the annoying little mysteries
about her.  Were all women like that?  But at the moment Scot could not
work up much ire.

"I'll tell Tully!"  he exclaimed.

"We'll have to get married before we go.  Hey, I'm so glad you Come
on!"  He drew her along after him, like a tug towing a yacht.38 Tully
met them outside with a smile.

"I can see the news radiating from your face," he said.

"Congratulations."

"How does one proceed?"  Fanny asked him.

"We'll have to make application as two families," Tully said.

"The Tullus Krebs and the Scot Krebs families.  Then we all go for the
physical " "Physical?"  She frowned.

"To make sure we're healthy.  They don't want any contagious diseases
carried to Conquest.  That's one of the blessings of emigration: we
leave sickness behind us.  But they also need to make sure none of us
have any degenerative illnesses that might interfere with our ability
to live and work on a pioneer planet.  No failing hearts, kidneys,
lungs or brains; no cancer or leprosy.  And we have to be generally fit
able to walk several miles without collapsing.  So they will give us
the most complete physical examinations and necessary spot treatment we
can imagine.  All part of the grubstake."39 "You make it wonderfully
clear," she said, smiling as only she could smile.

"You sure do," Scot agreed.

"I'd forgotten about that disease bit.  That's halfway to paradise
already!  No more common colds, no more fevers What's another annoying
contagious disease?"

"Syphilis," Janice said, emerging from the house.

"Tully, can you help me with some boxes?  I've loaded them too full for
me to move."

"Sure, dear," he said.

"Scot, do you want to bike her back home?  You know the way."

Scot thought of the toughs they had encountered before.  How could he
protect Fanny from those?  A bicycle was so exposed, with hands and
feet occupied.  No way to run, no way to fight as if he could fight.
Yet how could he decline to see his fiancee home?

"How is your injury?"  Fanny inquired.

Actually, Scot was feeling better, physically.  But it was a legitimate
out.

"I'm not sure about my endurance," he said.40 Tully paused at the back
door.

"Oops I had forgotten about that.  With that physical coming up, you
can't afford to overextend yourself.  I'd better do it."

"I guess so," Scot agreed gratefully.  But at the same time he resented
the situation.  Having to draft his brother to take his girl home!
Tully had better things to do, and for Scot it was a wasted
opportunity.  If only he weren't such a coward about physical things...
Well, things would be different on Conquest!  He would have his full
health back, and there would be no idle toughs.  Just a beautiful
virgin planet, an almost literal heaven in the sky, where hard endeavor
would bring success and satisfaction like none available on degraded
Earth.

It seemed almost too good to be true.

The physical was every bit as thorough as Tully had predicted, and it
included psychological questioning of an uncomfortably penetrating
nature.  Scot didn't mind; he knew that this sort of selection would
eliminate the punks that he worried about on the bicycle.  No bullies
on Conquest!  He was not in top condition, but they knew he had been
injured and would recover; that was not the same as a degenerative
illness.

MT was efficient.  Three days later they received the results by mail.
No actual data; they had been advised that if they wanted the specifics
they would have to reimburse the government for them: a matter of about
$500.  "Worth it," Tully had opined.

"We have to give up everything to go, anyway.  But I'd as soon take
their word I'm healthy; I wouldn't understand the technical data."  And
Scot had agreed.  Now he heard the excited talking and entered the
living room where Tully held the notice.

"Oh mail's in?"  Scot inquired as if he hadn't known.

"Our acceptance for emigration to Conquest," Janice told him.

"There's a letter for you too."  She held it out to him.

"I would have called you, but got distracted " "Who wouldn't?"  Scot
agreed.  He tore it open, forcing himself to concentrate on the print
of the form letter that seemed to want to dance out of focus.

Greetings SCOT KREBS:

Owing to negative findings in your PERSONALITY PROFILE your application
for emigration to the colony planet CONQUEST is hereby denied without
prejudice.  You are permitted to make reapplication for authorization
to emigrate not sooner than six (6) months from this date, ameliorated
to within MT tolerance by that date.

Regrets.

[illegible scrawl] Director, Matter Transport Procurement

"Oh-oh," Tully said, reading Scot's expression.

"Bad news?"

"They rejected me," Scot said dully.  He knew he was making it sound
worse than it was, perversely; they hadn't actually rejected him,
merely postponed him.  But it was probably the same thing.  They'd
cancel the bonus plan before the time was out, and then he'd never be
able to go.

"But we were all going together!"  Janice protested with feminine
illogic.

Scot dropped the accursed notice on the table and walked out.  He
didn't mean to be impolite; he was simply numbed.  He had never
anticipated this!

He sat on the back step, the developing heat of his reaction seeming to
drive out the chill of the morning.  He knew what was responsible: that
accident report with its implied morals charge.  If only it had been a
male car thief!  That inadvertent handful of feminine apparel the bitch
hadn't even looked female, or he would not have grabbed her there!41 If
he ever encountered her again But what could he do to a woman?  She had
cost him his future, and he didn't even know who she was.  She had worn
a cap or something, concealing her hair, or maybe it had been cut
short, and her shirt had seemed straight, like a man's, not full.  He
couldn't even remember her face;

it had been entirely plain, no makeup.  He could pass her on the street
and not recognize her.  Which meant any revenge he might have in mind
was completely thwarted.  No redress at all; he couldn't even make her
testify at his trial, to exonerate him assuming she would if asked. Why
should a thief care?42 He looked at the sky.  There, behind a solitary
cloud, he fancied he could see Planet Conquest, floating serenely. 
Deep forests, huge harmless dragonflies, no pollution, illness or
crowding garden of Eden, contemporary style!

All gone, for him.

Little Jody came out, squeezing out the door sidewise so as not to bump
him with the screen.

"Aren't you coming, Uncle Scot?"  she asked, her eyes big and blue.

"Honey, they won't let me," he said.  Oddly, he could talk to this
child, when he would have been taciturn with an adult.

"But that's very sad," she said, her face puckering into the sweetest,
cutest possible expression of misery.

He put his arm around her.  A child, unversed in duplicity: what she
said was from the heart, and the way she looked was artlessly
sincere.

"Yes it is," he agreed.

He knew she would quickly and painlessly forget him, on Conquest.  But
for the moment, her grief was the comfort he needed.

And Fanny at least he still had Fanny.  The dream of a far planet would
be sterile, without her along, and Earth remained worthwhile, with her.
He could not go to Conquest with his brother, but he and Fanny could go
to some other colony planet.  His future had only been delayed, not
eliminated.

Provided the bonus plan lasted for at least six months.

It had to!

In only two hectic, glad, miserable days, Tully, Janice, Tyler and Jody
were gone, never to be seen on Earth again, and Scot had inherited the
farm.  They had taken the special train to the transport unit in
another state.

The house was silent.  It was hard to believe that he would never see
his brother or little Jody again.  Yet the separation was utterly
final, and could not be disbelieved.  Scot could not reconcile the two
feelings, and was depressed.  Is this the way schizophrenia begins?  he
asked himself.  Two mutually exclusive beliefs that split the
personality... No!  He could not let the stress of separation affect
his sanity!  It was only a dream he had been denied, and not even a
certain one; until he heard from Tully with a confirmation, an
on-the-spot progress report.  And only one dream of two.

He still had the other, still had Fanny.

He turned on the radio.  The news was of the MT program, so promisingly
launched with the first transmissions to Conquest.  Scot changed the
station, and intercepted the top new song hit: Emigrate With Me!  He
felt a pang like heartbreak and turned it off.

He picked up the phone to call Fanny, but changed his mind before
dialing.  He didn't want to tie up the phone right now.  If there were
any last-minute hitch, the line had to be open.

Maybe there'll be a mechanical failure at MT, and they'll have to delay
the Conquest program six months, he thought.  Then chided himself for
his selfishness.

When his watch said 1400 he knew they had made it.  Something let go in
him;

nothing he could do now would change what had happened.  The MT
transports were supposed to occur exactly on time, to the microsecond,
because everything had to be coordinated.  The capsule on the colony
planet was exchanged with the one on Earth, so neither crashed into a
spot where air or other substance existed; a misalignment of as much as
a second could wreck the mechanism, as he understood it.  So every
fifteen minutes meant another 256 people, day and night.  Until they
had the one million or so total for the initial colonization of
Conquest.  The figures were on all the news media, in every
conversation.  Man's giant step to the stars!

And not for him.  Almost, he would have left Fanny, to indulge in that
pioneer dream.  Almost.  He was, he realized, a man of two loves, one
romantic, the other idealistic.  Their seeming combination when Fanny
had agreed to go had been irresistible; now the half-dream that
remained to him was less than satisfying.43 That female who had stolen
his car, stolen Conquest... Yet he hoped Tully would remember to send
the message.  FREB for good, DOLP for bad, no matter what else the
letter said.  The insidious truth, lurking in one recess of his hurting
mind, was that he was a little relieved at not going.  Of course he had
wanted to go, more than anything else, but he had also been afraid it
wasn't real.  That people would actually emigrate to some hideous
fate...44 He shook his head.  No he couldn't wish that on his brother,
selfishly preserving himself!  Pray that Conquest was as bright and
wonderful a challenge as the literature implied.  Even half as good,
was good enough still so much better than what lay behind on dismal
Earth.

1415.  Now they were there, and he found he could not imagine what they
were experiencing, sixty-three light-years away.

Suddenly crowded, noisy, polluted planet Earth seemed unbearably still
and lonely.  He picked up the phone and called Fanny.  He hadn't seen
her since Tully biked her home; they had been too busy preparing for
the departure.

Her mother answered, somewhat tightly.

"Fanny isn't here.  Who's calling?"

"Scot.  Scot Krebs, her fiance."

There was a pause.  Then: "Is this a joke?"

"I don't understand."

Now her voice was angry.

"Scot and Fanny emigrated hardly fifteen minutes ago.  I don't find
your call funny."

"Emigrated!"  he exclaimed, feeling a shock as of a blow on a mental
funny bone a strange, half-ecstatic kind of pain.

"That's not so!  I failed the physical and couldn't go.  Didn't she
tell you?"

She sounded doubtful.

"If you're Scot Krebs I admit you sound like him tell me something no
one else would know."

What sort of game was this?

"Last time I was at your house, you had a headache.

Fanny was dressing, and I just had to wait.  You were wearing a red no,
it was a plaid bathrobe, and you said the coffee tasted bad.  And I
said all coffee tasted bad at the prices we had to pay for it.  And you
said "45 "All right."  He knew she was shaking her head.

"Scot, I don't know what to make of this, but our daughter emigrated at
1400.  We took her to the train ourselves, and only got back a few
minutes ago.  We we stopped for a drink.  We just couldn't This whole
thing was so sudden, our only child.  We assumed you were already in
the train " "Fanny MT'd?"  He felt dizzy.

"Yes.  She's gone.  And you " "I think I've just been jilted," Scot
said heavily.

"She left without me deliberately.  She knew I couldn't go."

"Scot, believe me we didn't know!  She never said " "I understand.  I
Good-bye."  He had to hang up.46 Fanny had sneaked off to Conquest,
thereby breaking their engagement irrevocably.  The break hurt but the
manner of it hurt worse.  Why hadn't she told him?

Scot was not a drinking man, mainly because the price of anything
alcoholic was prohibitive.  But now he wanted to get drunk, much as
Fanny's folks had felt a similar need.  Some things could not be borne
by the naked mind not in the first awful siege.

He searched through the house, but found nothing, for his brother was a
teetotaler.  Then he discovered a jug of cider, evidently forgotten in
the bike shed.  It was well-turned.  In fact, that might be the reason
it had been set out here: because it had become alcoholic.  In time it
would turn all the way to vinegar no doubt why it hadn't been thrown
out, for Tully hated waste and Janice could use vinegar.  But right now
it was excellent.

The cider didn't last long, and it didn't really make him feel any
better, and life continued unremittingly.  Scot had to eat, so he
foraged in the cellar for the stored potatoes.  He knew he would have
to eat next year too, so he tended the garden Tully had established,
blistering his hands the first day on the hoe, getting splattered with
mud as he set out the water sprinkler.  If he missed any area, the
plants wilted, and that made him feel sad in much the way the little
girl Jody had been sad: a poignant emotion that was soon remedied by
proper attention to the problem.47 He kept forgetting to start the
circulating pump on the solar water heater, and as a result had cold
water until he got himself trained.  The heater had a series of copper
pipes or tubes laid out in a glassed-in panel on the roof, the metal
painted black; the rays of the sun passed through the glass and struck
the metal, and the heat passed into the water circulating through those
pipes, enhanced by the oven effect of the enclosure.  But the natural
tendency of the hot water was to rise, and so it would stay up on the
roof unless forced down into the hundred-and-twenty-gallon tank on the
ground.  A simple system, but effective when properly taken care of.
Like the garden.48 Scot worked hard, learning through his mistakes.  He
tried to sublimate his sorrow in the heat of the effort, setting
himself daily goals.  There was a lot of work to be done around a
farm!

But the chores were dull.  He was depressed and lonely.

MT was in the news everywhere.  At first he turned off the radio
whenever the subject came up, but he needed the radio's company.  The
headlines in the daily newspaper delivered to his yard forced more MT
information on him.  So many thousands of people rushing away from
Earth every day while he had to stay behind!

Tully had saved some money, and left it with Scot.  But he discovered
that inflation was becoming logarithmic rather than linear.  MT,
supposedly the solution to the ills of overpopulation, seemed to have
the opposite effect, at least temporarily.  Prices of merchandise in
the local stores rose almost 40% in the first month after MT started,
with no letup in sight.  At this rate, money itself would soon be
worthless.

His near neighbors were caught up in the throes of it.  In a week one
family was gone; in a month, two more.  Vandals broke into the
newly-deserted houses, looting, wantonly destroying.  Some attacked
Scot's property, but he banged on the wall with a pan, making a big
noise, and they scattered.  They were only children, hardly ten years
old.  Not even worth notifying the police, who were so busy with
serious calls that they no longer responded to minor ones like burglary
or assault.

Then the lights went out.  Too many people had moved out; it was no
longer economical to maintain the lines in the face of the vandalism
and attacks on linesmen.  This was the fringe of suburbia; a few blocks
farther in, power was being maintained.  Just a necessary, minor,
temporary adjustment, the company's polite note explained.  Until the
economy stabilized, and it became economically feasible to expand
services again.

Minor?  No lights and no hot water, for now the electric pump was
defunct.  No refrigerator.  No radio.  It was a major change in the
local lifestyle!  Scot's remaining immediate neighbors moved out
hastily, finding lodging with relatives or merely taking over the homes
of emigres within the power zone.  This was not legal, but in practice
squatters' rights prevailed.  The police ignored it, so long as things
were quiet.  Within a week, Scot was alone on his block.49 Fortunately
Tully had laid in kerosene lamps and many gallons of kerosene.  One
lamp was a beautiful circular-wicked affair with a mantle: a little net
that glowed in the flame and magnified it into a pure white light. Scot
liked it;

this really was as good as an electric bulb!50 The hot water was more
difficult.  Scot made a labor-exchange deal with a neighbor in the next
block, and the man helped him get the solar collector unit down off the
roof.  On the ground it was lower than the water storage tank, so that
when properly connected the heated water rose to collect in the tank.
This was a more primitive, natural system, and completely automatic.
Not as much direct sun reached the ground, however, so the water was
not as hot.  It didn't matter; when really cold, he lit a fire in the
fireplace and stayed there admiring the brilliant embers, feeling a
certain comfort.  Man had always admired fire!51 At first he read books
by lamplight, but he soon decided to conserve fuel and shifted to
daytime activity.  At night he washed in the dark and brooded.  What
was all this coming to?

And he had an answer of sorts: it was coming to the same thing Earth
was.

Regression, loss of technology, of the standard of living.  At least,
out here in the sticks.  A temporary effect, of course; every advance
in technology brought concurrent layoffs and failures in outdated
systems, and MT was probably the biggest advance in man's history.  But
for him, left out of it, it was inconvenient and annoying.  He was like
the candle makers when electricity spread:

a depressed industry.

But perhaps the candle makers would have the last laugh... His phone
was disconnected: economic reasons, again.  It hardly mattered;

telephone rates had tripled since MT.  It was as though the city were
trying to make him move out.  But he refused, obstinately.52 One
evening there was a knock on the door.  Scot felt for the hammer he
kept in his pocket, just in case; one could never tell, these days.  He
opened the door.

A black-haired beauty stood without.

"My car broke down, and I don't care to spend the night outside," she
said.

"I'd like some food, a bath, and a place to sleep.  I'll wash dishes or
whatever."  She spoke rapidly, as though it were a memorized spiel.53
"You're alone?"  Scot asked, taken aback by her abrupt approach.

"I am."

"So am I," he said.  Then, to alleviate the awkwardness: "The rest in
this house emigrated."

"So did my family."  Her speech was more natural now.  She stood there,
awaiting his decision.

"Oh.  Sure.  Come in, if you " "It's all right?"  she asked.  Her
attitude reminded him of the time Fanny had agreed to come to Planet
Conquest; he had reacted much the same way.54 "Well, there are
neighbors down the street with women in the house, I mean.  I thought
you'd rather..."  He was not certain he was doing the right thing.  A
woman could be every bit as dangerous as a man, as his car theft
episode showed.

But the house was so eerily silent by itself!  He had lived alone
before, but now that it was by necessity instead of choice it was much
less comfortable.  Quite apart from the more primitive conditions. He'd
have to take the risk.

"Thanks."  She entered.

"I'm Wanda."

"Scot."  She hadn't given her last name, so he didn't either.  Maybe
that limited anonymity was best.

"I tried several other houses," Wanda said, explaining almost as an
afterthought.

"The women were worse than the men."

"Oh."

"I know what you're thinking," she said.

"Why would a woman come into a lone man's house, unless she wasn't what
she seemed?  But I'm really not the advance scout for a raiding party.
And you were just here, not out looking.  So the chances are you're
safe.  But it's no great risk for me there isn't anything I have that
you'd want.  I'm broke."  She took off her jacket, and he saw that it
was dirty and worn.

"Except maybe one thing and I suppose I'd rather make a gift of that
instead of having it taken if that's the way it has to be.  Just so I
can sleep easy."55 Her gesture and her manner expressed her offer more
clearly than her words: the way she thrust out her bosom momentarily
and tilted her head.  Yet obviously it was desperation that motivated
her.  Hunger, not sexuality.  Even the curls of her hair seemed
listless, fatigued.

"That that won't be necessary," Scot said.

"There's nothing fancy to eat.  Potatoes, bread " "Food of the gods!"
she exclaimed.

"Look, I meant it about washing dishes, or whatever else I can do.  But
right now I'm so tired " "Sit down," he said quickly.

"I've got some potato left from supper.  I wasn't very hungry " "It's
hard being alone," she agreed, collapsing on the couch.

"Little things get scary, stupid things."

"Yes."  She understood!

"It's worse out in the car.  And no facilities."

He brought her the potato, and she ate it quickly.

Now it was almost too dark to see.

"Power's off in this district," he said, though he was aware he didn't
have to apologize for it.

"I have a kerosene lamp, but I don't like to use it unless it's an
emergency.  Not much fuel."  Actually he had plenty, but he didn't know
how long he would have to make it last.  Probably months, perhaps
years.  Too precious to waste.

"I understand."

"The bathroom's there," he said, pointing.

"We still do get water, so the toilet flushes okay.  Why don't I just
go upstairs, and you stay down here.  Until morning."

"Thanks."  She looked and sounded so grateful he was glad he had let
her in.  But as he mounted the stairs, he wondered: would she be there
in the morning?  How much of the furniture would be gone, too?

She was weary and travel-dirty but she was a remarkably good-looking
woman.

Thief or enemy she just might be, but the thought of her in the house
banished his loneliness.  This was an exciting event, in its way; a
change in his circumstance, a human contact.

She was still asleep on the couch in the morning, one slender white arm
hanging down to touch the floor, a strand of black hair doing likewise.
She had drawn an old tablecloth over herself as a sheet blanket warding
off the chill of night.

Nothing had been taken.56 Scot was immensely relieved.  Apparently
Wanda was what she said she was: a girl whose car had broken down.

He checked around the farm outside.  Everything was in order.  He saw a
stalled car down the street, one that had not been there before.
Wanda's?57 He walked down and checked it.  In the dash compartment was
a registry in the name of Wanda Stacey, and several spent candy
wrappers.  In short, she was legitimate.

He walked back slowly.  He had not gone out recently and really looked
at the neighborhood.  Now he was astonished at the thoroughness of its
decadence.  There were no moving cars on the streets, and all the
houses were deserted.  The power company had retreated another stage,
so that more blocks were being demobilized.

Like a blight, the dead fringe ate toward the vital center of the city.
Weeds overgrew the lawns and sent runners over the curbs.

The human and mechanical silence was abated by increased trilling of
birds.  Not all creatures were leaving!

The sunrise was brilliant, owing to the reduced pollution.  There was
an unaccustomed lightness to his step.

She was up when he returned.  She had cleaned up, and now that she was
rested she looked even prettier than before.  She was, as promised,
washing the dishes.

"Your water's not too hot," she remarked.

"It's solar heated," he explained.

"I guess you had a shower last night, and that diluted the hot water,
so it's lukewarm this morning.  That's one of the things about solar
can't recharge it at night."

"Oh I'm sorry.  I didn't realize.  I assumed you had an oil heater or
something."

"Doesn't matter.  It'll heat today, and the heat's free.  No point in
having it if we don't use it.  And it's always possible to heat some
extra hot in a pan over the fire.  Plenty of wood to burn."

She kept her eyes on the dishes.

"You thought I'd be gone with the silver," she said.

"Well " "I'm surprised you let me in.  And more surprised you let me
sleep."

Scot shrugged, though she was facing away and could not see the
gesture.

"You're wondering why a pretty woman's on the loose," she said.

"Well " "I'm wondering too.  I should have stayed with my family."

Scot didn't know what to say, so he remained silent.

"How do you live?"  she asked.

"It's my brother's place.  He laid up supplies for the winter, more
than enough.

So it's lasting through spring.  When that runs out I hope the garden
comes in."58 "I saw the garden last night," she said.

"That's one thing that made me choose this house.  Aside from the fact
that it was obviously occupied.  A gardener well, he's doing something
positive, not out looting the neighborhood."

"Yes."  Her attractive appearance made him self-conscious and dimmed
his conversational ability.

"You ever steal?"

"What?"

"I have.  Food from a store.  Candy bars, mostly easy to grab,
concentrated.  I had to eat.  I was ashamed, and I left money but
money's not much good anymore.  So it was stealing."

"Oh.  No.  I haven't needed to."59 "I hoped things would be better
somewhere else.  Anywhere else.  But I ran out of gas.  Is there a
station around here?"

"Yes.  But I don't think they have any gas."

"And I can't pay for it anyway.  So where do I go?"

"Home," he said.

"My folks sold the house to pay off their debts.  I was going to
emigrate with them, but I just couldn't.  So I inherited the car."

"Couldn't?"  he asked, interested.  Had she been caught as he was?

"Something about that step the hugeness of it.  I passed the physical
and it was all set up, but at the last minute " She made a gesture as
of dropping something on the floor.

"The sheer immensity of space, of actually leaving, not my home, but my
home planet.  All my roots, historical, paleontological, right back to
the slime primeval I am of Earth.  I couldn't leave it, any more than a
fish can leave the water."

"Some fish did leave the water," he said.

"They became the amphibians, the reptiles " "And eventually Man.  I
know.  But most fish stayed in the water, and they are there today. I'm
a stay-in-the-water fish.  Some people can't fly.  Some can't use
elevators.  I can't emigrate.  So I balked, and now of course I'm on
the MT blacklist.  When you're called you go or else.  And I dropped
it."

"Oh."  It was not a feeling he could understand.

"Emiphobia, I guess you'd call it.  Fear of emigration.  So I stayed,
and now I'm alone.  I thought I could find something, somewhere else
far pastures, you know.

Not too far, of course.  But my gas ran out in more ways than one.  The
whole Earth's depleted, for me."

"I wanted to go," Scot said.

"But there was a a legal complication.  So I missed the deadline.  I'll
still go once that's cleared up."

"Bon voyage," she murmured.  Then she squared her shoulders as she put
the last dish in the rack.

"What I'm trying so ineffectively to suggest is considering it's bound
to be temporary anyway, until you MT is why don't I just stay here?

There's a lot I can do around a farm, and you treated me decently, and
" "All I did was leave you alone!"

"That's what I said.  You're a decent guy.  And I'm a decent girl, when
I have a chance to be.  I Suddenly I just can't face going out there
again.  When I stop to ask for gasoline or food, you know what's the
first thing the attendant thinks of?"

"I can guess."

"Men don't leave me alone.  I used to like that, to play on it.  Before
MT.  Now it's a liability.  And I I've got to live, somehow.  Do I have
to spell it out more bluntly?"

"No."  He was uncomfortable with this dialogue.60 "I'll be a
housekeeper to you, servant, wife whatever you say.  On a temporary
basis.  You only have to be gentle."  She glanced up abruptly.

"Or are you married?"

"My fiancee emigrated without me."

"Yes.  You have that aura about you.  You're chastened."61 She leaned
against the sink, appraising him.

"I think I'd be as well off here as anywhere.  Better, most likely. And
maybe I could sleep without being afraid."

She dropped her eyes.

"Am I embarrassing you?"

"No," Scot said, feeling the flush on his face.  He had not really
believed she was serious.  Her suggestion appealed, however.  Quite
possibly he was seeing the best of her now, as she made herself
appealing in order to obtain a home for whatever duration she chose.
She might be obnoxious when he got to know her, or lazy a pretty girl
who was used to having others wait on her.  But perhaps not.

"I'd settle for company and sharing the work," he said.

"I wouldn't I don't believe in " "I knew you'd say that," Wanda said.

"That's why I'd like to stay.  I'm so desperate I'll do just about
anything for security but I'd rather just be me.

I'm really pretty good company.  I mean, I can maintain my end of a
conversation or I can listen well, and I never fight."

"Sure.  Stay," Scot said, hoping again that he wasn't making a mistake.
Yet if he were not ready to extend trust, what hope was there?

It was, after all, that simple.  Wanda turned out to be an unmitigated
blessing.

She cooked, she washed dishes, she cleaned up the house, she helped
with the gardening and she was excellent, talkative company who could
indeed, as represented, shut up when silence was called for.  She
really knew how to get along with a man, and this was a much broader
thing than simple sex appeal.  In fact, after the first day, she
dressed in such a way as to de-emphasize her physical attributes.

She moved into Jody's room, and in two days it was as though she had
always been there.  Scot was aware that his hurt at the loss of Fanny
was abating, to be replaced by pleasure with Wanda's company, and that
didn't bother him.  Of course it would be some time before the process
was complete, and he tried to prevent himself from going into any
uncontrolled rebound.62 He received a letter from Tully, telling of the
wonders of Planet Conquest, and in that missive was the key word: FREB.
So it was true the colonization program was genuine.  Fat lot of good
that did him now!  No date had ever been set for his hearing on the
auto theft case; the courts were glutted with more important cases.63
The mails discontinued soon after that, cutting him off further.  The
sewer system blocked up and they couldn't unblock it; apparently there
was some massive obstruction in a main pipe somewhere under the street,
perhaps blocks away.  They had to remove the toilet seat and set it on
a bucket.  Every day Scot emptied the thing into the compost heap and
covered it over with dirt.64 His parents emigrated to a planet named
Heather.  Scot was glad for them, and tried to suppress his jealousy.
He was now alone on Earth; no near relatives left.65 Newspaper delivery
stopped.  The nearest supermarket shut down.  That hardly mattered; he
could no longer afford to shop there anyway.  The area schools were
consolidated into one massive and distant unit; fortunately Scot had no
children.  But the depletion of this region was spurred on by this. The
two million emigre mark passed, and the three million.

But spring was advancing, and the garden was growing.  Soon they would
have lettuce and radishes.

Scot stood and stared at the lettuce, impotently furious.  A third of
the row had been chewed off to ground level by some predator of the
night.  A number of the leaves had simply been gnawed off and left to
wilt.

"Hunger I can understand," he muttered.

"But this wanton waste !"

Actually, he had suspected something of the sort before.  Early
radishes were supposed to be ready in a month, but somehow they hadn't
been.  Evidently something had been whittling down their leaves, so
that instead of forming good roots they wasted their effort on new
foliage.  Tully's lettuce had died off;

Scot had supposed he hadn't watered it enough, but now he realized that
a more active agent was at work.66 He stomped back into the house.

"It's the slugs and caterpillars," Wanda said.

"I used to find them in my flower garden.  Only thing to do is douse
the lettuce in poison, kill 'em off and that's hard to do.  They're
tough."

"But we have to eat that lettuce," he protested.

She chewed her lower lip.

"That's right.  Can't spray or powder lettuce.  I remember now.67 But I
sure don't like just handing it over to the bugs.  I don't want to seem
ungrateful, but I'm getting tired of thawed potatoes."

Scot stewed over it.  He was tired of potatoes too.  He had put a lot
of work into that lettuce.  When that crop was wiped out, it wasn't
just food, it was all his prior labor, all his expectations.

"I've got to do something!"

Wanda pondered.

"Maybe ambush 'em?"

"Ha ha," he said sourly.

"I'm serious.  Take out the lantern, wait quietly then turn it on and
catch the bugs at work.  Stomp 'em.  That'll cost you sleep, but it
should save the lettuce and it'll be satisfying."

"Hey, yes!"  The solution was so obvious he was chagrined to have
missed it before.

That night he did it.  In one way it seemed a lot of trouble for
nothing.  But he simply could not let a bug get away with his crop.
Apart from the relief of the monotony of potatoes, he wanted some of
the lettuce to carry through to seed, so he would be able to plant a
new crop next year.  He had no other certain means of obtaining seeds,
and wasn't sure whether seed saved for more than a year would
germinate.  And there were many other vegetables growing; the lettuce
merely showed the ravages first.  His whole garden, ultimately, was at
stake.

He found a place, in sight of the lettuce but not too close.  He spread
his poncho on the ground and lay down.  He wore some repellent so that
he would not have to swat mosquitoes.  This entailed the risk of
repelling the garden predators also, so that he would not catch them in
the act, but of course if repellent did the trick he could leave some
near the lettuce and save it that way.  So it was a worthwhile project.
He intended to be absolutely silent.

He worried he might fall asleep and muff the effort.  But lying there
under the night sky he found there was no danger of that.  The stars
were brilliant, and now with the elimination of local pollution he
could make out the great Milky Way.  How often at night, when the
heavens are bright, he thought, singing silently the final verse of
Home on the Range with the light of the glittering stars, Have I stood
there amazed and asked as I gazed, If their glory exceeds that of
ours?68 Where was Gienah, the sun of Conquest?  How was Tully doing,
and Janice, and Tyler and little Jody, sixty-three light-years distant?
And Fanny?

Suddenly he wanted to charge back into the house and make love to
Wanda.  Not from any overwhelming passion for her, attractive as she
was, but to erase the pain of Fanny's desertion.  Wanda would do it, he
was sure, if he asked her.

But there would be no true relief there.  He would only be dragging
Wanda into his misery, and she was too nice a girl for that.  Let her
be clean.

Strange, that he had always wanted to seduce Fanny, who was
unseducible, yet balked at approaching Wanda, who was approachable.
What did this indicate about these two girls or about himself?  What
kind of double standard did he Scot's thoughts cut off.  He heard
something.  Not a bug.

It was an animal or person: massive, clumsy.  It skulked around the
house, keeping to the shadows.  Scot's heartbeat accelerated.

Now it occurred to him that he had been perilously trusting.  He had
slept inside, fearing no evil so long as his doors were locked.  The
presence of Wanda had added to that feeling of security.  But the house
was hardly secure.  Anyone or anything could bash in the windows and
how would he and Wanda protect themselves?  Here, from the outside, he
appreciated how vulnerable the property was.69 They would have to put
up a fence, he decided.  Or at least an alarm system.  Trip wires,
noise-makers anything to warn him or Wanda, so that the two of them
would never be caught asleep.

The prowler approached the garden and now, in the starlight, he made it
out:

human.

The stranger could be up to no good.  Otherwise he would have
approached openly, by daylight, as Wanda had.  What did he contemplate
setting fire to the house?

Terrified by what he knew were exaggerated conjectures, Scot lay still
and watched.  And finally the prowler left.

He lay still for several minutes, making sure he was alone, letting his
heart subside.  At last he lit his lamp and checked the lettuce.

Several fat slugs were in it.

He picked them out with his fingers.  They coalesced into greater
thickness, exuding slime that disgusted him, but he put them in a bag
and dumped the bag into the garbage can, setting the lid on tight.  Of
course there was no longer any garbage collection, but it would do for
storage until morning, when he could decide what to do with them.  Take
a slug, he thought, expand it to one-ton size, and lo!  a horrendous
repulsive alien monster.  All in the viewpoint.

Then he checked the area where the prowler had been.  Sure enough,
there were footprints in the dirt.70 What to do?  He could not ignore
it.  Tonight it had been harmless but perhaps this was just a scouting
mission.  Now the stranger knew the layout, knew the farm was
unguarded, open to attack.

Scot went inside, prepared to wake Wanda, but she was waiting for
him.

"It made me nervous, you alone out there, me alone in here," she said.
Her face was deeply shadowed in the wavering lantern glow, and
extremely lovely.  She had a small mole on the side of her chin, but
excellent cheekbones.71 "I kept hearing noises what were you up to?"

"There was a prowler," Scot said.  He rinsed his hands in a basin of
water, but the slime clung, refusing to wash off.  Next time he'd have
to use something to pick off the slugs, not his bare fingers.

She sat down suddenly.

"Douse the light!"

"Don't worry.  He's gone now."  But he turned the wick low, cranked
open the lantern, and blew out the flame.  The fire flared up as if in
protest before expiring in a burst of smoke.  Symbolic of what?  he
thought, as the odor of unconsumed oil spread outward.  His love for
Fanny, snuffed out but smoking yet?

"We've been too trusting," Wanda said, echoing his own thoughts.

"We figured nobody would bother us if we didn't bother them.  But times
are changing, and people are desperate.  All the best ones are going
the MT route, so what's left are the crazed and the criminal."

"You aren't," Scot said, still laboring over the resistive slime.

"I'm not."

"I mean the proportions are changing.  The odds are getting worse every
day that passes, especially here in the hinterland.  Maybe once we
could assume a stranger was most likely okay, but now we can't risk
that courtesy.  We've got a good little farm going here, and " She
paused.

"I mean you have.  I didn't mean to presume."

"We have," Scot said.

"It stopped being lonely when you came."

"Well, you know what I mean.  It's your farm; I'm just a boarder."  But
she sounded pleased.

"Anyhow, if somebody's scouting us out, it means trouble."

"That's the way I see it.  What should we do?"

"If we start standing guard, we'll both be worn to a frazzle in a few
nights and it'll interfere with the farming.  That's no good."

"How about an alarm system?"  he inquired.

"I wondered about that myself.  Seems good, if we can figure out one
that'll work.  But I think a good scout'd know how to get around
anything amateur.  We really need to get rid of the " She broke off,
and he knew why.  How would they get rid of the intruder?  Club him on
the head?  Scot had little stomach for it and might get clubbed
himself.

"A deadfall!"  Wanda exclaimed.

"Dig a big pit, cover it over right where he was walking tonight. Might
not kill him, or even hurt him, but then he'd know this was no
pushover.  In fact we could booby-trap the whole place.  Be better than
a guard-dog though that's an idea too."

"Yes..."  Scot said, glad for her ingenuity.72 "We'll both work on it
tomorrow," she said.

"I'll feel so much better."

They went upstairs, cautiously in the dark.  Wanda felt her way to her
room, but paused at the door.  He could just make out her shadow in the
faint light from her window.

"Scot ?"

"Yes?"  He paused at his own door.

"I Don't get me wrong.  I don't want to sleep alone tonight."

"I'm shaken up too.  Really nothing's happened, but " "Could I put a
blanket on the floor in your room?"

"You can have my bed.  I'll sleep on the floor."

"I knew you'd say that.  But that wouldn't be right.  I We could share
the bed, but " She made an exasperated sound.

"I can't say what I want to say!  I want company it's not just the
prowler, it's the whole situation.  I don't know what the future holds,
and I'm frankly scared.  I had begun to be reassured, but this prowler
It seems my confidence was just a thin veneer, and now one little tap
by fate has shattered it."

She expressed his own qualms so well!

"Me too."

She took a breath in the dark.

"If sex would make it all right, maybe we should get it over with. Then
there wouldn't be any question of propriety if that matters anymore."

Scot thought again of Fanny, who had always held him off... until she
decamped via MT.  He had been going over this same subject when the
prowler interrupted his thoughts.  Perhaps he had pushed Fanny because
he knew she would balk a kind of subtle gamesmanship, establishing his
masculinity by her resistance.  Wanda wasn't that type, and the notion
of sex with her was exciting.  But that would change their
relationship, and he needed to think about that more carefully.

"I don't want to insult you," he said.

"I like you.  I like you a lot, Wanda.  But I'm on the rebound, and I I
have this philosophy, if that's the word.  I don't want sex unless I'm
ready to marry " "Marry!"  she exclaimed.

"Now that wasn't what " "I know.  And I know it sounds stupid.  I don't
want to debate it.  So I'd rather just sleep on the floor.  Tonight."

"It isn't stupid," she said after a pause.

"You're one of those guys who won't settle for half a loaf."

"I guess so.  I never thought of it that way, and maybe I wasn't that
way before.

I can't claim to understand myself, really.  But I do know about being
lonely and afraid."

"I have a lot of respect for that kind of guy.  I haven't met many.
I'll be back in a moment with the No, wait.  Can't put my blanket on
the floor for you.  Not that there're germs or anything you haven't
already been exposed to " "It's all right."  He was surprised and just
a bit dismayed by his own expressed code.  Did he mean it, or was he
merely posturing, affecting sentiments because they sounded noble?  How
much of a hypocrite was he?

"It's still not right," she insisted.

"You've got a double bed.  It's big enough no, don't interrupt me,
Scot!  big enough for both of us.  I'll just share it with you.  If you
just sleep on your side of it, that's fine, and I won't bother you.  If
my being there I have been with men before, when I was hungry enough,
you know that, and they couldn't hold a candle to you no pun!  If you
change your mind, I'll understand.  I'm not pro positioning you!  I'm
just saying I know it's not right to lead you on by getting close at
night, and I'll go right along with whatever you want.  No
recriminations, no talk of marriage.  I I don't make a commitment like
marriage unless I mean it, and even then I'm not sure I could.  I mean,
if I couldn't MT, maybe I'd balk at marriage, too.  I don't know.

I'm like you, I guess.  I won't lie to you by promising anything I
can't deliver.

I like you, Scot.  I don't love you.  Maybe someday I will, but not
tonight.  I just want to know I can reach out and there'll be someone
there to touch.

Someone I know, someone I trust.  Do you understand?"

"Yes, I understand."  And to his surprise, he did.  She drew the line
at a different place than Fanny had, but it was as real a line.  Fanny
had evidently found the sexual commitment more formidable than the
marriage commitment; Wanda reversed it.  Scot differed from both of
them in that he considered both commitments to be linked, inseparable.
But rationally, Wanda's way made sense to him.  She would not make any
promise she wouldn't keep.  And she, unlike Fanny, regarded love as
sacred.  If Wanda ever said she loved him, she would mean it
absolutely.

"I'm not sure you do," she said.

"You're generous, so you'll go along with me.

But you don't comprehend my failing.  I just can't make the really
important commitments, MT, marriage, or anything.  I could go common
law, knowing I could break it off any time " "No."

"Anyway, that's the root of it.  I'm sorry."

"Maybe some day you'll make it.  An important commitment, I mean.  Any
important commitment."

"You do understand!  Yes, maybe some day."  And so she came in her
nightgown, and she slept beside him.  Somewhat to his surprise, Scot
found he was able to sleep, too.  The truth was, he wanted what she
wanted: a companion.  Someone to touch when reassurance was needed.
That sufficed.

As he drifted off, conscious of her beside him, grateful to whatever
Power there might be that they had been able to work it out without
sacrificing anything either valued, he recalled something she had said
passingly.  About not having any germs he hadn't already been exposed
to.  This brought him one of his quiet revelations: he had sought
emigration in part because he wanted to be free of the perpetual risk
of illness.  Any sick person could transmit his disease, and there was
no effective protection against the annoyance of the common cold or
related bugs.  But the depopulation of this region had greatly reduced
personal contacts, and so eliminated most of his exposure to such
illness.  One of the things he desired in an alien world had been
granted him right here on Earth..."73

Next day they constructed the deadfall.  Scot started digging while
Wanda gathered light boards and an old tarpaulin for the cover.  When
he grew tired, she took her turn digging.  She was soon perspiring, and
her blouse stuck to her sides.  Scot appreciated anew what a splendidly
proportioned creature she was, and wondered whether he had done right,
last night, in leaving her alone.  This was, after all, a changed
world, and the old standards hardly applied.

She paused, looking up at him.

"I bet I know what you're thinking, Scot!"

He shrugged, embarrassed.

"That's what's so great about you," she continued.

"You're a normal male.  It wouldn't mean anything if you weren't.  You
have a marvelous discipline, and that makes you more of a man than if
you didn't, if you see what I mean.  So look all you want.  I'm sort of
proud of it, and of you."74 He had to smile, though this forwardness
embarrassed him.

"You're very easy to get along with, Wanda."

"I know it."  And she laughed silently, through her nose, and pitched
up a shovelful that almost landed on his feet.

"See, I make the pitch, but you don't get dirty."75 Scot was beginning
to wonder what he had even seen in Fanny.  Wanda was just as smart and
just as pretty and she had so much more character.  And she gave him
credit for a strength of character he really didn't have; his actions,
or lack of them, derived from a mishmash of uncertainty and hesitation,
not discipline.

As she probably knew.  She really did have the secret of getting along
with people: constant flattery.

It was a grueling job, for the pit had to be deep enough to be
effective.  It took all day, and at the end of it they were worn out,
with wrappings around their blistered palms.  But when they gingerly
spread the last shovelful of dirt over the tarp and sprinkled dry weeds
over it, it looked just like a newly prepared patch of garden.

"That's great!"  Scot said.

"Now let's collapse."

She studied it.

"Suddenly I'm not sure it's enough.  It might just make him mad, and
then there'd be real trouble."

Scot sighed.  She would think of that now.

"But what else is there to do?"

"We have rope.  We could make nooses, and tie him up before he gets
out."

"He might tie us up."

"Not if we dropped the noose over him fast, and pulled.  Like a calf.
Did you ever rope a calf?"

"Never."

"Neither did I."  She spread her hands.

"I admit it's a risk but I think now that letting him get away, without
our even knowing who he was or what he intended that would be a greater
risk."

Scot shook his head, baring his teeth in frustration.

"I think you're right.  But I'm no hero the thought of physical
violence frightens me."

"Me too.  Maybe we should forget the whole thing."

"No, I don't think we can afford that, either.  We'll just have to go
through with it."

She caught his muddy hand.

"Would you mind if I kissed you?"

That startled him.

"Yes, I would mind.  I'm tired and scared and dirty and " "Shy?"

"It's not that.  I " Wanda drew herself up to him, tilted back her
head, and kissed him on the cheek.

"So am I," she said.  Then she went off to find the rope.

How had she meant that?  That she was also tired and dirty, or also
scared, or also shy?  Or all of them?  Did it matter?  If he didn't
watch it, Scot decided, he would very soon fall in love again.  On the
rebound, despite his best intentions.

And was that so bad?  Romeo, as he recalled, loved Juliet on the
rebound.

And both lovers had died.

They brought out the poncho and lay down together in sight of the
deadfall.  They did not talk, afraid that would alert the prowler.
Wanda brought out a bowl of potato salad that she had fashioned
artistically from the unspoiled pieces of potatoes, spices, and early
collard leaves.  It was very good, and so was the lukewarm water they
had to use in the absence of refrigeration.76 The sounds of the
neighborhood faded:77 a distant dog barking, several cars that had
gasoline from somewhere probably the black market that now flourished
voices talking.  About half the neighbors within a radius of half a
mile had moved out, and the process was ongoing.78 Wood fires and
outdoor privies had become the rule; a number of the nearby houses had
been dismantled for these purposes.  Scot had laid claim to the houses
nearest him, saving one intact as a future barn.

This whole area was now a staging place for the uncommitted: those who
weren't sure when or whether they would emigrate.  Few now believed
that it would ever return to municipal status; the effects of the
depopulation were too pervasive, too far advanced to be reversed.

The longer he lay there, the more certain Scot became that there would
be no prowler tonight.  After all, the man had already scouted this
farm.  Why should he come again except for business?  In that case, it
would be with a gun, or henchmen... Wanda put her hand on his and
squeezed gently.  This was immensely reassuring.  He was not alone; the
two of them faced the problem together.

And if the prowler did not come then there was no risk.  That was
really best.

They would have risen to the challenge, and the challenge would have
defaulted.

The air cooled.  Wanda had brought out a blanket, and now she spread it
out over them both.  She inched in close to him, sharing her body heat.
The wait became more comfortable.

A crash woke him.  Disoriented, Scot scrambled to his feet and stumbled
over Wanda, hunched beside him.  They wrestled with each other for a
moment before realizing their error.  He shouldn't have fallen
asleep!

"Tie him!  Tie him!"  Wanda screamed, thrusting the rope into his
hands.

"I can't see him!"  he protested.

But he could hear!  Someone was thrashing in the deadfall.  Scot took
the noose in both hands and flung it over the sound, then hauled it
tight.  There was a high-pitched exclamation.  The rope jerked and Scot
lost his balance and slid blindly into the deadfall.

Now he was in for it!  Desperation gave him strength.  He still held
the rope in his hands.  He grabbed on to the prowler and tried to wrap
the rope about him.

The man struggled, but Scot hung on, moving that rope.  He was afraid
that if he didn't get the man immobilized, the man would stun or kill
him.

Something raked him down the cheek.  A fingernail!  Scot grabbed the
arm and tried again to loop the rope about it.  But in the dark it
didn't work, and finally he just hugged his opponent to him with all
his strength.  If it worked for bears Light flared.  Wanda had lit the
storm lantern.  Scot hung on, hoping that Wanda would know what to do
next.  He didn't!

"Say it's a girl!"  Wanda exclaimed.

Scot looked, startled.  Sure enough the face was beardless, and the
body soft.  It was a young woman, and she seemed to have lost
consciousness.

He let go.  The girl collapsed.79 "Bring her up here," Wanda said.

"I think she's hurt."

That was all he needed: to have hurt a girl!  Scot unraveled the rope
as well as he could and picked her up.  She was not heavy.  He heaved
her to his shoulder, then half-shoved, half-rolled her to the ground
beyond the pit.  Then he scrambled out himself.

"She's breathing," Wanda said.

"I don't think anything's broken.  We'd better take her into the
house."

Scot picked up the girl again and carried her, following Wanda's
lantern.  He laid her down on the living room couch.

Wanda got a basin and a cloth and washed off the girl's face. Watching,
Scot felt an elusive shock of recognition but it faded as he
concentrated on it.  Had he seen this girl before or merely someone
vaguely similar?  Probably the latter, certainly he didn't know her.

She was not an attractive girl.  Her face was acne-scarred under the
mask of dirt, and her hair was mousy.  She was almost flat-chested,
though that was perhaps the effect of the position.  No buxom beauty
like Wanda, certainly!

"Skinny as a rail," Wanda remarked.

"She hasn't eaten well.  Must've been scouting for food, afraid to ask
for it."

"And we set a deadfall for her," Scot muttered.

"There was no way to know," Wanda said sharply.

"And hungry females can be just as dangerous as men."

The girl turned her head and sighed.  She was coming to.

"Take it easy," Wanda said to her.

"Can you sit up?"

Suddenly the girl was fully conscious.  Her head snapped back and forth
like that of a trapped rodent, her eyes now round, now slitted.  The
whites were bloodshot.

"You fell into our deadfall," Wanda said.

"Who are you?  What were you doing out here at night?"

The girl's mouth opened.

"I I " She shook her head.

"I'm Lucy."

"All right, Lucy.  Are you hungry?"

Dumbly, the girl nodded.

"We'll get you some mashed potato," Wanda said, nodding to Scot.  He
was glad to fetch it; Wanda was doing a much better job of
interrogation than he could have.

The potato was not very tasty.  They had done what they could, but the
last of the bin was the worst, and Wanda used their scant remaining
seasoning only for special dishes.  Lucy, however, was hungry, and she
gulped the mess down appreciatively.

"Now," Wanda said gently.

"Why were you wandering around our yard?"

Lucy had begun to relax.  Now she stiffened, the cornered-rat look
returning.

"I can't tell you."

"You're spying for someone?"

"No " "Someone who's going to rob this place?"

"No!"

"Or take over this farm, kicking us out?"

"No!"

Wanda shook her head, turning to Scot.

"She says no."

"I heard," he said.

She turned back to the girl.

"I wish we could believe that."

Scot wished so too.  Had this girl scouted the neighborhood houses
before vandalizing them?  Was she one of the insane, destroying for the
sake of destroying?  Harmless she looked, at this moment of captivity
but she had prowled.

"I'll go away," Lucy said.

"I won't bother you anymore."

A second time Scot suffered a flash of recognition.  Something about
the set of her little chin, the way she sat up, turning her head about.
But again the positive identification eluded him.  He must have seen
her somewhere but where?

Wanda caught his expression.

"You know her?"

"No!"  Lucy cried.

"I don't think so," Scot said cautiously.

"For a moment I thought Maybe I've seen her somewhere, but " "She
evidently knows you," Wanda said.

"But she won't tell."

"Where have we met?"  Scot asked the girl.

"Are you a neighbor's child?  Or " He brightened.

"College!  When I was in college!  A coed?  Did we share a class?"

"I'm not a child," Lucy said.

"I'm twenty."

Wanda eyed her appraisingly.

"It's possible.  But why are you so canny about it?

What's wrong with knowing him before?"

Lucy's lower lip trembled, but she did not answer.

"Let's try this scenario on for size," Wanda said.

"You knew him casually at college.  You were a freshman and he was a
junior, so you had no classes together.  You liked him, but he had a
fiancee, so you just saw him around the campus occasionally and that
was all.  When he left, you followed him, just sort of hoping, still
not daring to approach him directly.  So you'd walk around at night,
peering in the windows " "No," Scot said, embarrassed.

"Yes," Lucy whispered.

"Well, that's interesting," Wanda said with satisfaction.

"She says yes, he says no."  She shot an amused glance at Scot.

"Love 'em and leave 'em?"

"You know better than that," Scot muttered.

"I sure do!"  She faced Lucy.

"Who was the president of the college?"

Lucy stared at her.

"In fact," Wanda followed up, "what was the college?  The one you both
went to?"

Lucy didn't answer.

Wanda sighed.

"Scratch one scenario.  Care to give us the real one?"

Scot had to admire Wanda's efficiency.80 He had just about believed the
college scenario himself.  She had established more from this reluctant
witness than he would have thought possible.  Obviously Lucy knew him
from somewhere, and he had seen her.  But where?

"What do we do with you?"  Wanda asked Lucy.

"You won't tell us about yourself, and we can't have people prowling
around at night with dubious motives."

"I promise I won't " "Your word is no good; we've just established
that."

"Still, after this " Scot put in.

"Why don't you just tell us the truth," Wanda said to Lucy.

"So we can decide?"

For a moment Lucy seemed ready to answer; then she tightened up
again.

"I

can't."

Wanda turned to Scot.

"What do you think?"

"We'll have to let her go," he said.

"Where will you go?"  Wanda asked her.

"Same place you were starving before?"

Lucy was silent.

"We can't just turn her loose," Wanda said.

"She's hungry, she has nowhere to go, and she knows you from
somewhere."

"That doesn't mean I'm responsible for her!"  Scot protested.

"Yes it does."

"It does?"  Lucy asked, amazed.

Scot didn't follow the reasoning, but Wanda continued to look better in
his eyes.  What a break for him, that her car should be the one to fail
near his door!  Another mile one way or the other, and she would have
entered some other house, and he would never have met her.

"Suppose we try this," Wanda said.

"You stay here, Lucy.  We'll feed you and give you a place to sleep.
You'll wash dishes, sweep floors, hoe the garden.  If you don't like
it, you just take off.  No one will stop you; we can't take the trouble
to watch you.  But if you do leave, don't come back especially not at
night."

Lucy looked at her, unbelieving.

"And if you stay," Wanda continued, "no tricks.  No stealing, no
trouble.  Just work hard so you'll pay your way.  No complaining
either.  We've got more work here than we can do, and most of it is
directly related to feeding ourselves.

Okay?"

Lucy nodded.

Scot wasn't sure this was the best procedure, but he preferred to let
Wanda handle it.  Wanda's own example was the most compelling argument
for giving someone else a chance.  And it did resolve the dilemma as
well as any other course would have.

The depopulation of Earth continued.  Occasionally Wanda walked down
the street to pick up an old newspaper.  But the lighted zone had
retreated another step, and one day she was attacked by a mob of
screaming adolescents.  Scot heard the commotion and came running,
panting, hair disheveled, and with his two months' beard he must have
presented a more formidable aspect than he felt, for they faded away.
Or perhaps they saw Lucy, following close after him, and didn't know
how many more might be coming.  But after that, Wanda did not go
downtown alone.

This cut off another source of news.81 They were in a municipal
wilderness.  Hungry dogs and cats prowled the streets, not friendly.
Scot and Wanda and Lucy took to carrying solid sticks and kitchen
knives at all times, and they set up many nasty little booby-traps
around the house and garden.  They knew where the traps were; others
would not.82 Lucy was small, emaciated, taciturn, and she tired easily.
But she kept her mouth shut and she did her work.  When she was
assigned to hoe the weeds out of the turnips, Scot knew that she would
take twice as long to complete the job as he would have but when she
was done, there would be not one weed left and not one turnip
damaged.

"She's thorough, and she has patience," Wanda remarked.

"The plants like that.

You can't rough them and expect them to flourish."

"Are people any different?"  he inquired, and she shrugged, smiling.

Soon Lucy was doing the evening slug hunting and damage to the lettuce
abated.83 She started lighting the wood stove in the chill mornings,
and that was a blessing for Wanda, who hadn't liked that chore.  Scot
was now free to do the more challenging tasks, like constructing a
proper shelter for the solar water-heater tank.  He had done an
inadequate job of moving the collector down;

the pipes leaked, and the insulation was bad.  So he took the metal rim
of the old children's swimming pool and cut it into sections to cover
as much of the mechanism as possible.  Hot water was valuable;
insulation from the cold of the night was essential.

Then the area water system failed.  Suddenly the pipes were dry.  They
were thirsty, and the garden was drying up.  That meant a great deal of
emergency work for all three of them.

Some water had seeped into the old pit that had caught Lucy, and after
rains it took many days to sink down.  Scot decided to deepen it into
an old-fashioned well.  So they took turns digging, down and down, then
carrying stones to block out the seeping mud and prevent the walls from
collapsing inward.  It was a messy, frustrating job that they would
have given up in disgust, had they not stood in such desperate need of
water.  Fortunately the water table was not far down, and they deemed a
ten-foot depth sufficient.  The result was irregular and inartistic,
but there were a good three feet of muddy water in the bottom.  In a
day that cleared, and their supply was assured.

They had a party to celebrate, taking sips of lukewarm water from
cocktail glasses and balking at thirds: "No, thanks, I've got to
drive!"  But the success of this venture was intoxicating; they had met
the harshest test of survival.

But dipping it out with a bucket was impractical, as it was hard to get
down to the water without tumbling dirt into it and the bucket itself
stirred up the sediment.  No more than one bucketful could be taken at
a time, and that, according to the girls, was no good on laundry days.
So Scot had to arrange for a pump.  He deepened the well by a couple of
feet to give more room for sediment, then set the pipe in the top foot
of water so that it would not disturb those depths.  He struggled to
lay the pipe sections along the ground in a line to the house.  Now
they had to find proper fittings, searching through the deserted
garages and storerooms of their vanished neighbors.  Fortunately Tully
had had an old hand pump that he had intended to adapt to a windmill
Tully was always working out practical things like that so that he
could have free water some year.  Scot was not about to attempt
windmill technology, but this pitcher pump would do fine for the free
water.  An easy job, fitting pipe and setting up a simple primitive
pump.  In theory.  But Scot had never been handy with tools, and he
knew little about pumps.  The girls were as ignorant as he.  So he
struggled, his temper getting shorter.  Wanda stayed near him but
quiet, ready to help or calm him on an emergency basis, and Lucy worked
outside.

Until about noon.  Then Lucy entered.  She was breathing rapidly, as if
she had been running.  She had been eating voraciously these past few
weeks, satisfied with the potatoes and early radishes, willing to
consume anything remotely edible, and had fleshed out her arms and legs
somewhat.  She was still a thin girl, but no longer a scarecrow.

"We have a visitor!"  she cried.

"A priest " Wanda had come over to see what the commotion was about.

"A priest!"  she exclaimed.

"We don't belong to any church!"

Scot retrieved the wrench he had almost dropped on his foot.

"Maybe he wants to convert us," he remarked.

"I think you'd better go out and talk to him," Wanda said.

"Me?  What could I say to a priest?"

"We'll all go," Wanda decided.

"But I think he'll prefer to talk to the head of the household."

Head of the household.  That surprised Scot yet of course he was the
legal proprietor.

"Okay," he said, disengaging with some relief from the pump.

"But you girls stand by to prop me up."

Even Lucy smiled, fleetingly and he noted, as fleetingly, that this
expression did a great deal for her face.  They brushed themselves off,
though it was a futile gesture: all three wore ill-fitting denims, with
dirt ingrained.  Frequent washing was too complicated, especially right
now in the absence of water and soap.  Most of the dipped water that
didn't go for drinking or cooking went to irrigate the garden.
Cleanliness was a luxury of civilization, Scot thought and maybe so was
godliness.  They trooped out, a motley crew.

It did indeed look like a priest.  The man was medium-sized but
appeared husky under his brown robe.  He wore the reversed collar, and
a silver cross hung from a ribbon around his neck.  A white sash and
heavy black shoes completed his uniform.  He was a light-skinned
Negro.84 "Hello," Scot said, feeling awkward.

"Uh, I " The man extended his right hand.

"I am Brother Paul, of the Holy Order of Vision."

"I'm Scot Krebs, and this is Wanda, and Lucy.  We're not related, just
working together."  And why did he feel the need to explain that? There
was nothing to apologize for, especially not to this stranger!

Brother Paul smiled.

"Of course.  I had heard that a community farm was operating here; that
is why I came.  Did you receive my letter?"

"We don't get mail anymore," Scot said.

"Not even the pony express?  But I suppose that's limited to the open
country, rather than the suburban fringe."  He made a little gesture of
unconcern.

"I

would like to join you for a time."

"Join us?"  Scot was too surprised to field the notion well.  Wanda had
been a lucky accident, and maybe Lucy too but this man had come seeking
them.

"We're not a religious group " "Neither are we," Brother Paul said.
Then he smiled at their expressions.

"I

shall be happy to explain.  But I know you are busy, and I wish to
help, not hinder.  If you have some task I can assist in, we can talk
while working."

"We have tasks!"  Wanda said.

"But " "I don't think " Scot began at the same time.

"We do not eschew physical labor," Brother Paul said.

"What chore have I interrupted?"

"The pump," Wanda said, as though that closed the case.

"I happen to know something about plumbing.  Show me your pump."

Scot looked at Wanda, then at Lucy.  He found them looking at him.  He
could not imagine a priest soiling his robes on that ugly job.  But he
shrugged, as he always did when baffled.

"Come on in."

Brother Paul glanced at the kitchen disarray and smiled.  He doffed his
robe, revealing simple blue jeans beneath, like their own but cleaner.
Very soon it became evident that he had not exaggerated: he did know
something about plumbing.  He manipulated the pipe wrenches while he
talked.

"The Order is not a religion; we wear the collar and cross to suggest
our nature, but the cross itself predated Christianity.  Our members
belong to any church, Christian and others.  Or to no church."

"An atheist priest?"  Lucy murmured, smiling behind her hand.

But Brother Paul smiled too.

"Priest no.  Brother, yes.  I regard myself as something of an atheist
and something of a theist.  We really try to embrace all faiths,
without exclusion.  Even, or perhaps I should say especially, the
doubters.  After all, doubting is fundamental to existence.  The word
"Holy' as we use it does not mean religious, but 'whole."  The whole
world, if you will."

Scot's doubts, nevertheless, were increasing.

"But I never heard of you before," he said.

"No offense."

"We are a small Order, only recently established as these things go.
But many of the great movements of the world started small."

"Exactly what is it you do?"  Wanda asked.

"We study, we teach, we try to improve the lot of humanity in whatever
way we can."

"Like fixing pumps," Scot said, not sure of his own implication.

"Yes.  There is honor in any task, provided it serves the need of
mankind.  We also serve by spreading the message of Paul, as it was at
the beginning of Christianity.  That message has been lost to many even
many sincerely religious people, unfortunately."

"Saint Paul," Wanda said.

"Is that where you got your own name?"

He smiled.

"That is more or less coincidental.  But yes, I have taken that name,
and I do espouse those precepts.  I won't preach to you it is not our
purpose to seek converts.  But we do not conceal our mission,
obviously."

"Just what is your mission?"  Scot asked, not satisfied with the answer
Wanda had received.

"I mean, what do you want with us specifically?"  He wondered darkly
whether this visitor could be another scout casing the joint with a
very ingenious disguise.  But why go to so much effort for so little?

"Our world is in trouble," Brother Paul said seriously.

"Civilization itself is breaking down not just here, but all over the
world.  We don't really understand why, though we suspect it relates to
the emigration program.  But it is a fact.

People are going to have to learn how to take care of themselves just
as you are doing here.  We believe such community farms,
self-sufficient, are an important part of the answer.  We want to help
you by sharing our expertise with you."  He set down the wrench and
poured some water into the pump from the pitcher, priming it.

"By fixing pumps, if necessary."

"And you want to stay a while here and show us the ropes," Wanda said
flatly.

She evidently had the same reservations Scot did.

"That's it.  Of course I would learn as much as I taught; it's always a
two-way process.  Perhaps a three-way process, considering the
interaction of God."

Wanda shook her head.

"Forgive us if we wrong you.  But it sounds too simple.  All we know of
you is what you've told us.  You could have put on those robes to lull
our suspicions " "And instead aroused them," Brother Paul agreed.

"A quite natural concern.

Philanthropy can be suspicious, especially in these times."  He worked
the pump handle vigorously, then stopped to make another adjustment
with the wrench.

"I

have taken a vow of poverty, so I have no need of your possessions but
of course you have only my word on that too.  I could show you my
identification but that could be forged.  I will not force myself upon
you; I only make the offer."

Scot spread his hands.

"We've gotten where we are by trusting people.  We haven't been
disappointed yet."

Lucy perked up.

"You haven't?"

Scot stretched out his hand and pushed her on the shoulder.

"No, we haven't."

Brother Paul smiled.

"Those are welcome words.  Not as they relate to my situation as they
relate to yours.  You are now ready to trust people."

And now that he had said it, it seemed that it had to be true.  And so
Brother Paul moved in, converting the cluttered children's playroom to
a neat monastic cell.

Spring advanced into summer, and the population of the neighborhood
continued to diminish.  The power service was now so far distant it was
as though it did not exist, and what had been a great city had shrunk
into the size of a backward town.  But the farm prospered.  Potatoes
were replaced by turnip greens and collards, supplemented by whatever
they could forage from deserted houses and stores in the area.  Even
Brother Paul did not consider this theft; the owners were permanently
gone, and the canned goods and bottled goods were going to waste.

"Use with proper reverence," he said.

"Then there is no wrong."

It was becoming evident that they had a viable lifestyle.  They would
survive, so long as they kept working.

Occasionally news of the outside world filtered in, by way of an old
newspaper or word of mouth.  A second MT center was completed six
months after the first, and so emigration was proceeding at twice the
former pace, coming up on a projected ten million by the end of the
year.  Many other nations were constructing similar facilities, and
instituting similar bonus programs; there were riots in those that did
not.  The roster of planetary colonies was becoming too long to
remember.  Yet despite this exodus, both unemployment and inflation
were out of control.  The most educated and capable were the first, not
the last, to leave, and businesses were closing down, forcing those
other businesses dependent on them to close also.  There was such a
terrible drain on the world's supply of gasoline that cars were priced
out of existence, and at one stroke something like a quarter of the
nation's workers became jobless.  Thus an irresistible pressure
continued for more, not less, emigration, intensifying the effect.

People were starving.  But still the world's resources poured into the
maw of MT.

That was the way the world wanted it.

"Compost's due for turning," Wanda announced one morning, checking her
calendar.

She was very good at keeping track of necessary tasks; she always knew
what to do when, and what the priorities were.

"I'll do it," Lucy said.  She seemed to have a compulsion to volunteer
for things.

"You've got baking to do," Wanda reminded her.  One of the stores they
had discovered contained many hundreds of pounds of grain: wheat, oats
and corn, the rats ripping open the bags and soiling ten times as much
as they consumed.  Now those bags were in the farm's pantry, in the
lone mouse- and rat proof room of the house, guarded by assorted traps.
Bread, pancakes, cereal it was, Scot had to admit with no affront to
Brother Paul, a godsend.  Much of the grain he had planted, and some of
it was sprouting.

"By the time you get done with grinding, heating the oven and all,
it'll be too late for the compost.  And we don't want you kneading the
dough when you have compost on your hands."

Scot had to laugh at that image.

"She's right, Luce!  Please don't compost!"

"And I've got the week's laundry to do," Wanda said.

"It has to be today, or we'll have clouds and rain and lose all our hot
water and have to suffer another week.  If you men get the compost
turned in time, I'll dump your stinking clothes in the last batch."
With the solar heater and the working pump, they had plenty of hot
water, and they tended to be cleaner now that Brother Paul was with
them, though he had never suggested that anything was amiss.  Perhaps
it was because he scrupulously washed his own clothes every week, and
himself.

"We'll strip down to work," Scot said.

"Okay.  I'll dump your stinking bodies in the wash."

Brother Paul shook his head in simulated wonder.

"What a Mother Superior she would make at the order!"

"A real slave driver," Scot agreed.

"No, the Mother Superior does not compel.  But she does organize.  Very
efficiently.  Some might say I would never suggest such a thing myself,
of course just a mite too efficiently..."  He smiled.

"Somebody has to organize," Wanda said, a trifle defensively.

"No question about it," Brother Paul agreed.85 They carried spading
forks to the main compost heap behind the barn.  The barn was actually
a former neighbor's house adapted to the purpose, since the neighbor
had deserted it for MT.  The heap had swelled to an enormous
proportion, owing to the voluminous brush and refuse dumped there.  It
was head-high and twenty feet in diameter.

"I should turn it more often," Scot said.

"But I've been so busy " "Quite understandable," Brother Paul agreed,
removing his shirt.  He was a stoutish man, with a fair amount of
muscular development: the kind, Scot thought, who might have been good
at physical combat.  Or was that an unkind thought, considering that
this was a man of peace?

"I figure we should move the whole pile to one side," Scot said,
removing his own shirt and donning heavy work gloves.  His hands now
had good calluses, but he had learned to take precautions against
blistering.

"That way we'll be sure we haven't missed any.  And the oldest stuff
will wind up on top."

"Yes.  I suggest we also form the new pile into the shape of a cup."

"Cup?"

"So that it will tend to collect water and carry it through the center,
instead of allowing it to run off.  Water is essential to the com
posting process."

"Beautiful!"  Scot said.

"I never thought of that!  I'll bet you have a compost pile at the
Order."

"Several," Brother Paul agreed.

"We dislike waste, physical or spiritual."

"Okay.  I'll tackle this side, and you start on that side, so we don't
get in each other's way."

"We," Brother Paul said.

"Pitch in."  And he did so, literally.

They labored for half an hour.  Scot had not made the pile well.
Undigested brush was mixed with garbage from their meals so that he
could not get a decent forkful without entanglement and dribbling and
wasted effort.

"Never again!"  he muttered as he yanked out a long branch and got
spattered across the face by gooey half-rotted turnip leaves.

"Those look like carrot greens," Brother Paul said, looking at his own
forkful.

"You do not consume the leaves?"

"Not in this condition!"  Then Scot reconsidered.

"The greens of any vegetable should be edible, shouldn't they!  Why
throw away part of the plant, when we're hungry?  We should have been
using them all along!"

"Many things are not obvious at first.  I had forgotten, myself.
Radishes, turnips, carrots, beets all the greens should be used in
salads.  I believe there is merit in using the whole plant, just as
there is in using the whole animal."

"Yes, I see that now.  Waste is the root of all evil."

"Perhaps," Brother Paul agreed, smiling.

If this were preaching, Scot thought, it was not objectionable.86 So
much could be accepted and assimilated in incidental tidbits that would
be unpalatable as a lecture.  Brother Paul evidently knew this.87 As
they penetrated beneath the brush, the pitching became easier.  Here in
the depths of the pile, down where Tully had prepared it he had
evidently had a working arrangement with the neighbor so that there had
been no objection to having the pile so close to the house
decomposition was progressing nicely.  And at the very bottom it had
become fine, crumbly black humus: compost so good that it was a sheer
pleasure to see and smell.

"Sometimes I imagine that we shall encounter shards of Babylonian
pottery," Brother Paul observed.

"Or perhaps even dinosaur bones, if we only dig down far enough in this
pile."

Scot laughed.

"They'd be composted by this time."  Companionship made a tedious job
so much more rewarding!

But they had merely gotten down to the base.  Most of the pile
remained, tiered on either side of the excavations.88 They rested
again, sweating freely.  Conversation was easy in this situation; the
strain of muscle exertion broke down intellectual barriers somehow,
perhaps because of the camaraderie of sharing a difficult task or
perhaps simply because it offered a pretext to rest a little longer.

"Why didn't you emigrate?"  Scot inquired.

"Surely you can't really like Earth as it is, or you wouldn't have
joined the Order."

"I didn't like myself, as I was," Brother Paul said.

"But your observation is true, to an extent.  I am not satisfied with
Earth but I love it too."

"You could love a pioneer planet better," Scot said.

"Fresh, unspoiled there are myriads of worlds out there, each
potentially better than this one."

"Yes, that may be so."

"So why don't you go to one of them, as the priests and ministers and
rabbis and holy men of other religions are doing?"

"Because my mission is to help those most in need.  My mission and that
of the Holy Order of Vision.  We must go where there is human misery,
not where there is joy."

"You would actually turn down paradise?"

"Indubitably so long as there is suffering elsewhere."

Scot shook his head.

"I never thought of it that way!  You want happiness for others, not
for yourself."

"Our happiness is in bringing happiness to others."  Brother Paul
paused, reflecting.

"Or at least in helping them.  Happiness must come from within; we can
not provide that directly."

"So you came to help us."  Scot eyed the cutaway compost pile, noting
the steam rising from the hot sections, and the ugly dry powder
composition of the places where the water had not penetrated.
Cup-shaped: by all means!

"Were we so miserable, here at the farm?"

"You were willing to be helped."

"Um, yes.  I suppose that does make a difference."  He remembered what
a relief it had been to have that pump working.  He looked at the pile
again, and decided to talk a little longer.

"You say you don't want paradise so long as anyone else is denied it.
But suppose everyone could emigrate, and it was guaranteed they would
all be ideal worlds?"

"Then I suppose the Holy Order of Vision would go too.  We could not
exist in isolation; that is not our purpose."

"You know, I wanted to go more than anything.  But I couldn't and now
I'm not sure I want to."

Brother Paul faced him as if discovering a delightful intellectual
challenge.

"Let me reverse the question on you.  Suppose you could go to the
perfect planet, with no adverse elements at all?"

"That's what I mean.  That was Conquest, for me.  I don't think I would
now.  Not without my friends."

"Your friends would go.  Everyone you chose."

"They'd have to want to, of their own accord.  For their own reasons,
not mine."

"They would.  You'd all want to, for a diversity of splendid reasons.
And everything would be fine.  Guaranteed."

Scot shook his head dubiously.

"There would be no challenge.  I don't want perfection handed me on a
platter.  I'm not made that way.  I want to earn my contentment."

"Well, let there be challenge, then.  You and your friends would face
new challenges, as many and as formidable as you wanted, and you would
always rise successfully to meet them."

Scot sighed.

"No, not even then.  It wouldn't be real.  I don't want anything handed
to me, not even my challenges.  I don't want to be programmed for
success or failure.  I want, if you'll excuse the expression, simply to
go to hell in my own fashion."

Brother Paul smiled.

"You are saying that you are not made for paradise, after all."

"Man is not made for paradise!  Or," Scot added with surprise, "for
Conquest.  You don't want that scenario either.  Do you?"

Brother Paul spread his hands.

"You argue persuasively."

Which was not a direct answer.  Was that significant?

"What I want Right now all I want is " Scot stopped, surprised again.

"Is to finish turning this damned compost pile!"

"Then it must be a blessed pile.  It answers our needs."

"It must be.  Compost is a thing of the spirit."

"It always was," Brother Paul agreed.

"Any plant, any roach or worm would tell you the same."

Scot knew the reference to roaches or worms was not disparaging.  To
Brother Paul, all life deserved respect.

They pitched in with renewed vigor.  Now, with every forkful, Scot did
not see the toilsome pottage of brush and decaying vegetation.  He saw
a living process of nature, returning to the soil the things that were
no longer needed elsewhere: one of the great rejuvenating phenomena of
existence.  What better symbol of true civilization in harmony with
nature than a functioning compost pile?  And he, like Brother Paul, was
content to play his part, to make it work.

Here was his task: to do with the soil what the Holy Order of Vision
was trying to do with mankind.  To restore it to its ideal state:
heaven in its own terms.

His happiness was in accomplishing this significant task.89 He paused,
in thought and work.

"Do you see a parallel between compost and civilization?"  he
inquired.

"I see a parallel everywhere," Brother Paul replied.

"Just as I see goodness everywhere."

Scot wondered whether that could be true.  He did not see goodness
everywhere!

What about the thief who had stolen his car?  Was she good?

Irritated that this question should interrupt his rapport with the
compost, he asked Brother Paul, after summarizing the episode, "How do
you account for it?"

"She needed money for food, perhaps for her children," Brother Paul
said.

"She did wrong, but we can not call her evil."

"And what do I do after all I have suffered on her account?"

Brother Paul looked up in surprise.

"Why, you forgive her," he said, as though that were obvious.

"Forgive her!"  Scot cried indignantly.

"How do I know how many other lives she's ruined?  She doesn't deserve
forgiveness she deserves punishment!"

"Are you sure she has not punished herself sufficiently?"

"Thieves have no conscience!  Not so long as they get away with it. You
have only to look at our political history to see that!"

Brother Paul did not answer.  By that token Scot knew he had been
reproved.  He had been offered the chance to forgive and had been
unable to do so.

Well, it was an honest definition of his state.  He still could not
forgive.

Brother Paul believed essentially in pacifism: that there should be a
nonviolent or non offensive way to handle all situations, if one had
the proper desire to do so.  The others were skeptical, but had no
cause to argue the matter.

Then abruptly his philosophy was tested.

Trouble, when it came, did not skulk by night.  It marched up in broad
daylight.

Four tough-looking men came to the door.

"We like your farm," the leader said directly.  He was a red-haired,
red-bearded (or rather beard-stub bled individual who might have been
handsome in better days.  His clothes were grimy, and he carried the
odor of rancid sweat.  In short, he was an average man by the standards
of the day.

"How fast can you move out?"

It had come, thus abruptly: the time of grim decision.  Confrontation
by thugs:

the very thing Scot had always feared.  And he found himself no better
prepared to handle it than he had been before MT.

Were they to move out, giving up all they had worked for, exchanging
their relatively satisfactory life for that of pure scavenging?  Or
should they fight to retain the farm, taking the consequence?  The
demeanor of the intruders made it plain that they were not bluffing.

"We'll have to talk it over," Scot said.

"Thought you might," the man said genially.

"Now you just do that right now and we'll talk with you.  That's the
democratic way, ain't it."

There seemed to be little choice.  Scot was not a fighter, and he
didn't want the girls trying it.  The three of them and Brother Paul
trooped out to face the four thugs.

"Two girls," the leader said.

"That's real nice."  He eyed Wanda.

"You can stay, for sure.  The other maybe."  Then he appraised Brother
Paul, who had donned his collar and brown robe.

"Who the hell are you?"

"I am Brother Paul, of the Holy Order of Vision."

"Never heard of it," the leader said.  He glanced at his companions,
who also shook their heads negatively.  He returned to Brother Paul.

"Well, scat.  We don't need your kind here."

Scot knew that their way of life was in immediate peril.  But part of
him wondered just how Brother Paul would react to this direct challenge
to his pacifistic philosophy.  If pacifism meant giving up all that one
had striven for, could it be a valid answer?  This was the test.

"This matter is my concern," Brother Paul said.  He did not seem to be
alarmed.

"Yeah?"  The leader glanced sidelong at one of his henchmen, and
inclined his head just slightly.

"Brand move him off."

Brand stepped forward.  He was the largest of the four, powerful, with
the battered features of a brawler.  He grasped the front of Brother
Paul's robe with one scarred hairy hand, half-lifting the man to his
toes.

"Stop that!"  Scot cried.

"You can't put hands on a " "Peace," Brother Paul said.

"He can't hurt me."

With misgivings, they watched Brand march Brother Paul away.  It was
evident that composure and principle were powerless against blunt
force.  What was going to happen?

"Now," the leader said.

"Discuss: are you moving out now, maybe taking along some of your
trinkets or are you getting moved out our way, and take nothing but
maybe some lumps?"

Scot knew he was no hero.  He had recovered from his original injury,
and the hard work of maintaining the farm had improved his health.  But
he knew nothing about physical combat, and could never be a match for
the least of the four toughs, let alone these three of them.  He had no
reasonable choice: if he didn't give up the farm voluntarily, he would
be beaten up and thrown out.  He would lose everything, including his
health, just as he had when he lost his car.

His car there was an object lesson!  Had he just stood and watched it
go, he would have been out the vehicle, true.  But he would have given
it up anyway very soon, along with his other worldly possessions, when
he emigrated to Colony Conquest with his brother and fiancee.  So the
car was nothing, really.

Instead he had fought to save it and lost car, health, emigration,
college and fiancee.  With the breakdown in communications, he had
never been summoned to his trial, so MT was still denied him, by
default assuming he still wanted to go.  As he might, if he lost this
farm.  Lost all because of that one wrong decision.90 Yet he found it
was not in him to yield.  To let might make right that was wrong.

It was not only his fate at stake, but that of Brother Paul and Wanda
and Lucy.

He had to do what was right for them.  If he let these men have their
way, he would be a vagabond, Brother Paul's effort would have been
wasted, and the two girls would be concubines.  He would in fact be
contributing to the degradation of his world.

Scot was trapped between his physical incapacity and his mental
rigidity.  He was unable to reply.

"Who do you think you are?"  Wanda demanded of the leader.

"You can't simply come in here and take over everything we've worked
for!"

She had said what Scot should have said.  He had failed even at futile
defiance.

"Now I've tried to handle it peacefully," the leader said.

"But you're making trouble.  I gave you a chance to clear out without
getting hurt.  I was being nice.  But I don't mind it the other way."
His hand snaked out and caught Wanda's arm.  He twisted, and she
screamed and fell to the ground.

Scot acted without thinking.  He swung his fist at the leader.  The
blow landed, but bounced off the bull neck harmlessly, and the man only
laughed.

"Okay, sucker.  We'll work you over now.  Hold him, boys."

The other two thugs grabbed Scot by the arms and held him upright.  The
power of their hands was painful.  The leader stood before him, fist
cocked, eying him as though savoring the moment.  A true sadist, he
took his time, not acting in the heat of the moment but waiting for
maximum impact.  Scot had read stories of a man held like this yanking
the two in so that their heads cracked together, while he disabled the
front man with a well placed kick, but in practice he found himself
helpless.  He closed his eyes, knowing what was coming, hoping it
wouldn't be too bad.  He hadn't learned a thing; he had made the same
mistake he had with the car thief.  Futile action.

"Please refrain."

Scot's eyes snapped open.  It was Brother Paul, alone.

"How'd you get away from Brand?"  the leader demanded, as surprised as
Scot.

"We talked, and he had a change of heart," Brother Paul said.

"Now I wish to talk with you.  These people have worked hard to build
and operate this farm.  It is not right to require them to leave.  In
the circumstances I'll have to ask you to leave unless you wish to take
a more constructive attitude."

Scot knew that approach would be met with contempt.  The verification
was immediate.

"Start with him, then," the leader snapped.

"I don't like his mouth."

The thugs let go of Scot.

"Leave Brother Paul alone!"  Wanda cried, stepping forward.

"Yes, we'll have to make a little demonstration," the leader said.

"These creeps are slow to get the message."

"Boss, I don't like this," one of the thugs said.

"It ain't right to rough up a priest."

"I am no priest," Brother Paul said, and Scot wished the man had not
chosen to clarify that point right at this moment.  If the thugs were
willing to let a priest go Brother Paul turned to Scot.

"In the face of these men's determination, I don't see what better
course I can urge than for you to accede to their demand.  If neither
side gives way, there may be violence, and this can not be condoned."

Wanda was still rubbing her arm where the thug had twisted, but she was
by no means cowed.

"Brother Paul, I think I understand your position," she said.

"But I hope you'll understand when I say it is sometimes hard to see
the distinction between pacifism and cowardice."  And she faced away
from him.

Brother Paul was unperturbed.

"This is true.  It can also be difficult to perceive the distinction
between pacifism and courage."  He turned to Scot.

"The bravest thing you might do would be to walk away from this house.
I will, if you choose, bring you to the nearest station of our Order,
where you may stay as long as you wish.  The girls also.  You will not
need to join the Order.  We seek only to help."

Scot realized that here was his way out.  They would have a place to
stay, with food and comfort, and comparative security.  It probably
would be better than the farm.

Yet there remained that core of stubbornness in him that simply would
not give over, however reasonable the alternative.  He didn't
understand it, as he had never been this way before, but he was subject
to it.

"I can't do it," Scot said.

"I'm sorry."

"I'm with Scot," Wanda said.

"If we don't fight for what we believe in, what use is there in living?
Maybe we'll go down but these beasts will know they paid a price. Maybe
next time they won't be so eager to raid what isn't theirs."  She
turned to Lucy, who had been standing white-faced throughout.

"How do you feel, Luce?"

But the girl just shook her head mutely.  She was obviously terrified,
almost literally petrified.  She had her hands cupped together at her
chest, as if suffering internal pain.  There would be no help from
her!

"You will not take the reasonable course?"  Brother Paul asked Scot.

"I urge you again, for the sake of peace " "Not that sort of peace!"
Wanda flared.

"Listen to the preacher," the leader said.

"He just may save you a broken skull."

Scot felt cold all over.  The choice Brother Paul had proposed
theoretically at the compost pile was now literal.  He could have a
good life at or near the Order station, merely by agreeing.  The
alternative was not merely neutral, it was highly negative.  Heaven or
hell.

"I can't," he repeated, again resigning himself to what was coming. Not
only for him, but for Wanda.  Why couldn't he have been sensible and
yielded?

"That was very interesting," the thug leader said.

"I thought for a minute he was going to make you see light.  Well,
where were we?  Oh, yes: we were going to see you out so you won't
forget.  Go to, boys."

The two thugs advanced a second time on Scot.  But Brother Paul stepped
in front of him.

"Since this man will not yield, I am forced to intercede.  You
gentlemen will have to go."

"That does it!"  the leader exploded.

"Do Brother Nosey first and hard."

This time one man hesitated, but the other moved in on Brother Paul.
Wanda tried to interfere, game to the end, but the leader grabbed her
by the shoulder and flung her back.

"I wish you would be reasonable," Brother Paul said.  Scot was amazed
and dismayed by the man's foolish persistence.  Surely he realized that
anything he said at this point would only make things worse.  Yet the
lead thug did pause.

"I

must ask again that you depart," Brother Paul continued, "and leave
these people alone."

The leader laughed harshly, evidently always ready to spin out an
enjoyable hassle, cat and mouse.

"And what are you going to do about it?"

Scot wondered whether there would be any chance of disabling at least
one of the thugs by jumping on him just as he grabbed Brother Paul. The
situation was beyond saving now; what did he have to lose?

"The way of love and peace is always best," Brother Paul said.

"Yet for any action there is a necessary consequence."

The first thug shot out his arm to strike.  But suddenly Brother Paul
was inside the man's reach, whirling around, heaving and the man
tumbled headfirst over Brother Paul's back and landed hard on the
ground.

Scot gaped, not comprehending what had happened.  But the second thug
was already on the robed man, foot swinging in for a brutal kick.
Brother Paul stepped nimbly aside, caught the foot, and levered the man
down.

"I want you to understand I hold no animosity for you," Brother Paul
told the men on the ground.

"Allow me to help you up " And he lifted the second man back to his
feet.

The leader was openmouthed.

"The creep can fight!"  he exclaimed.

Brother Paul made a formal little bow to him.

"I tried not to hurt your men.

Please leave now all three of you."91 For a moment the leader seemed
ready to attack.  But he thought the better of it.

Brother Paul's motions had been too sure, too effective, and his poise
was too great.  The action had been no fluke; he could very easily have
put the men down unconscious or with broken bones.

"Come on, boys."

The three left.  They just turned away as if they had lost interest.
Wanda whirled on Brother Paul.

"You never even hinted you could fight like that!  Why did you keep it
secret?"

"In my youth I was a student of judo, the so-called 'gentle way' of
self-defense," Brother Paul admitted.

"It is not a talent I regard with pride, but rather a legacy of my
past, and I'm sorry to have used it."

Scot shook his head.

"All the time you knew you could take them, but you reasoned and backed
off and tried to talk us into leaving peacefully " "And I called you a
coward," Wanda said, chagrined.

"I was," Brother Paul said.

"I took a somewhat violent way out, because I was afraid of the
consequence if I didn't.  Perhaps there was a better way, had I acted
correctly.  I shall have to meditate to see where I went wrong."

"Where you went wrong!"  Scot exclaimed.

"You saved the farm!  Would your Order condemn you for that?"

"Oh, no, not the Order.  Individual Brothers and Sisters have differing
standards.  Some would not hesitate to use such a tool, or feel guilty
about the manner of handling the situation so long as the results
achieved significant growth and realization.  There should be no
hesitation in using power as forcefully as needed in each experience.
It is always the Vision that prompts all motivation and subsequent
actions in conjunction with thorough understanding of the divine laws,
the universal principles.  Eventually this brings about the perfected
state.  But there were complications here, and I do not know my own
code well enough to be sure that I applied it correctly."92 "But we
were about to get beaten up," Wanda protested.

"Maybe raped, killed " "The alternative might have been worse," Brother
Paul said.

"Men might have been killed needlessly, and the conscience of a young
woman could have been severely tested.  I felt I could not permit
that."

Both Scot and Wanda made gestures of confusion.

"We might have tried," she said.

"But we never could have " Brother Paul crossed to Lucy, who remained
frozen as she had been all along.

"Sister, permit me," he said.  He put his hand gently on her right arm,
drawing it out from the clasp of her other hand.  And Scot and Wanda
gaped again.

Lucy's right hand held a tiny gun.

"I am sure she would have used it in your defense," Brother Paul
said.

"Lucy is completely devoted to your effort."

Numbed, Scot examined the gun.  It was no toy; it had a clip of four
bullets, yet was so small it had been completely concealed in her
hands.  He realized that she had kept it pointed at the thug leader
throughout.93 Brother Paul took the gun from her hand.

"Would you like me to pray for you?"  he asked her.

"You have been through a terrible trial."

Big-eyed, stiff-faced, she nodded.

"Pray for us all," Wanda said.  One tear trailed down her cheek.

"We didn't know... anything."

Brother Paul dropped the gun on the ground, held Lucy's hand, and
reached for Scot's.  Scot took Wanda's hand, and she completed the
circle by taking Lucy's free one.  They all bowed their heads.

"In the name of that Vision we all share," Brother Paul murmured, "we
ask the understanding and compassion of the Divine Spirit, by whatever
name we know it.

We ask that we shall become better able to handle the problems we
encounter, and to arrive at more compatible solutions.  We ask that we
learn what it is we can do to help this girl achieve her own perfected
state, and never to face the prospect of such violence again.  For we
love her."94 And Scot felt an almost tangible power in Brother Paul's
hand, like an electric charge but with no shock.  It passed through him
and on to Wanda.  He knew she felt it too, for she squeezed his fingers
in response.  It was a strange, wonderful feeling.  He wondered whether
this was what faith was like.

After a moment of healing silence they separated.  Scot looked up and
saw one of the thugs.  Oh, no!

Brother Paul turned about.

"Why hello, Brand," he said pleasantly.

"I thought about what you told me," Brand said.

"I don't need no more time.  I'm ready now."

Scot looked from one to the other.

"What did you two talk about?"

"Brand would like to join the farm," Brother Paul said.

"He join?"  Scot asked incredulously.

"As a productive member," Brother Paul continued.

"He is sorry for any inconvenience he caused you, and is willing to
lend his strength to tasks that might otherwise prove difficult."

"Yeah that's it," Brand said.

"He says it better'n I could."

Scot spread his hands.  This must be what Brother Paul meant by finding
a more positive solution.  Not merely driving off the invaders, but
converting them.

"Why not?"

Brand joined the farm and once again it turned out to have been a
fortunate addition.  The man was powerful; he could hoist a log
weighing 150 pounds to his shoulder and carry it without seeming to
notice.  When he took the sixteen-pound sledgehammer and had at the big
gnarly chunks of wood, the pieces fairly burst apart.  When he pitched
compost, the pile was turned in rapid order.  He was like a tractor or
a team of work horses: no great amount of imagination, but force that
seemed able to move mountains.

He was illiterate, but that didn't seem to be much of a disadvantage.
And there was another surprise.

"Listen," Wanda said one afternoon to Scot.

He listened.  Someone was playing a piccolo in the back yard, by the
sound.  The thin melody was absolutely beautiful.

"Perfect pitch," she said.

"Every note true."

It was a melody he had heard before, but now it seemed much lovelier
than he remembered.

"Who?"  he asked.

She drew him to the window.  They looked out.  Brand was stacking split
wood and whistling while he worked.

"Beethoven's Ninth Symphony," Wanda said.

"Classical music?"  he asked, amazed.95 "He doesn't know it by name,
and of course he can't read music; he just knows what he likes," she
explained.

They listened for some time to a medley of classical and popular music,
all expertly rendered.  It was the finest whistling Scot had ever
heard, and it was hard to believe that this big, dull man was doing it.
Yet it was so.

"Shows you never can tell," Scot said.

"If he has a soul, it comes out through his music."96 In the evenings
Brand and Brother Paul practiced judo, bowing to each other formally
before reviewing the holds.  Now the others began to see how the thugs
had been subdued so readily.  Brother Paul could flip huge Brand over
his shoulder to land crushingly on the straw, unhurt.  And soon Brand
was able to do it too.  It was a matter of timing and balance and
leverage.  Brother Paul offered to show the others how to do it also,
but Scot and Lucy declined, afraid of the violent falls.  Wanda tried
it for a while, but discovered it was necessary to get quite close to a
man in order to make a throw work chest to chest, belly to belly, thigh
to thigh, with hard contact and was afraid this could be misconstrued.
She tried to talk Lucy into working with her, but Lucy wouldn't, so
Wanda dropped out.

Prompted by Brand's whistling, they began to sing while working.  No
one had a good voice, but in harmony the rough edges tended to fade,
and it became an uplifting experience.  They sang anything anybody knew
folk songs, hymns, popular songs, even Emigrate With Me, though that
usually ended in laughter.  None of them intended to emigrate, now.

It rained, and the roof leaked.  Scot and Brand hauled up the spare
roll of roofing paper and a bucket of tar on the next sunny day and
went to work.  And now Scot had a chance to find out something he had
been curious about for some time.

"Just what did Brother Paul say to you, the first time?"

"Nothing much," Brand said.

"Just how you were nice people who maybe could use a strong man."

"But you were with those others.  Why should you change?"

"Didn't make much sense to me at first," Brand admitted.

"But then I saw the light."

"The light?"  Revelation hardly seemed the style of this man, despite
his whistling.

"When Where did you see it?"

Brand laughed.

"In mid-air."

"What?"  Humor wasn't his style either.

"When he threw me."

"Brother Paul used his judo on you?  I thought he always took the
peaceful way."

"I guess he forgot, for just a moment.  When I tried to bash in his
head."

"Oh."

"I always did understand a good bash," Brand said.

"Funny thing was it didn't hurt.  He flipped me over and put me down so
gentle, and then he put a little arm lock on me.  I knew right off I
couldn't touch him in a hundred years.  You ever feel an arm lock

"No."

Brand shook his head.

"Take my word: It don't matter how much muscle you got, when you're in
an arm lock you're finished.  I thought maybe he'd teach me some of
that stuff."

Now it came clear.  Brand had had an ulterior motive.

"Suppose he hadn't?"

"Then I wouldn't learn it.  I like it here anyway.  I was getting tired
of raiding anyway.  He was right you're nice people.  You like my
whistling, you don't laugh 'cause I'm too dumb to read.  Maybe I'll be
like you some day."

"Aren't you afraid of what your former pals might think?"

Brand rolled back his right sleeve and bunched his biceps.  The muscle
bulged hugely.

"Naw.  They'll never come here again."  But then he reconsidered.

"Still, I don't want to fight.  Brother Paul says peace is harder to
learn than fighting."

"I guess it is."  They were having, in their fashion, a philosophic
discussion.

"Them girls," Brand remarked.

"Wanda and Lucy?  What about them?"

"I got a feel for women.  Been with a lot, in my day."

Suddenly Scot liked the conversation less.  But he was curious to know
what the man was getting at.

"If you like a girl and she likes you " "Naw.  Not my type, neither
one.  Wanda's 'fraid I'll feel her up in judo, so she won't do it, but
she shouldn't worry.  I like 'em " Brand paused to describe an
elephantine female shape in the air with hammer and nail.

If Wanda was too slender for this man, he had grandiose tastes!

"What about them, then?"

"They both work hard.  The one sets things up, the other grinds."

"Lucy won't let anyone else do the grinding!  I'd do it myself I know
how hard it is but she " "Let her grind.  It's good for her."

Good to let a small, weak girl struggle with an extraordinarily
fatiguing chore, while a muscular man like Brand stood by.  Scot had
seen Lucy striving to keep that handle turning, panting, collapsing for
five minutes at a time, then resuming the effort.  Probably it was a
form of self-torture, in expiation for some inconsequential error in
her past.  Apparently that didn't bother Brand, who claimed to
understand women.

"Then what's your point?"

"I'd wait."

"What?"

"You don't have no feel.  No offense."

The man was trying to be diplomatic.  He wasn't good at it, but Scot
appreciated the effort.

"No offense, of course.  I never did know much about women."

Certainly not about Fanny!

"Yeah.  I mean you'd make a mistake now.  Maybe in two, three months
you'll know."

"Know what?"

"Which one."

"I don't think we're getting anywhere," Scot said, exasperated.

"Like peace.  I can't learn it right off.  Gotta take my time, watch,
listen, pick it up natural.  One day it'll come."

"And one day I'll learn about women if I wait, watch and listen?"

Brand smiled.

"Right."

Scot returned to his work.  He was amazed at the presumption of this
oaf, seeking to educate him in the facts of life.  Yet he had a nagging
feeling that Brand had had a kernel of substance to impart.  Whatever
it was.97 Brand commenced whistling.  The sound was fine, so evocative,
that Scot was unable to hang on to his irritation.  He wondered whether
the other members of the thug squad would have turned out to have
similar assets had Brother Paul been able to convert them as he had
Brand.  How difficult it was to judge a person by the first experience
with him!

Fall, and the woodcutting tools were getting a heavy workout.  Scot,
Wanda and Brother Paul were doing a major sharpening while Lucy worked
in the garden.  Scot used a whetstone on the axes while Wanda held the
long two-man saw for Brother Paul's careful, patient filing.  These
were jobs that had to be done properly and could not be rushed.

Ten million people had now emigrated from America, and the informal
word was that two more MT units were being readied.98 The colony
planets, according to the printed circulars the government released,
were all doing well.  Better, it seemed, than Earth.

But the disappearance of the adjacent city had alleviated the ravages
of vandals and thugs.  Now isolation and the coming winter were the
main hazards for the farm.  Yet they had discovered that though their
neighbors were now one to three miles away, these distances became less
than next door had been in the city.

There were the Browns to the north and the Smiths to the south, sturdy,
durable families, willing to help in an emergency, willing to be
helped.  When the Smiths were sick, Wanda had gone to pick up their
three small children, boarding them for a week.  The Smiths had
responded with the gift of this fine saw they were now sharpening:
invaluable for felling and preparing new wood.  Wood loomed large in
the concerns of the neighborhood; it was the only source of heat for
the winter.

"Is Paul your original name?"  Wanda inquired.

"That is, it seems almost too apt."

"I was given that name when I joined the Order," he admitted.

"I chose to cast aside my prior life, and so it was appropriate that
the old name be cast aside too.99 I have never regretted it and I often
meditate upon the significance of the similar change in the original
Paul, and its relevance to both Christianity and the Holy Order of
Vision.  Indeed, at times it seems we are one Saul, Christianity,
Vision and me, a fourfold and infinite unity.

"Saul?"  Scot asked.

"Paul and Saul are the same.  The Bible refers to him first as Saul,
and then in Acts XIII, Verse 9 mentions that he is also called Paul,
and thereafter he is Paul.  Actually, it is merely the Roman version of
Saul but I like to think that the apparent change in name actually
derives from his change of heart when he became a Christian, as I did.
In fact, it helps me to feel an identity with him."

"That must be very important to you," Wanda said.

"Yes, frankly it is.  May I tell you about Saul?"  He paused in his
filing to look askance at them.

"We meet him in Acts VIII, when the unbelieving multitude stoned the
prophet Stephen, and laid down their clothes at a young man's feet, and
that man's name was Saul.  This was part of Jewish custom: Saul had
instigated the stoning, and this ceremony was acknowledgment of this
fact.  Of course there are many more levels to it than that.  There was
a great persecution against the newly forming Christian Church.  Saul
committed the men and women of this church to prison, and many were
scattered abroad through all the area."

Brother Paul smiled.

"Actually, this was like trying to put out a fire by scattering the
burning embers through the parched countryside.  Each ember ignites a
new fire, and what was a contained phenomenon becomes un contained  So
perhaps Saul was acting on behalf of the nascent Church even when he
was opposing it."

"That's why you don't seek converts!"  Wanda said.

"Outsiders can do your Order as much good as members."

Brother Paul shook his head.

"No, we are not interested in converts.  We accept them gladly but
those of our spirit will come to us without urging, and others will
not.  We merely try to serve our purpose in the world, helping
mankind."

"Oh, of course," she said.

"I didn't mean to belittle your motive."  Scot knew she was thinking of
the time she had called Brother Paul a coward, and learned he was not.
She had been more careful since.

"I know that."  He made a little gesture, as of patting a puppy on the
head.

"At any rate, the Church was spreading like wildfire.  Stephen was
dead, but another prophet appeared from among the people, Philip, and
he preached as effectively as Stephen had.  And Saul do you mind if I
quote directly from the Bible?  It is written there so much better than
I can say it."

"I'm agnostic," Scot said.

"I don't believe in the Bible not as the ultimate authority on
everything, not literally but I don't mind listening to it."  He
glanced at the others, and there was no objection.  Brand had come in,
and stayed to listen.

"

"And Saul, yet breathing out threatenings and slaughter against the
disciples of the Lord, went unto the high priest,"

" Brother Paul quoted, his voice assuming the special timbre of one
repeating poetry.  "

"And desired of him letters to Damascus to the synagogues, that if he
found any of this way' he meant Christians 'whether they were men or
women, he might bring them bound unto Jerusalem.

"

"And as he journeyed, he came near Damascus: and suddenly there shined
round about him a light from heaven:

"

"And he fell to the Earth, and heard a voice say unto him, Saul, Saul,
why persecute st thou me?

"

"And he said, Who art thou, Lord?  And the Lord said, I am Jesus whom
thou persecute st

" Brother Paul shook his head.

"That was the vision of Paul, and this is the origin of our name, the
Holy Order of Vision.  Paul was blind for three days, and did not eat
or drink.  Then a disciple named Ananias came and put his hands on
Paul, and his sight returned at once, and he arose and was baptized.
And the course of Christianity was changed."

"No offense, but I would be suspicious," Scot said.

"Here is this persecutor, jailing Christians and even killing them and
he suddenly turns about and starts preaching Christianity!  I'd figure
that for some kind of trap."

"So did the Christians," Brother Paul agreed.

"They even plotted to kill Paul, watching at the gates to catch him.
But his friends learned of the plot and let him over the wall of the
city in a basket.  Now he was in trouble with both sides.  But in time
he convinced them by his actions and words.  This, ultimately, is the
only sure way to judge a person."

"I wonder about that conversion for another reason," Wanda said.

"That vision is very like a mental breakdown, or even a migraine
headache.  He saw a light and heard a voice and fell to the ground, and
was struck blind could it have been an obstruction in the brain, a
tumor?  If so, what is the significance for Christianity?"

"I have meditated on that also," Brother Paul admitted as his file
approached the end of the saw.

"I have tentatively concluded that God works in mysterious ways
mysterious to us, not to Him perhaps even through tumors on the
brain.100 Perhaps Paul was fated to die of cancer, and it affected his
personality adversely, made him increasingly rabid, and his newfound
faith was responsible for regression of the growth.  That would not
invalidate his message.  Ultimately it is Paul's message, not the man
himself, that moves us, his willingness to admit all men, not just
Jews, into the new Church.  I believe in that message; it needs no
apology, and cannot be negated by criticism of the precise nature of
the man's conversion.  The Holy Order of Vision believes in that
message: that God, and the worship of God, is whole, Holy, not
circumscribed or partial.  The very word "Holy' derives from the
Anglo-Saxon hal, meaning whole."  He stopped.

"Sorry I was preaching.  I didn't mean to do that."

"Shucks, we're used to it," Brand said.

"No, it's good to hear true belief," Wanda said.

"There is so little of it these days, so little real belief in
anything."

And Scot wondered whether she was speaking for herself, for her
inability to make any definite commitment, whether of emigration or
marriage.  Commitment should follow true belief.101

Winter.  Fifteen million people had emigrated, and with the accelerated
MT program the total would soon pass twenty million.  But there was
little local change; this area had already been depleted.  Scot's own
greatest changes had occurred with the loss of electric power and the
arrival of Wanda; the progressive regression and addition of people to
the farm since had been routine.  Was it really this way all over the
world?

"I've primed and pumped and pumped," Wanda complained.

"But the water just won't come up."

"I'll have a look at it," Brother Paul said.  They were eating a
breakfast of cracked wheat cereal, actually quite tasty and filling,
cooked on the wood stove.

Efficiently he dismantled the pump.

"Bearings are worn," he said.

"Washers are shot.  It can't develop the necessary suction.  I might
make replacement washers, but they wouldn't last long and probably
aren't worth the effort."

"So the pump's done for," Scot said grimly.

"As a practical matter, I believe so.  We lack the technology to
maintain it."

"But we have to have water," Wanda said.

"We'll simply have to regress another step," Brother Paul told her.

"Carry water from the well in buckets."

"Can't do that," Wanda pointed out.

"We covered over that well to protect it and the pipes from freezing,
and now it's all frozen dirt above the water.  Under the regular snow
and ice.  We might clear it out " "Not worth it," Brand objected.

"I could do it, but our shovel's rusty.  It couldn't take the
beating."

"We can melt snow," Lucy suggested.

"Smart girl," Brother Paul told her, and she flushed with pleasure.
What an impact a passing compliment had, Scot thought.

"Collect clean snow in pans, put them on the stove, or merely in the
kitchen.  It'll melt.  In spring we'll locate a spring, no pun, and
carry water in buckets.  Or re-excavate our well for the purpose.  In
any event, an ancient and honorable system."

Wanda sighed.

"Women carrying jars of water on their heads."

"Gives 'em good posture," Brand said.

"Chests out, hips square."

"And nude too, if you had your way," she said.

"Back to the Saxons, back to the Stone Age."

"Oh, the Saxons weren't Stone Age," Brother Paul said.

"Medieval yes, Neolithic no.  They conquered Britain after the Romans
collapsed."

"The Angles, the Saxons, and the Jutes," Scot said.

"Ancient history lives again."

"And others," Brother Paul agreed.

"But mainly the Saxons.  Actually, I believe they were originally
imported from Gaul to Britain by the Romans, to aid in the defense of
the island.  Or by the Britons remaining when the Romans departed,
early in the fifth century A.D. 425 or so history does not record the
date.

But " "You're a historian too?"  Wanda asked, interested.

Brother Paul chuckled.

"Not at all!  Edification of the mind is one of the disciplines of the
Order, and we don't confine our studies to the Bible.  We study all
religions, as well as philosophy, psychology, practical ministry,
stewardship, healing, science " "Faith healing?"  Lucy asked.

"Scientific prayer, yes.  Prayer is scientific; it has to be, or it
fails.102 But we also go into physiology, causes of disease, methods of
treatment we do not eschew modern knowledge and practice, but we do not
depend on them, either."

"Modern science too?"  Wanda asked.

"Physics, chemistry, mathematics, astrology we try to obtain a good
working understanding of the laws of creation as taught in the New
Testament and as they reveal themselves in the several sciences of
Man."

Astrology?  Scot wondered.  Well, why not?  It was no doubt every bit
as valid as the economics that had postulated MT as the solution to
Earth's problems of population and resources.  Now so many of the
congressmen who had approved MT had emigrated themselves that no quorum
remained to reverse the directive, and so MT continued like a rampaging
elephant, unstoppable though the Earth be depleted to extinction.

"At any rate," Brother Paul concluded, "I picked up a bit of history,
and don't regret it."

"Certainly not now," Wanda said.

"We're living history backwards.  Every month brings some other
regression.  We'll be seeing real Saxons again soon, I'm sure."

"Well, the Saxons were civilized in their fashion.  They came as
warriors, but after about the year 600 when their conquest of England
was more or less complete they settled as useful citizens.  Many of us
derive from them:

Anglo-Saxons.  No shame in that!"

Many of us, Scot thought, glancing at Brother Paul's dark skin.  A man
without even racial consciousness, let alone prejudice.

"No shame at all," Wanda agreed.

"Or any other derivation."

She's aware, Scot thought.

"We are all of one flesh," Brother Paul said.

"Even the Saxons!"  Wanda added.

And Scot suffered another revelation.

"As our population declines, our civilization recedes!"  he said.

"The two are linked!"

It was one of the few times Brother Paul was startled.

"There may be something to that!"

Wanda, too, was awed by the notion.

"Cause and effect?  Could our whole progress toward civilization have
been governed solely by population pressure?"

"Well, it is said that large animals are more complicated than small
animals," Brother Paul said.

"They are not larger to handle complication; they're complicated to
handle the largeness.  It takes a more sophisticated breathing system
to process the volume of oxygen needed by a large creature, and a more
complex nervous system to handle those refinements.  Why couldn't it be
the same for societies?  Perhaps not on a straight-line basis, but as
an underlying principle that manifests inevitably if not counteracted,
like gravity or entropy.  We five don't need a formal government but a
nation of many tens of millions does.  It is more complicated because
it is larger.  If it does not achieve those special refinements we call
civilization, or if it neglects them, it fragments and loses its
identity."

"Fall of the Roman Empire," Wanda agreed.

"First it degenerated, then it collapsed."

"That's true of all empires," Brother Paul agreed.

"We've always supposed that larger population was the result of
civilized improvements," Wanda said.

"Farming, pottery, metalwork, mass production.  But of course when you
have a city, sophisticated communication, transportation and production
and of course the rule of law these aren't luxuries, they're
necessities.  The city goes haywire if civilization breaks down.  But
as we have seen, depopulation also guts civilization.  Out here in the
sticks we're reverting faster than anyone.  It could be coincidence but
I don't think so."

"And we've taken such pride in man's progress!"  Scot said.

"This makes it no more than a muscle twitch a side effect of our
numbers."

"I wouldn't say that," Brother Paul said.

"If the population enforces change, it is still man's individual
decision that determines the nature of that change.  It is a challenge,
and only those who rise to it can survive.  When lemmings overpopulate,
they march into the sea and drown.  That's muscle-twitch reaction.103
So I think some pride is deserved, in that we have converted our crisis
into a benefit.  Few other species have managed that."

"You have a generous way of looking at things," Wanda said.

"It does you credit.

But it still puts us in our place.  We're losing population, and we're
losing civilization, despite all our experience and knowledge.  If the
Saxons had been as numerous as modern man, they'd have been as
civilized."

"We are the Saxons," Scot said.

"And the Angles and Jutes and Normans and Celts and Romans, all merged
and multiplied."

"But if population really controls civilization," Brother Paul mused,
"what will continued emigration lead to for those of us remaining? What
of Earth?  Is it to be another Atlantis, sinking out of sight?"

They all exchanged glances, having no answer.  Space was being
conquered but what of Earth?104

Winter passed, spring came.  Their nearest neighbors were now their
only real contact with the world, and the neighbors themselves were
isolated.  Occasionally travelers passed on horse or foot, exchanging
news of far places for a night's lodging.  It was a private, peaceful,
harsh, rather satisfying life.

As the summer heat waxed and the garden began to produce, Brother Paul
approached Scot, hand extended.

"It is time for me to go," he said.

"It has been a year, and I have fulfilled my mission here."

Scot had known the man's stay was temporary, but this came as a
shock.

"Already?

You have shown us so much, and there's so much more " "You'll survive
the winter, as you did the last.  You've become independent of Earth's
technology.  You can cope.  But feel free to call on the Holy Order of
Vision if you have need."

"I don't know what to say," Scot said.

"You're like part of the family."

"The family of Man.  We are all brothers."  Brother Paul paused.

"I'm afraid that what I have to say next will be awkward.  But " "I'll
say it," Wanda said, coming up behind Brother Paul.  She took Scot's
hands in hers.

"Scot, I know there has been an an understanding between us, and I
think it would be fair to call it love.  But I have come upon a greater
understanding, and I have to go.  I'm sorry but I'm glad too.  I hope
you'll understand."

Scot was stunned.

"You're going too?"

"To the Holy Order of Vision," she said.

"I think that is what I really want in life."

"Oh with Brother Paul?"  Oddly, he felt no jealousy.

"No.  He will take me there, but only to introduce me.  It is the Order
I want.

I'm finally ready to make a real commitment.  To be a Sister.  It's a
wonderful moment in my life."

"I'm afraid I have, in a very real sense, taken her away from you,"
Brother Paul said.

"Your loss is the Order's gain.  I hope there are no regrets."

It was what she wanted... "It will be empty here without you both of
you," Scot said.  How empty he could not yet imagine; he held the
import at bay, away from his immediate consciousness.  Wanda!  How
could she?

"Perhaps one day you will rejoin us," Wanda said.

"Brothers and Sisters do not have to be celibate, and I know you'd be
good in the Order."  The invitation she was giving him was quite plain,
and it was far more substantial than the one she had given at their
first meeting.  She would marry him if he joined her in this.

She had found her point of irrevocable commitment at last.

But so had Scot.  He shook his head.

"Not my type of thing."

"There can be as much conscience in the negation as in the acceptance,"
Brother Paul said, understanding.

"This farm is your life, and that is good and right for you.  But it
would be kind of you to visit the Order."

"Yes.  I'll do that."  They were being so generous, so understanding;
could he be less?

Wanda approached him again, holding out a length of something.

"This may be in improper taste," she said.

"But considering what you have done for me and what we have meant to
each other, I'd like you to have it.  Will you wear it, Scot?"

It was a little silver cross on a fine chain: symbol of the Holy Order
of Vision.

"Is it all right, Brother Paul?"  she asked.

"I believe so," Brother Paul replied.

"This is not usual procedure, but somehow I feel it will do him
good."

She reached up and put the chain over his head.  Numbed, Scot observed
the flex of her bosom with the motion, and wished she were embracing
him instead of leaving him.  The cross was a poor substitute for Wanda!
But he had to accept it.

They were gone.  The ache of Wanda's absence was terrible.  Scot could
not condemn her; she had done what she had to, openly and honestly, and
unlike Fanny she had faced him with the news and given him a chance to
accompany her.  He had turned her down why, he could not quite explain
to himself.  But where could he rebound from the rebound?

He kept himself busy, trying to forget the ache through hard work. With
Wanda and Brother Paul gone, there was more to do; the gap was more
than emotional.

Lucy took over the cooking and Brand whistled sadly as he built a huge
stack of wood for the winter.  It would be months before snow fell, but
the wood had to be seasoned or it would not burn properly.  They left
Scot alone.

But he found he could not mourn forever.  It was not as though Wanda
was dead, any more than Fanny was.  She had merely found a new life,
perhaps a better one.

He could not begrudge her that.  His sadness was selfish and foolish,
because nothing barred him from rejoining her except his own obstinacy.
Why had he balked at joining the Order?

They started the harvest.  The first early potatoes were ready, grown
in the compost he and Brother Paul had turned: civilized compost, he
called it.  It was important that the crop be handled promptly, so that
there would be no wasteful rush later.  These small potatoes had to be
treated gently.  Scot and Lucy took spading forks and began digging up
the plants and sifting through the dirt for the brown treasures.  This
could not be rushed; they did not want to spear any potatoes on the
tines, or miss any.

The day started cool, but the sun and their continued efforts warmed
them both.

Scot removed his jacket and Lucy her shawl.  Still it was hot, and in
due course they stripped down some more: he to his bare chest and she
to her homemade halter.  Manufactured undergarments were now too much
of a luxury for routine use; clothing, like the rest of society, had
regressed.

They shook off as much dirt as feasible and packed the potatoes
carefully in bushel baskets.  It was a fine crop: they had learned
something in the past year about gardening, and they had kept the weeds
and bugs out and brought buckets of water faithfully all summer.  These
plants had been coddled, and they had responded splendidly.

Lucy leaned over to pick up the basket as Scot placed the last
potato.

"I'll carry it," he said.

"It'll be too heavy for you."  He could not have managed anything like
this before he became a farmer, but he had put on muscle steadily.

In fact, it was clear that his brother Tully had owed much of his
physique to his lifestyle, rather than to heredity.  Scot was by no
means comparable to Brand, but he was much more powerful than he had
been.  It was a healthy life.

"One way to find out," she said.  She caught hold of the two wire
handles, braced herself, and heaved the basket up.

Scot stared.  She had shown him more than her strength.  Her halter,
not close fitting, had fallen away somewhat so that he had a plain view
of her breasts and he was amazed.  He had thought of her as
flat-chested.  She was not; she had extraordinary pectoral development,
as nice as he had ever seen.

After that, he watched her covertly as they worked.  Lucy's face had
cleared, and her skin was now tanned.  She had a healthy glow about
her.  Even her hair had thickened, and it flung about her shoulders in
lithe brown hanks as she moved.

Her legs and arms were slim yet well fleshed: the tonus of healthy
muscle.  Her torso was supple.  In short, she was a remarkably comely
lass, not at all matching his mental picture of her.105 How could he
have missed the change?  He knew part of the answer: Wanda.  When Wanda
was at the farm, he had had eyes for no one else.  He had hoped to
marry her, when she was able to make the commitment.  He had been
willfully blind.  Lucy had changed little by little, like a child
growing up, unnoticed.

They finished the potatoes by noon and went inside for lunch.  Brand
came in, shedding bits of bark and sawdust.  Lucy went out to pick some
fresh tomatoes and turnips for salad; they never took things early, as
there was no effective way to store them in summer.  By planting in
successive stages, they had things ripening all summer and fall, not
all at once: another hint Brother Paul had provided.106 Except for
things like the main potato crop that they intended to store for the
winter; those had to be timed for cool-weather harvest.

The two men munched the hard rolls she had baked.  Originally they had
used yeast to make the loaves rise, but it had run out and they had
adapted to unleavened bread.  It was possible to keep a yeast culture
going indefinitely, using a little for each baking, but it hadn't been
worth the effort.107 The hard bread wasn't bad; they merely had to chew
with more authority.  Many of the necessary reversions turned out to be
suitable after all, like this.

"Ain't she something' in that halter!"  Brand exclaimed genially.

Scot nodded.  Obviously Brand had been aware of the change for some
time, and now knew Scot had observed it too.

"I told you she was worth watching.  Doll who packs a derringer and
looks like that " He broke off.

"But not my type, you understand.  I got no ideas about her."

Implying that Scot did?  A light dawned.

"You tried to tell me way back when, on the roof.  Not to choose the
wrong woman!"

"Yeah."  Brand tore off another hunk of bread with bared teeth.

"I knew Wanda was getting hot for Vision.  Idealistic type, you know.
Luce ain't like that."

Brand had had excellent foresight.  Too bad Scot hadn't understood.
Maybe the man would know about a more practical detail.

"Lucy didn't look this way, before.

How did she change?"

"Good clean livin'," Brand opined.

"Clears up the skin, takes off flab, builds muscle.  Same's happened to
you."

"It wasn't exactly muscle I was thinking of."

"No?  You know what it takes to grind that grinder?"

"Chest muscle!"  Scot said, remembering where he had ached in the early
days, before Lucy took over the grain grinding chore.

Lucy grinding chest muscle.

"What do you know!"  Scot exclaimed, completing his realization.

"Yeah, I figured it would happen.  Makes a difference, don't it?"

"Considerable."

"Yeah.  I remember this floozie I knew.  Went from a 32 to a 36 in four
months, doing chest exercises.  When I tried that grinder, I knew it'd
do."

And Brand had encouraged Scot to let Lucy do the grinding, callous as
that seemed.  He had known!  All that struggling to turn the wheel,
building a substantial layer of muscle not self-torture but
self-development.  And what development!

"But there's more to a woman than a bust!"  Scot exclaimed, ashamed of
his interest.

Brand ran his tongue over his lips as if savoring something.

"Sure there is.  But it's like money.  Sure sweetens the pot!"

Scot shook his head ruefully.

"Brand, you're one smart bastard."108 "Naw.  I just know muscle and
women.  Got to go out and find me one, one day."

"Why don't you?"

"Not my farm."

"What has that got to do with it?"

"I can't just go bringing my friends here.  They might not fit in."

Brother Paul must have cautioned the man, way back at the beginning, to
prevent the toughs he had originally associated with from moving in at
a later date.

Brand had honored that restriction scrupulously.

"Well, we're short a woman now," Scot said.  As if there were a
quota!

"If you find one you like, bring her in."

"Hey, thanks!"

So easily was a problem solved.  For Brand.

Lucy returned.

"We was talking about you," Brand said.

"Really?"  She sounded pleased.  Scot was not.

"Yeah.  We like your " Scot cleared his throat.

"Cupcakes," Brand finished, gesturing with his bread.

"Thanks.  Thought it was about time I showed them off."

Scot glanced at her, surprised.  Was this the pale, thin, frightened
girl he had trapped in the deadfall?  She was enjoying Brand's clumsy
humor.  As though there could be any confusion about the cupcakes he
referred to.

"Women're like that," Brand said.

"You got to jolly 'em along.  Lie to 'em.  Tell 'em how pretty they
are."

"Have a radish," Lucy said, jamming a huge carrot-shaped white radish
into his mouth.

Brand bit into it.

"Hot stuff," he remarked, and Lucy smiled.109 It was incredible to
Scot, but apparently Brand was right: women did like to be jollied
along.  At least Lucy did.  She could not have had much experience with
men prior to her arrival at the farm, but she had come alive after
Wanda left.

It could only be in response to the elimination of competition.  She
had known she could not compete with Wanda, so had never tried.

In the afternoon Brand busied himself with more splitting and stacking.
He had to get enough done so that he could go north to the Browns for a
couple of days to help them with the same chore.  He would bring back a
hundred pounds or so of their excellent dried corn in exchange. Brand
was the finest firewood handler in the area, and this labor exchange
was mutually profitable.  Scot suspected the big man would be looking
about for a suitable woman, too.  At any rate, the sound of the
sledgehammer was loud, signaling his location.

Scot and Lucy worked on the potatoes, carrying them down to the cellar
and transferring them carefully to the bins.  They didn't want to
bruise any by dumping them; that could lead to early spoilage. Potatoes
were their security against starvation.

It could have been a tedious chore, in the cool gloom of the cellar.
But it wasn't.

"You know," Scot said, "I've been working with you for months, and
never really saw you."

"Fifteen months," she agreed.

"Why should you have?  There wasn't anything of me to see, and Wanda
was there."

No illusions on that score!

"I guess you know I never would have noticed you, if she had stayed."

"I know."  Not even any girlish ploys, demurrals, or artifices.  Lucy
was talking business.

"I never thought of myself as fickle.  But when I have my eye on one
girl, I just don't " "That's not fickle, that's loyal," she said.

"Well, what I'm trying to say " "I know what you're trying to say."

She had a bit too much confidence now!

"Oh.  Well " "I'm not sure you'd want me."

"I've gotten to know you pretty well, considering I wasn't looking at
you.  I don't really expect you to believe this, but maybe the reason I
wouldn't go with Wanda was " She reacted as if stabbed.

"Don't say that!"

This was something unexpected.

"I'm trying to be frank with you.  It's only fair.

I wish you'd be frank with me."

"You really want to know?"

"Whatever it is, yes."

She took a deep breath, girding herself, and even in the gloom this had
an eye-popping effect.

"I stole your car."110 At first Scot thought he had misheard,
preoccupied as he was by the legacy of the grinder.  It didn't make
sense!  He had no car.  He'd had a car once, but it had been stolen.

He stared at her, this time not seeing her bust.

"Oh, no!"

"I was hungry," she said.

"I never took a car before.  But my folks were broke, and I couldn't
get a job, and my brother had shown me how, and I just had to try it.
Then you came out too soon.  And I panicked.  I never meant to hurt
anyone."

Scot remembered the handful of material he had gotten.  What a price he
had paid!

"Do you realize what that cost me?"

"I was afraid you were dead.  That I was a murderess.  I couldn't
sleep.  Finally I looked up the address the car was registered to and
you were gone.  It took me a long time to trace you down, and then I
still wasn't sure.  Maybe you were crippled or blind.  So I'd skulk
around at night..."  She shrugged.

"You know the rest."

"I lost my future!"  Scot exclaimed.

"My fiancee, my chance to MT " "I know.  I'm sorry.  I'd make it up to
you if I could but I can't.  But I had to tell you the truth before you
said anything more.  If you didn't go with Wanda because of me well,
now you can go."

He thought of his college education.  But MT had destroyed any
conventional future anyway.  He thought of Fanny and hadn't it been
best that he learn of her fickleness before he married her?  She had
not loved him, only used him.  He thought of his health and knew that
it was better now than it had ever been.  All that he had really lost
was his chance to be a pioneer, to colonize a new planet.  That one
loss had been appalling yet he had already realized that he no longer
wanted to emigrate.  As he had told Brother Paul, he didn't want his
challenges handed to him on a platter.

"You're right.  You can't make it up."

For she had changed his whole life for the better.

"But I would try," Lucy said.

Now he remembered how she had held a gun on the thug leader.  She had
been terrified, but determined to make it up.  She would have killed to
save him from another beating.  Would Wanda have done that?  Or
Fanny?

"What's done is done," he said.

"Do you want me to leave now?"

He halted with a potato in his hand.

"Leave?"

"The farm.  Now that you know."

"What use would there be in that?"

"You must hate me."

Old, old feminine ploy!  But she seemed serious.  Now he remembered how
hard she had worked all year, never complaining, never shirking.  The
weight she had put on was proof of that!  He remembered Brand's opaque
advice: choose the right woman.  Obviously Brand felt Lucy was the one.
And Brand seemed to have pretty good judgment about that sort of thing.
Yet not until today had Scot ever thought of Lucy in that
connection.

"I don't know," he said.

"Let's give it a try."

He put his potato in the bin, brushed some of the dirt off his hands,
took her in his arms and kissed her.  She met him with surprising
eagerness.  Fanny had never shown such enthusiasm.  Neither, for that
matter, had Wanda.

He let her go and pondered the matter.  Fanny would never have slept
with him.

Wanda would have, because she thought it was right in the circumstance
but that had been an intellectual acceptance, rather than an emotional
one.  Wanda had always done what she felt was right.  Lucy was quite
another type.  She was his mind and body if he wanted her.

But wanting wasn't enough.  He had wanted Fanny and Wanda.  More than
either had been able to accept.  Lucy's change of appearance was
miraculous, but he could not afford to let that lead him astray, as it
had twice before.  What he really wanted was to be wanted."I "If you
feel guilty about the car, forget it," he said.

"I can't forget it."

"I mean put it out of your mind, just for a moment, and answer me this:
if you had no guilt, no experience with me before the farm, nothing but
the two of us as we are now how would you feel about me?"

"I don't have any right to say it," she whispered.

"Say what?"  he demanded roughly.

"I love you," she said almost inaudibly.

"Or I would if you'd let me."

"Let you?"

"I don't have the right " "You have the right to do what you damn well
please!  But that's not " "If you'd forgive me..."

Forgive her.  She too had been listening to Brother Paul.  As he should
have.  This was the woman he had not been able to forgive.

"How long would you stay with me?

If."

She spread her hands.

"How long would you want me?"

"That isn't the point!  Twice women have walked out on me!  When would
you walk out?  When you figured you'd paid me back for the car?"

"When you sent me out."

"I just want to settle down!"

"So do I."  But when she said it, it sounded like a prayer.

"With me?  For life?"

"Yes."

Here he was bargaining for something that could not be bargained for!

"Well, I can't say I love you.  But I can forgive you now.  Now that I
understand.  And if you're serious well, the time will come.  I seem to
have been able to make a similar transition before, and I suppose I can
do it again.  I know that's not much of a bargain for you " "It will
do," she breathed.  She came to him, put her arms around him, and
simply hugged.  And he knew that time would get him there."2

He came well outfitted with hiking shoes and backpack.

"What'll you take for a night?"  he inquired.

"News," Scot said.

"Done!"  And the traveler entered.  News had become a commodity second
only to food in value, since the pony express had failed.  Here and
worldwide.

They fed him on what they had, and let him wash in their precious hot
water, and gave him a spare room.  In return, the visitor talked.  His
name was Donald no one bothered with formal surnames these days and he
was on leave from government service, wrapping up personal matters so
that he could emigrate.

He told how the worldwide exodus had now passed one and a half billion
people, for there were now over a hundred MT units scattered across the
planet, all exporting bodies at full capacity.  He described the way
the world was being impoverished in order to provide the necessary
energy, but there was no way to stop it because the people demanded
their continued right to emigrate.  At first they had thought atomic
fusion plants would generate the energy, but these had been caught by
the squeeze of regression: there were not enough sufficiently-trained
atomic engineers to set them up.  Thus there was greater dependence on
the old-fashioned radiation-polluting fission plants, and accumulating
wastes such as plutonium the most toxic stuff in the universe had
forced a number of shutdowns.  The oil fields had been drained dry,
including the vast American shale deposits; the mountains of spent
shale seemed to rival the Rockies.  Now they were back on coal, with
monstrous strip mines tearing it out of the ground, leaving a literal
wasteland and countless tons of sulfur pollution in the atmosphere.

"And if this industrial depletion continues and it will," Donald
assured them, "pretty soon we'll be back on wood.  And when that's gone
well, I'm emigrating now, before it's too late."

Scot was shocked, but he did not comment.  There was, after all,
nothing he could do about this savaging of his home planet.  Earth was
consuming itself, like the fabled snake eating its own tail, and it
could not continue indefinitely.  And all this man wanted was to get
his share of the spoils before the end came!

The traveler was a technician for MT.  He explained how he calibrated
the transport capsules for orientation on each new colony planet.
Fifteen hundred worlds had now been colonized, so changeovers were
frequent.  The computer ran the program, but there were always
unpredictable variations in the subspace that these instantaneous
transmissions traversed.

"We dummy it up with radiation calibrators," he said.

"Little checkers of metal like this."  He showed them a cylinder hardly
thicker than his thumb.

"This emits radiation at a standard rate.  But conditions in subspace
change it slightly.  The computer interprets that shift, and adjusts
the orientation of the capsule to compensate.  Otherwise there would be
a drift each time, only a tiny fraction of a trillionth of a percent
but we matter mit across light-years, and it's cumulative.  Know what
would happen if a capsule came in skewed beyond tolerance?  I'll tell
you," he continued without pause.

"If even one corner of one capsule overlapped the wall of the capsule
building, you'd have matter superimposed on matter.  Boom near total
conversion of the surplus to energy.  Know what that means?  Make the
H-bomb look like a firecracker.  Even a fraction of a gram means
trouble; as it is, the walls get scoured because we can't make a
perfect vacuum in the chamber, and a few molecules of air always
superimpose.  Once there was a last-minute leak, letting in about a
cupful of air, and when the capsule phased in the whole building shook.
So this calibrator " He glanced down at the device and took another
gulp of the precious goat's milk they had traded from the Smiths.  Too
bad, Scot thought, that they had never brought in any animals but none
of them knew enough about animal husbandry to risk it.

"No, I didn't steal this one!  It's worthless.  It's a shade out of
tolerance.  Put this one in a capsule during an orientation run, and
the computer would correct for an erroneous amount and put the next
capsule four feet out of tolerance.  That means about a foot of overlap
with the wall.  Like shooting fish in water: that refraction throws you
off, if you don't adjust for it right.

Sometimes I think how easy it would be to sabotage our whole MT
program: just use the emergency entrance in the back of the transport
chamber building, go in and put this in place of the proper
calibrator."  He made a gesture with his two hands.

"Half an hour, then boom!"

He talked well into the night, and they listened raptly.  This was news
of the world!  At last he took a lamp to his room."3 Suddenly there was
a raging fire.  They were able, later, to reconstruct how it might have
started.  The visitor, unused to kerosene, had set the lamp on an
insecure perch so that it gradually tilted and finally fell.  Or maybe
his arm had knocked it over as he slept.  Foolishly, he had not
extinguished it before retiring.  It had crashed to the floor, its
glass base shattering, the fuel splashing out over the wooden floor,
and the fire had leaped from wick to spillage.

They fought valiantly to save the house, but it was old and dry, and
this was fall, and they had little water.  The task was impossible."4
The three of them lined up, stunned at the enormity of their loss,
watching the terrible blaze.

"Where's our guest?"  Lucy cried suddenly.

"He didn't get out!"  Scot cried.  He launched himself at the house.

"You can't go in there!"  Brand cried, grabbing him.

"There's a life at stake!"  Scot cried, shaking him off.  He plunged
into the great orange maw, wrapping his wetted coat over his head and
shoulders.

And his memory cut off there."5

Brand returned from his spring News visit with grim news of his own.

"Not only did I not find any good woman, all our neighbors to the west
are gone," he reported.

"Their crops and stock too nothing left."

"Without message to us?"  Scot asked.

"They wouldn't do that.  We have trading debts " "Not voluntarily,"
Lucy said.

"But if something wiped them out " "They weren't vandalized," Brand
said.  Just wiped out.  Like the folks just up and left."

"They MT'd?"  Lucy asked, surprised.

"I don't believe that," Scot said.

"They were diehards, like us.  And a lot of them couldn't emigrate."

"Unless MT changed the rules..."  she said, frowning.

"They'd still tell us.  News is paramount.  They wouldn't cut and run
without spreading the word."

"Unless MT really changed, I mean," she continued.

"Suppose they ran out of people to ship, what with all their
restrictions, and had to do some hard recruiting?"

"They'll never run out of people!  Not in the first few years, anyway.
Too many want to go, so long as it's prepaid.  All they have to do is
lower the recruitment standards a notch."

"Suppose they ran out of good worlds, then?  Found some tough planets
nobody wanted to go to " "With super-energy sources on 'em," Brand
said.

"Right there to be mined, cheap."

"So they had to colonize them," she said.

"What would they do then?"

Scot nodded slowly.

"Press gangs, could be.  Send out troops, take everybody in a given
area, MT them to the mining world.  No word to anybody, so there'd be
no panic.  No warning, no reprieve."

Brand agreed.

"That's the way a good raider works.  We must've been just out of their
range."

"So far," Lucy said.

The two of them looked at Scot, and he realized that another crisis of
leadership was upon him.

"We've got to find out for sure," he said.

"We've checked the west.  Now today we'll check north, east and south.
If our neighbors are there, spread the word.  If they're gone " "And
stay out of sight," Brand said.

"Watch for traps."

"I always do now," Lucy said, and smiled at Scot.  At moments of
moderate crisis she became so fetching he had to take her in his arms,
and he did so now.

"Got to get me a woman," Brand muttered.

"Brand, you go south," Scot said.

"Lucy east.  I'll go north.  We don't need to check more than two or
three homesites each way.  We can do that within three hours.  Let's
go!"

"Will you be okay?"  Lucy asked.

"That fire only burned me, it didn't cripple me!"  he snapped, and then
was sorry.

"You're the one to be concerned about.  I was forgetting.  Maybe " "I'm
not crippled either!"  she snapped back.

"Gee, it was such a nice romance while it lasted," Brand said.  They
laughed and kissed.  They fought often, and made up often, and liked it
that way.

They went.  Scot trekked north, taking advantage of cover, moving
through the mounds of rubble and wood that were the former houses of
suburbia.  It had only been three years since the onset of MT, but it
seemed like a generation.  Soon the ravages of termites, rats, weather
and salvage operations would reduce this to a bumpy plain.  Already the
vegetation was prospering, overgrowing the old highways and concealing
much of the wreckage.

Neighbor Brown's farm was several miles distant.  Scot remembered the
last time he had visited there.  Lucy had picked up a splinter that
inflamed her foot, and had been irritable, and had worked herself into
a tantrum.  He had had to tote her away, picking up several scratches
in the process.  His quarrels with Fanny had always been subtle, and he
had always given in at the end.  Wanda had never quarreled at all.  But
Lucy she was a spitfire!  Yet her love was certain.  After they got
clear of the Browns' she had fallen into his arms and they had made
love tempestuously.

That had been the trouble with both Fanny and Wanda: they were too
controlled.

Lucy let go, expunging her emotion, and it was better.  She had
changed, once relieved of the burden of guilt about the car.  Once she
had goaded him into hitting her, and the odd thing about it was that
she was pleased.  He had reacted in a way she understood.  But during
the fire and now he remembered one of those blanked-out fragments of
that experience that had left him so ill Brand had had to use a judo
hold down to prevent her from charging in after him.  This was a face
of love that was new to him but it was, indubitably, love.

Now he closed in on the Browns' farm.  His caution was justified for
there was activity here.  Men were moving about, strangers, armed with
swords and bows.

They were methodically cleaning out the Browns' stores of food and
hides, loading them on a wagon drawn by two fine horses.

Scot knew better than to walk right up.  He was seeing the scourge in
action!  He skulked about, observing, knowing he could not help the
Browns without giving himself away and putting his own farm in peril.
He owed the Browns a lot, and hated to see them in this predicament but
there was a standing agreement in all the neighborhood: first warn
others of the threat, then help friends.  Had that agreement been
honored before, his own farm would have been warned already and
probably the Browns' too.  In this framework, violation of this
common-sense rule could mean disaster to the whole area.  Perhaps
had.

These were not MT personnel.  They lacked the MT insignia, and were too
primitive.  They were members of some kind of tribe, disciplined but of
a low order of technology.  Regression seemed to have a positive
survival force.  The most primitive seemed best able to cope.

"The Saxons!"  Scot breathed, remembering his conversation with Wanda
and Brother Paul.

"The Saxons have come!"

And why not?  They had known that eventually a regression like this
would manifest.  Organization still beat disorganization, and primitive
grouping was the way of the future.  Savage conquering tribes had
formed from the remnants of that civilization116 they had originally
merged into, hardly more than a thousand years before.  These restored
tribes were now laying waste to the settled areas.

He saw Mr.  and Mrs.  Brown and their child seated against a wagon
wheel.  Each had a collar of heavy rope, and the collars were anchored
to the wagon.  They were captives, soon to be slaves, most likely.  His
friends and he could not help them!

This had to be a large tribe, for obviously it was cleaning out all the
farms of the region, methodically.  His own would be next.

Scot backed off, found new cover, and moved silently home.

"The Saxons!"  Lucy said wonderingly when he told her.

"I thought that was a joke."

"Well, I didn't really know who they are," he said.

"But Saxons is what comes to mind."117 "It will do.  Like raiders, only
worse.  What can we do?"

Brand shook his head.

"Brother Paul would say to " "Forgive them," Lucy said bitterly.

"Love them."

"Well, it worked on me," Brand pointed out.

"And on me," she agreed.

"When Brother Paul said, "Help this girl, for we love her' when he
prayed for me, knowing how imperfect I was, I " She shook her head.

"I felt something go through me, something wonderful."  She glanced at
Scot as if expecting him to challenge this.

"But I was lonely, in need of love.  Somehow I don't think the Saxons
are that vulnerable.  They're not criminals.  They're businessmen.  No
conscience."

"Tribesmen, not businessmen," Scot said.

"But the principle's the same.  They're acting for the good of their
tribe, following orders.  We settlers are the enemy or at least we are
the harvest.  They're probably suffering from under population pressure
not enough tribesmen to maintain the level of culture they like.  So
they recruit new members.  We can't blame them for that."

"You've already forgiven them!"  Lucy said.

"Brother Paul had more effect on you than I thought."

Brother Paul had removed Wanda and so paved the way for Scot's true
love: human, not idealistic.  What greater effect could there be than
that?  The forgiveness, too, was important.  But of course she was only
teasing him: she believed in forgiveness.

"I understand their rationale," he said.

"That's not the same as forgiving them.  I understand lots of things I
don't like."

"Do you understand me?"

"No."

They embraced.

"Maybe we could raid a woman from the Saxons," Brand said.

"A

nice, fat, juicy one."

"We can't fight them," Scot said.

"They'll come in force.  Maybe we'd better hide out at the Order."
Brother Paul had left directions for locating the nearest station.

"When would we come out again?"  Lucy asked sharply.

And Brand shook his head negatively.

"She doesn't want to take you to where Wanda is," he muttered.

"That's right!"  she said.

"We're not joiners, we're loners," Scot said.

"That's our style."

"So lets live our style," Lucy said.

"I like it here."

"Maybe we could negotiate with the Saxons," Scot said.

"Find the peaceful compromise.  Brother Paul would approve that."

"Maybe so," Brand agreed dubiously.

"Do you think they would honor a flag of truce?"

Brand shrugged.  Lucy shrugged.

"All right.  I'll try it," Scot said.

"I'll go alone.  If I don't come back, you two go to the Order fast."

But both shook their heads.

"I'll never leave you," Lucy said flatly.  And Brand added: "We're in
this together."

"But they could simply lay hands on us all!"

"Not me," Lucy said.

"I bite."

Scot eyed faint marks on his forearm.

"I know."

"We might have to fight," Brand said, as if testing the water.

"Band together with other settlers.  United front."

"No!  There has to be " He broke off, unable to convince even
himself.

"Anyway, the others can't leave their farms for any such campaign."

"Brother Paul fought," Lucy argued.

"Naw not the same," Brand said.

"He never fought me he only showed me."  But he brightened.

"I could show a Saxon, though the same way."

"Single combat," Lucy agreed.

"Only gentle, Brother Paul's way.  You could do it, Brand.  He taught
you how."

"Yeah."  Brand smiled.

"He wouldn't say no to that."

Scot realized he had overlooked a subtle but pervasive change in the
man.  Brand really cared what Brother Paul thought.  Brand was now a
convert not to the Holy Order of Vision, but to at least part of its
philosophy.  He was sincerely trying to practice nonviolence.

"Well, we can try it," he said.

"First we got to alert the neighbors," Brand said.

They did that, then went north.  Finding the Saxons was no problem: a
party was already heading south, following Scot's prior trail.  Another
primitive skill:

sniffing out faint trails.  He had not thought to erase his tracks.

Scot halted, waiting for them to come up.  The party consisted of two
horse-drawn wagons and three outlying horsemen.  The men wore cloth
trousers, heavy leather slippers, sleeveless shirts and thick woolen
capes, each a different color.  The leader had a horned helmet, and a
two-foot scabbard hung at his side.

Twentieth-century America!  Who would have believed it!

"Saxons, all right," Lucy murmured.

The horsemen reined in smartly, their steeds trampling the earth very
prettily, the picture of animal health and vigor.  Nomads took good
care of their animals."8 Scot raised his right hand.

"We come to parley," he said.

The wagons drew up.  They were simple wooden-sided affairs with spoked
metal-banded wheels.  From one of them descended an older man garbed in
a gray tunic, with a brass collar around his neck.  The gaze from the
shadow of his hood was piercing.

"A Druid!"  Lucy whispered.

"We have come to take you into our culture," the Druid said.

Scot shook his head.

"We do not wish to enter your culture, no offense intended.

We want to be left alone."

"We are prepared to take you by force," the Druid said without
animosity.

"But we hope you will see the advantage of joining us, once you
understand our system."

"We would like to parley with your leader."

The lead horseman put his hand on his sword.  But the Druid, the
evident commander of this party, stopped him with a gesture.

"It is your right.  We are governed by law."

I hope so, Scot thought.

"May we accompany you to your leader in peace?"

The Druid smiled.

"You may.  Flag of truce.  Please join me in my wagon."

And so, nervously, they rode in style along the overgrown highway to
the Saxon camp.  Their host turned out to be a former professor of law,
an intelligent and knowledgeable man.  He called himself simply the
"Priest of Lugus," explaining that Lugus was the Celtic God of the
Harvest very important.

He was able, in this guise, to draw upon his legal expertise to settle
quarrels and assist in organizing their growing tribe: a better life
than he had before.

The arthritis that had made him ineligible for emigration had now
largely abated, and he attributed this to the satisfaction of his
present mode."9 "With the exclusion of the sick, the insane and the
criminal from emigration," he remarked, "the country should by this
time have been overrun by nuts.  But the average person is healthier in
every respect than before.  Like me.  Like, I am sure, you."  He was
not embarrassed to call himself a Druid, practicing magic in the
service of one God among many.

"Each culture develops the system that suits it best," he said.

"Lugus and the other Gods serve us as well today as the Christian God
served us five years ago.  I believe in Lugus; when I invoke his name
he answers.  Without him we would have no harvest.  We must change with
the times; we are closer to nature now."120 Scot decided not to debate
such points.  If the man really believed in a pagan God well, that was
his business.  Why shouldn't religion regress along with everything
else?

"We think of your tribe as Saxons," Lucy ventured.

"We regard ourselves as closer to the Celts," the priest said.

"But it really does not matter, so long as we have a functioning
system.  We stand as a bulwark against the burgeoning chaos fostered by
the depopulation of our sphere."

"There is no chaos here," Scot argued.

"We live at peace with our neighbors."

Like the Browns... "Not for long," the Druid said.

"You have not yet encountered the Huns or the Scythians."

"The Huns!"  Lucy exclaimed.121 "I assure you, you would prefer life
with us," the priest said.

"But we must have the strength of numbers, or we and you shall fall to
more primitive societies."

Scot didn't like to admit it, but the man was making some sense.  It
was, it seemed, impossible to prevent the cultural regression but the
worst aspects of it could be staved off by choosing sides wisely.
Still, he preferred independence.

They approached the Saxon camp.  This was built up with huge earthworks
topped by a log-and-mud plaster wall that looked quite formidable.  It
would be difficult indeed to storm that from outside and once in, the
intruders would be unlikely to get out, unless allowed.  Armed sentries
paced the ramparts, and bowmen peered from the embrasures.

Scot was amazed at this substantial evidence of the onset of the past.
This was a primitive walled city, here within twenty miles of his farm.
History had become tangible.

"You are not conversant with our code of laws," the priest said.

"Would you like me to represent you before the King?"

So Saxons or Celts had kings!  But of course they had to have a leader
of some sort, whatever the nomenclature.  Democracy was a comparatively
modern system.

And anyway, this was not the literal restoration of history, but an
adaptation to the needs of the present, influenced by the most
convenient examples available.  Those who heeded the past were doomed
to relive it...122 Scot wasn't used to snap decisions, but he
recognized that indecision could be hazardous.  Should he trust this
educated neo-pagan?  Part-way, maybe.

"We would appreciate your counsel, but must represent our own
interest."

"Well put," the Druid said affably.

The guard at the gate challenged them, and they halted.

"Three settlers for parley," the priest said.

"Safe conduct."

"They must have supervision," the gate-captain said.

"Present."

"Pass, then."

It was, indeed, a small city.  Chickens fluttered out of their way, and
goats followed them inquisitively.  All around, men and women were at
work.  A blacksmith hammered on the metal rims for new wheels.  Women
sewed hides together.  Children plaited thatch for the roofs of the
simple wooden cabins.  A group of wild-looking dogs set up a clamor
from a pen: those would be vicious hunting canines.  No, no escape from
this stronghold!

"There's Brown," Lucy said.  Sure enough, their former neighbor was
sitting on the ground, staring dully into it.

"Don't look like he's enjoying his new life," Brand muttered.

"Involuntary recruits are put on thirty-day captive status," the Druid
said.

"After that they are allowed limited freedom.  In a year they can be
granted tribal citizenship, depending on their attitude.  Then they can
rise in the hierarchy.  The process is faster for voluntary recruits,
and the captive status is dispensed with."

"Relax and enjoy it," Lucy said.

"So what if it's rape?"

"Your tongue could lead you to what you fear," the Druid warned her.

Scot knew now: he had to help their friends the Browns out of this
mess.  But how?

They approached a burly man who had the air of authority.

"Your Highness," the Druid said, "these three settlers want to parley.
They are here under flag of truce."

So this was the King!  He seemed to have no special court or finery.
But perhaps this was for the best.

"Parley?  What parley?"  the King demanded irritably.

"I sent you out to incorporate 'em, not debate with 'em."

"We met them on the way, coming to us," the Druid said.

"Thus by action and expression, they came to parley.  We are bound to
honor that, for we are civilized."

The King puffed out his red cheeks.

"If you say so, Lugus," he muttered.

"But don't push your luck past the harvest."  He turned to Brand.

"What's on your mind?"

"This one leads their party," the Druid interposed smoothly, indicating
Scot.

"Well, let 'im speak his piece!"

The King evidently owed his position to factors other than diplomacy,
Scot realized.  Blunt talk might be best.

"We only want to be left alone," he said.

"We'll be happy to trade with you and exchange information, but we
don't want to be part of your tribe.  In fact, all the settlers of this
area, like the Browns, should be freed."

"So?  How you figure to defend against the Huns?"

"We'll parley with them too."

The King burst into laughter, not humorous.

"Look over there," he said, pointing with a dirty fingernail.

On the window-ledge of his cabin-palace was a row of human skulls,
their eye-holes like windows.

"Those are the folks we sent to parley," he explained.

"We raided 'em and recovered our dead but that's all.  Their lines are
within fifty miles of here, and they're getting stronger all the time.
Anybody we don't recruit, they will.  We tried letting some settlers go
and now they're Huns."123 "Nevertheless," the Druid interposed again,
"we are more civilized.  We prefer not to use coercion.  We feel sure
you will see the logic of our position."

"There is logic in ours, too," Scot said.

"We have a functioning farm and a workable neighborhood society.  You
could make more profit in honest trade with us than you could by
enslaving us.  Free enterprise is still the best incentive."

"We can't tolerate enemies in our midst," the King said.

"They are not enemies," the Druid pointed out.

"They merely wish to have the status of allies, rather than serfs."

"Allies can fight," the King retorted.

The Druid turned to Scot.

"Are you prepared to take up arms in support of our defense against the
Huns?"

A trap!

"No.  Only in defense of our farm and friends."

"I thought so," the King snarled.

"Druid, take 'em in."

"They are here under flag of truce, Sire."

"Then see 'em back to their own farm then take 'em in."

The Druid spread his hands.

"I'm afraid that's it," he said to Scot.

"If you will not join us voluntarily today, we shall have to use force
tomorrow.  But I must advise you that the lot of involuntary recruits
is worse."

"You said.  We saw," Lucy said.

"We prefer to settle the matter by single combat," Scot said
regretfully.

The King's interest perked up.

"Now?"

Scot swallowed and nodded.

"Our champion to meet yours.  Unarmed combat, no bloodshed."  And Brand
stepped forward.

But the King waggled his forefinger.

"You issued the challenge; we choose weapons.  Swords to the death."

Brand faltered.

"I can't kill," he said.

"I swore " "Uh-huh," the King said contemptuously.

But again the Druid stepped in.

"The oath of non bloodshed is valid, particularly in these times of
inadequate personnel.  After all, a dead serf is a useless serf.  We
could arrange a combat to terminate with yield."

The King scowled.

"Priest, you're pushing!"

The Druid held up his left hand, the fingers curving into an odd
configuration.

It did not seem to be a threat, but the King stepped back.  Scot
decided it was a magical gesture and the King believed in magic.  Just
then a cloud covered the sun, bringing sudden shadow and a cold
breeze.

"All right, all right," the King muttered.  He turned to Brand.

"All right, this one time.  A yield-fight."

The Druid let his hand drop, and the sun came out again.  Of course it
was a trick of timing; the Druid must have observed the progress of the
cloud, and known exactly when and for how long it would intercept the
sun.  But it was an impressive maneuver.124 The King clapped his hands
loudly, and suddenly all the tribesmen ceased their labors and gathered
in a great circle.  Primitives loved a spectacle!

"I never in my life used a sword," Brand said to Scot.

"Feint," Lucy suggested.

"Make him parry you then slip under and throw him with your hands."

"Hey, sure!"  Brand agreed, brightening.

A Saxon retainer brought Brand a gleaming two-foot blade, double-edged
but with a blunt point.

"We're in luck," Scot said.

"No point on it.  They don't thrust, they just cut.  Much easier to
deal with."

Now the Saxon champion entered the makeshift arena.  He was a huge man,
larger than Brand, and his bare arms were tautly muscled.  That was not
encouraging.

The King clapped again.

"Go to!"  he cried.

Scot had increasing misgivings as he watched.  Brand was obviously
uncertain, while the Saxon was confident.

Brand tried gamely.  He stepped in swinging.

The Saxon danced nimbly aside and whacked Brand on the posterior with
the flat of his blade.  The assembled tribesmen laughed appreciatively.
The blow could readily have been fatal, had it been fatally intended.

Lucy shook her head.

"Snowball in hell," she muttered.

"These people have really trained in the sword."

Brand faced about in time to see the Saxon's sword whistling toward his
head.  He jumped backward, falling to the ground, his heels going high.
There was more laughter.

This was no fight this was entertainment.  And they were committed to
join the tribe when Brand lost.

Brand got up and stalked the Saxon again.  He swung.  This time the
Saxon parried, sliding his blade down along inside Brand's and
twitching expertly.  Brand's weapon flew from his hand and landed in
the dirt to the side.

The Saxon, smiling, cuffed Brand with his left hand.  That was his
mistake.  Brand caught that hand, turned, and ducked and the Saxon
tumbled over his left shoulder to land heavily on his back.  There was
a gasp of surprise and pleasure from the audience, and Lucy clapped her
hands.

Brand followed up immediately with an arm lock on the Saxon's sword
arm, putting pressure on the elbow until the man yelled and dropped his
weapon.  Scot remembered seeing Brand and Brother Paul practice such
holds always reiterating the caution that they should be released the
instant the opponent yielded, for it was indeed possible to break an
arm.

"And there it is," Lucy said.

"Brother Paul strikes again."

"A bloodless victory," Scot agreed.  What a relief!

Brand let go and stepped back.  The Saxon sat up, rubbed his arm, and
looked about.  Then he snatched up his fallen sword and launched
himself at Brand.

"Hey!"  Scot and Lucy cried together.

Brand, caught completely by surprise, was overwhelmed.  The Saxon
bowled him over, whacked him with the flat, and finally put the blade
to his throat.  If he moved, his neck would be cut open.

"He yields," the Druid said.

"Well, so much for that," the King said.

"Does this count as voluntary or involuntary membership?  Well, assign
'em quarters and go clean out their farm.

We'll work out the details later."  He turned away.

"You can't do that!"  Scot cried, running into the arena.

"It was a foul.  Your champion yielded!"

"I did not!"  the Saxon snapped, backhanding Scot across the cheek. The
blow was like the thrust of a car fender.  Dazed, Scot tumbled to the
ground and sprawled there ignominiously.

The Druid came over to help him up before Lucy could get there.

"You must not evince bad sportsmanship," he murmured.

"That's a sure ticket to captive status."  Then he stared.

"You wear the Cross?"

Scot's cross had flung out in the course of his fall, but the chain was
unbroken.

"Yes," he said, not caring to explain further.  What did these
treacherous Saxons care about Wanda and her conversion?

"A crucifix?"

"No.  Holy Order of Vision.  But about that battle " "Which Brother?"

"Brother Paul.  Look, we saw your champion yield!  That's why Brand let
him go, instead of breaking his arm.  He " But the Druid was moving
away.  He caught up to the King.

"Your Highness, there is a new factor.  This man " "Oh come off it!"
the King snapped.

"He wears the Cross of the Order of Vision.  His protest must be
heard."

"Not by me, it mustn't!"  And the King stalked into his cabin.

"Still, it must be heard," the Druid said.  He returned to Scot.

"We retain reciprocal conventions," he said.

"I know Brother Paul.  Tall blond man, very thin " "Forget it," Scot
said.

"Obviously a different man.  Ours was chubby and black."

"Merely testing," the Druid said.

"I wanted to be sure the Cross was legitimate."

"It's not.  I never joined the Order.  This was given me by a friend
who did."

"But it came from Brother Paul?"

"Ultimately, yes.  But " "As a matter of professional relations, we
must uphold its validity.  I would not want the Order of Vision to
think the Order of Druids was remiss.  Some of our neophytes train
there.  Very good schooling.  You shall have your hearing."

"All I want is justice!"  Scot said.

"Brand plainly won, and " "You have a grievance.  Obviously your man
subscribed to a different code than our champion, and I failed to so
advise you.  He supposed that a cry indicated surrender rather than
mere pain.  Hence the confusion."

"I guess that's it," Scot agreed.

"Brand could have broken his arm " "Since the King declines to listen,
you must use another avenue of redress.  You must sit outside the house
of the one who wronged you."

"Sit outside his house?"  Scot asked, confused.

"Without food or drink.  Until he accedes."

"Why would my sitting and starving make any difference to him?"

"It is a matter of honor.  He will not take sustenance himself so long
as you remain."

"Oho!"  Scot saw the relevance now.  It amounted to a personal
challenge to the warrior.  Or to his sense of honor.125 "What are you
going to do?"  Lucy asked.

"Remember " Remember that he wasn't strong, after the fire.  He wished
she'd stop reminding him!  Scot turned to the Druid.

"While I do this what about my friends, my farm, my neighbors?"

"All will be held in abeyance, on my authority," the Druid assured
him.

"But beyond this I cannot go, even for the sake of reciprocity.  I am a
Saxon, as you put it, subject to my King."

"Thanks," Scot said.

"Where's his house?"

"Here."  The Druid stopped.

"I suggest, however, that you wear your Cross where it can be seen."

"The cross means nothing!  I never joined the " "If I were you, I would
reconsider that statement.  The Cross is serving you well in need."

"You, a pagan, say that?"

"The Cross is holy to us too.  Do not dishonor it."

Brother Paul had commented on that.  The cross predated the crucifix as
a holy symbol, and was not specifically Christian.  And apparently it
gave him a special status here not because he was anything special, but
because it was.

Scot sat cross-legged outside the Saxon champion's door, and waited. It
seemed rather ineffective as a protest, but what else was there?

After a while the Saxon came out, glanced at him, wrinkled his nose,
and went back inside.  So much for this matter of honor.

The sun was hot, and very quickly Scot became thirsty.  Part of it was
psychological, he knew but most of it was real.  He had not anticipated
anything like this, and had not eaten heavily.

The tribesmen of the camp gave him only passing glances.  Lucy and
Brand were given bread and milk and allowed to settle not far off. Scot
could talk to them, but it occurred to him that it might be smarter not
to; perhaps his silence would be binding on his adversary also.

His legs went to sleep, but he dared not shift position.  He was not
sure of the rules of this challenge, the fine print, and could not take
a chance.  So he jiggled around just enough to restore some painful
circulation, and waited.

At dusk the Saxon emerged.  He stared down at Scot.

"Exactly what grievance do you have against me?"  he demanded.

Was it safe to answer?  It must be!  It was only right that the accused
be advised of the charge.

"Our champion had you helpless and in pain, disarmed.  He thought you
had yielded when you screamed and dropped your weapon, so he let you
go.

Then you attacked him, and knocked me down when I protested."

"To you I apologize; I acted impetuously," the man said.

"But as regards him: I never yielded.  The scream was but a ruse."

"Brand did not yield either.  The Druid yielded him, not us and the
Druid did not have authority to do so."

"He yielded him else I would have slain your man."

"Not if Brand had broken your arm, when he had you.  No one could have
escaped that arm lock

"Ridiculous!"  the Saxon snorted.  He stomped into the house.

"Do you sleep?"  Scot called after him.

The Saxon whirled, scowling.

"I do not sleep!"  He stomped back to Scot and sat cross-legged before
him.

So it was true!  The aggrievor could not partake of any refreshment his
aggrieved eschewed.  A fitting contest!

Night set in.  The stars appeared, and it became cold.  Scot's thirst
abated, but now he was shivering.  He had not dressed for this
either!

"What do you hope to gain from this?"  the Saxon asked him from the
darkness.

"The freedom of my farm," Scot said.

"And of my neighborhood.  I owe debts to friends like the Browns."

"If you wanted freedom, why didn't you emigrate?"

"I belong on Earth.  Why didn't you emigrate?"

"Bum rap."

Meaning the man had had a criminal background or something similar.

"Me too, actually," Scot admitted.

That might account for the rapid reversion of American culture right
back to this tribal society.126 Subtract most of the healthiest,
soundest, motivated people, let the rest scramble for survival amid
inadequate supplies and energy and here he was, fighting for his
dwindling rights via the advice of the priest of a pagan Harvest God.
The thugs Brand had come with had wanted property; the Saxons wanted
people.  That was another measure of the status of the world.

They conversed irregularly as the chill night dragged on.  This was as
much to verify alertness as from sociability.

"Look I only did what the King ordered," the Saxon said at last.

"Your beef is with him."

"Can the King be called to account for this?"

"The King?  You kidding?  You ask, you don't tell him."

"That's what I thought.  The King is inviolate.  But you're his
champion.  I must deal with you."

"Look, man I've got to keep fit for combat!  I need my food and drink
and sleep.

What if the Huns should come?"

"I sympathize.  I'd like to see you in top condition for the Huns.  All
you have to do is admit you were beaten.  Then we'll go home and you
can feast."

"I wasn't beaten!"  the man roared.

"Well, admit there was a misunderstanding, then.  It's little enough,
considering that our whole livelihood is at stake, not yours.  Maybe we
could run the fight over."

Luckily, the Saxon objected.

"To run it over would be admitting I didn't take it the first time.  It
would smirch my status, and could make the King appoint someone else as
Champion.  Then I'd have to go back to the fields."

Scot didn't answer.  He saw that more than the warrior's pride was at
stake, and that made it harder.

Somewhere around midnight, by the rotation of the stars, a person
emerged from the house with a stone lamp.  By the wavering light Scot
saw it was a young but hefty woman.

"Want a blanket, Fred?"

Fred?  Well, a Saxon warrior could have any name he chose!

"Bitsy, you know the code.  Not unless he takes one."

Hospitality?  No merely equality.  Honor forbade the Saxon's taking
advantage of such a comfort alone; it would be construed as a
prejudicial weakness.  Scot was coming to appreciate the Saxon code
more and more.  It threw the burden of decision on the person most
strongly motivated.  The one in the right.

The girl came to Scot.

"Blanket?"

Why not?  The Saxon could probably withstand the cold better than Scot
could.

"Thank you."

She gave it to him, then went for another.

"Wife?"  Scot inquired when they were alone again.

"Sister."  Then, as if appreciating the small comfort that had been
allowed, the Saxon amplified, "Nice kid.  Never done wrong in her life.
Our folks MT'd, but she had a man who couldn't, so she stayed.  Then it
broke up, and she was stuck.

I've been seeing after her."

"I know how it is," Scot agreed.

"My fiancee MT'd without me.  But later I found a better woman.  Your
sister should have no trouble."

"She's big, like me some say fat.  But it's not fat, it's a big frame
and muscle.

She's twenty now, in her prime.  I could make somebody take her, but
she won't have it that way.  Oh, if I lost her as spoils of war she'd
go but she won't take it as charity.  She's near as stubborn as I am.
So she cooks for me, and washes.

Good at it, too."

"I'm sure," Scot agreed politely.

"The pretty ones always go somewhere else, always get a man, even if
they can't do a thing."

"That's for sure!"  the Saxon said emphatically.

"Lot more to a woman 'n looks!

Bitsy can carry a dressed hog.  Where's the pretty girl can do that?"

Scot visualized the increasingly large wild pigs that roamed the
countryside.

Many would weigh over a hundred pounds, slaughtered and dressed.  Brand
had brought a couple down with the good bow they had traded from
another neighbor, as well as a few of the migrating wild bovines.

"Mine could, maybe," he said.

"She's a small girl, but she's got chest muscle you wouldn't
believe."

"I believe," the Saxon said.

"I saw her.  But who else?"

"Not many."127 The man grunted affirmatively, and there was another
long round of silence.

Morning came, and still they sat.  Scot felt the need to relieve
himself, but of course could not.  The Saxon looked uncomfortable, and
now Scot realized that his own lack of a big meal and drink was a net
advantage.

He fought off waves of sleepiness, determined not to relent.  The Saxon
camp came alive, ignoring them.  The Druid passed by and nodded
affirmatively.

"There is an easier route," he said.

"If you would agree that some justice lies on either side, and exchange
tokens of compromise, this becomes unnecessary."

"We must be free," Scot insisted.

"You can be free within reasonable limits.  Deliver the pinch of
incense to the altar of Baal I speak figuratively, of course; Baal is
no Celtic God swear fealty as vassal to the King and perhaps he will be
disposed to return you to your farm.  You would pay seasonal tribute to
him in return for his protection from the Huns.  Is that
unreasonable?"

"It's one way of doing it," Scot said.

"And you," the Druid said persuasively to the Saxon.

"Could you not spare some token as a sign of amity?  This man has
challenged you honorably, and he bears the Cross of the Holy Order of
Vision brothers in spirit to we Druids.128 You would sacrifice no honor
in this gesture " "I never sacrificed any honor!"

The Druid returned to Scot.

"I can virtually guarantee that the King would accept your vassal
ship.129 I have reasoned with him, pointing out the significance of
your association with the Order of Vision.  We want no quarrel with
them."

"They don't quarrel," Scot said.

"Their whole philosophy " "Ah, but the King does not realize that."

It was too smooth, too ingenious.  Scot distrusted it.  This man spoke
of religion, but he lacked Brother Paul's fundamental integrity.  Scot
remained sitting, though his tongue ached for water.

"I will not practice deceit," he said.

"One must accede to the times.  When in Rome " "I'm in this challenge
because I'm not in Rome," Scot said firmly.

"And not in the Saxons, or Celts or whatever.  I intend to be my own
man, on my own farm, with my own wife and own friend.  And I must help
my neighbors, who have helped me in the past.  If I start compromising
now, where will it end?"

The Druid shook his head and turned away.

"If you should change your mind, it can still be arranged," he said.

When the Druid was out of hearing, the Saxon spoke.

"For what it's worth, I agree with you.  These smooth operators can
twist things about so you don't know which end is up, but what's right
is right, and you sure told him."

Scot was surprised.

"Even though I'm opposing you?"

"Well, I'd go along with some deal, just to get this over with but I
won't compromise my honor.  Why should you compromise yours?"

"I'm glad you understand," Scot said.

He had survived the night fairly well, thanks to the blanket.  But now
the rising sun came down directly in his face, and his thirst
intensified.  He lacked the sheer mass of the Saxon; how could he
outlast this man?  But how could he quit, giving up his freedom?

"You see, my wife is pregnant," Scot said, as much to distract himself
from his discomfort as to inform his opponent.130 "I don't want my
child to grow up in a commune."

"If it were up to me, I'd let you go," the Saxon said.

"But I can't say I lost a fight when I won."

"No, of course not," Scot said.  Impasse, again.

"Your champion you called him Brand where's his woman?"

"Brand has particular tastes," Scot said.  He had to lick his mouth
several times to wet it enough for clear talk.

"He wants a woman, but well, most are too frail and small."131 "He
doesn't know beans about swording, but he can sure use his hands."

"He's very strong, but really very gentle too."

The conversation lapsed again.  Toward noon Scot's head seemed to heat
up, and the thirst became ravening.  He screwed his eyes shut and hung
on.

"Do you sleep?"  the Saxon inquired hoarsely.

Scot's eyes popped open.

"No!"

Eyes open, he suffered.  The image of the man ahead of him wavered,
turned color, became a shimmering flame.  Like the fire of his house,
that had wiped him out but for Lucy and Brand and the Browns and the
community of neighbors.  His hair had grown back, and so had his skin,
but he had never recovered full vigor.

A second time, a stranger had devastated him and would there be some
redeeming later development, as with Lucy?

He blinked, and the flame abated.  Eye fatigue, he knew and brain
fatigue too.  He had been awake thirty hours not an undue period for an
active man, but much harder for a tired, hungry, thirsty, stationary
one.

Was it really worth it?  The Saxons were not a bad tribe, as he
understood them.

They had honor and a degree of culture, and life with them would in
many respects be easier and more secure than life on the diminished
farm.  As Earth continued to regress, such tribes would become
increasingly important.  Why buck the inevitable?

Yet he would not yield.  He had always capitulated to Fanny, and she
had left him.  He had gone along with Wanda and she had left him.  He
had fought with Lucy, and she remained.  A poor parallel, suspect as
both example and analogy but his fevered brain clung to it.  He did
better when he resisted to the bitter end.

If only the regression of Earth would stop, so that life could settle
down and civilization resume its forward progress.  But that could
never be, so long as MT continued to empty the planet.

MT empty!  A pun, hideously funny and unfunny.  Earth was dying in that
sad mirth.

I am Earth whom thou persecute st So many idealistic colonists, like
his brother Tully, setting out to make brave new lives on brave new
worlds, while all the time the mother planet needed their energies
most.  The same enthusiasm and techniques they used to tame wilderness
spheres would restore this planet too, if only applied.  The windmills,
water wheels, solar collectors, gardens, respect for wilderness
ecology.  There was wilderness enough right here!  Why couldn't these
colonists see that the fittest planet to colonize was Earth itself?132
"The fittest planet for man to colonize is Earth!"  he exclaimed,
snapping out of his reverie.  The revelation was like a gentle light
surrounding him.

"There is the answer!"133 "How's that again?"  the Saxon asked.

"My quarrel is not with you.  It's with MT," Scot said.

"There's a mouthful!"  the Saxon agreed.

"All those dopes thinking they'll do better somewhere else, when
they're the ones fouled up Earth.  Drawing off all the gas and coal for
the machine, leaving us nothing.  They ought to stay home and clean up
their own mess."

Scot struggled to un kink his legs.  Pain lanced through them and he
fell over.

"Take it easy," the Saxon said, rising easily and helping him up.

"You've had a rough night."

Lucy and Brand hurried over.

"What happened?"  Lucy asked worriedly.

"Is it your burns again?"

"We don't want to fight the Saxons," Scot said.

"I will proffer fealty as vassal to the King, asking only that he grant
my neighbors the same opportunity."

"Very good," the Druid said, arriving at the scene.

"I am so glad to discover this difference resolved."  He turned to the
Saxon, raising one fine eyebrow.

"And you have you some gesture?"

"A blanket?"  the Saxon inquired.

"They have blankets at home.  Would you want to be considered less than
generous?

Have you nothing that would portray your magnanimity in victory,
unmistakably?"

"Let him alone," Scot snapped.

"He's a good man.  He did right, the way he saw it.  He doesn't owe me
anything."

"I like you better every time you open your mouth," the Saxon said to
Scot.

"I

would like to give you something not in payment for anything, but
because you are a man I can respect."

"Thanks," Scot said.

"I respect you too.  But all I want is to go home."

"With your wife and unmarried champion," the Druid said.

"Isn't it too bad he never found a good enough woman, while on the
other hand " The Saxon's mouth dropped open.

"You clever swine!  You don't mean ?"

"Why not try it?"

"All right, I will!"  The Saxon turned to Brand.

"Sir, you fought well, considering that you have no experience with the
sword.  Though your friend has withdrawn his protest, I respect the
courage of his stand and concede that there could have been some
misunderstanding in the course of our encounter.  I ask whether you
will accept, as a token of amity between us, my sister."  He drew Bitsy
forward by the elbow.134 Brand's mouth dropped open.  So did Scot's.

"It would be discourteous to decline such a well-intentioned gesture,"
the Druid said to Brand.

"Unless you find her unappealing...?"

Brand remained speechless, looking at Bitsy.  Scot looked too,
observing how much more substantial she was in daylight.  Pretty in her
way, but of heroic proportions.

"This is very sudden," Lucy said.

"Why not let them talk it over Brand and Bitsy?  By themselves."

"Come, eat, drink with me," the Saxon said to Scot.

"You and your woman.  They can talk meanwhile."

But Scot could tell by the way Brand was looking at the young woman
that she was exactly what he had waited for.  And Bitsy was already
flushing her appreciation of that gaze.  Like Scot himself, she wanted
to be wanted.  Very little discussion would be required.135 It was a
good meal and a good deal.  They stayed another night, and departed for
the farm with Bitsy in the morning.  The Browns and three other
families were granted release on similar terms, after the Druid and the
Saxon champion described Scot's notions of integrity to the King.  His
oath of fealty could be trusted.

Life returned to normal.  They built another sod house for the new
couple, and shared food and work as before.  Bitsy was a workhorse of a
girl with a gentle nature, a fitting companion for Brand.  Her presence
also made for amiable relations with the Saxons, for she kept in touch
with her brother.

In due course there were children, and Scot thought his happiness was
complete.

But something gnawed at him.  How could he settle for his comfortable
existence as a farmer, while MT continued to decimate Earth?  It was
not enough to secure his own welfare, when that of others suffered.

What was civilization, anyway?  Was it each family for itself, and to
hell with the world?  He remembered his conversation with Brother Paul
while pitching compost.  The Holy Order of Vision would not take the
comfortable, self-serving route; it sought out the problem and put its
energies and knowledge there.

Without Brother Paul's help, Scot's farm probably would have failed. It
was a philosophy Scot had benefited from.  Was he to ignore it, now
that Now that his turn to contribute had come?

He talked to Lucy about it.  She argued but would not directly oppose
him.

"I'm with you whatever you decide."

And Brand: "Brother Paul would say do it.  Myself, I'd do it.  But I
don't want Bitsy or the kids getting involved..."

He checked it out with the Druid and the King.  Both gave astonished
approval.

"It just might work," the Druid said.

"Three to one you'll die in the attempt but what an adventure!  To get
even with MT after all these years..."

So at last it was decided.  Scot would undertake his mission to save
Earth.

Bitsy took the children to visit her brother, freeing Scot and Lucy and
Brand for the mission.  Once the location of the MT transporter had
been secret, with the emigres brought in by sealed trains, but now the
disappearance of the civilized communications network had changed all
that.  Every potential emigre had to make his own way to the station,
usually by horseback.  All roads, almost literally, ran to MT; the
population and resources of Earth were still being drained into this
maw.  MT the maw of Baal, consuming Earth's families.

Scot and his party walked.  Horse farms were no longer adequate to the
need, and even ponies were too expensive for the common man.  But the
MT trail was still well trodden.

Five years had made a phenomenal difference.  Once the area had been
built up with houses, small business and industry.  Now only the shells
of the buildings remained.  Most had been gutted by fire, some by
vandalism, others by neglect.

Some stood partially dismantled, with pipes and chimneys projecting up
like alien architecture.

The people were gone.  Scot knew that no more than half could have been
accounted for by the MT exodus; it would take ten years at full
capacity to deplete the full population of Earth.  The rest had gone in
a lesser migration: to the larger metropolitan areas, where electric
power remained, or to the more open country where it was possible to
farm or range with the Saxons or Huns.  Or they had died.  He didn't
like to think how many had gone that last route but it had to be an
unconscionable percentage.  There had been the thug ravages of the
expanding fringe, and the Saxon/ Hun wars, and then the Beaker People
incursions in America, and similar campaigns elsewhere in the world. So
many families had been unable to maintain themselves amidst the
disintegrating society.  Scot's farm had been lucky, socially and
geographically.  Survival was a primitive business, and fitness was as
much a matter of fate as capability.

The grass of bygone lawns was tall, though the snow was not yet off it.
The reed like stalks of it thrust up through the slush.  Small trees
were rising, the hardwoods bare, the evergreens hearty.  The occasional
large stumps showed the fate of the full-grown trees as heating fuel
had become scarce.  But as if in compensation, hedges had become walls
of brush, narrow inlets of wilderness.

Pavement was overgrown, grossly cracked where the concrete showed. Here
and there the street had collapsed, eroded from below by the sewer
system.136 But the people's loss had been the animals' gain.  Dogs
skulked, hairy, gleaming-eyed wolflike creatures, no longer the friend
of man.  Rats peeked out from the rubble.  Cats had gone wild too it
had not been much of a change for them.  Birds were everywhere not the
pigeons and ducks and chickens associated with man, but true wild
species, including owls and hawks.  More striking was the resurgence of
forest and meadow life deer, bear, porcupines, weasels, beavers, and a
number of newly-wild cattle, horses and swine.  They used the remaining
intact houses for shelter and migrated as far south as they needed to
each winter to find food.

The animals, while not unduly shy, tended to stay clear of the small
human party.  But the occasional human remnants did not.  More than one
ragged group had approached brandishing crude stone-age weapons, only
to retreat in the face of Brand's sword.  They could not know that
Brand would not actually use that sword on a human being.

Lucy stopped.

"Deadfall ahead," she said.137 "I don't see it," Scot said, peering
about.

"I've had experience," she reminded him, and smiled.  She was so pretty
in that instant that he had to kiss her.  As always, she accepted the
gesture not graciously but eagerly, then continued.

"The snow is smoother on that one patch.

Elsewhere it is tracked up, uneven.  But there they cleared it off,
made a level surface, and waited for snowfall to cover it over.  The
animals detour around it, see no tracks.  That trap is for people."

Scot saw it now.  A square about eight feet on a side, too even.

"I don't like traps set for people," he said.

"Let it pass," Brand said.

"Nothing to gain by violence."

How much they had changed!  Scot had once set a trap for a person and
caught more than he anticipated!  and Brand had once lived by violence.
Brother Paul's influence seemed to be running a long, cumulative
course, though they had never seen him again.  Or perhaps marriage and
family had provided other values for both men.138 They skirted the
deadfall.  They moved on at the rate of about thirty miles a day, as
they were seasoned walkers and campers.  They brought down occasional
animals with bow and arrow, no more than they needed to eat, carefully
skinning them and salvaging the hides for future processing and use.
Along the way they made hidden caches, as they could not carry these
hides all the way to MT.  Not while they were curing.  To be a
primitive hunter was to avoid waste, for the interaction of nature was
of overwhelming importance.  They always made token offerings to the
nature gods, for these were now much more important than that distant
God of civilization.

As they neared the MT complex, civilization upgraded.  The houses were
in better repair, and more and more of them were occupied.  The
wildlife retreated, and tame animals reappeared.  Fifty miles out they
passed the electric perimeter.  Now there were cars on the road, and
then buses, and even a train cruising along the adjacent tracks, smoke
and steam puffing from its stack.

Ten miles out the traffic was thick, with stoplights glaring and horns
honking.

A factory chimney spewed foul smoke into the atmosphere next to the
lovely cut-glass facade of a church.  What remained of the snow was
stained gray.  Beer cans littered the fringe of the street, and waste
paper and cigarette butts clogged the drainage vents.

Scot halted abruptly, stung by an unexpected misgiving.

"This this is civilization," he said wonderingly.

Lucy laughed.

"I almost forgot what it looked like."

Brand scowled.

"It looks like sh " He cut himself off and kicked at a can.

Scot looked at him.

"Is it really worth saving, this ugly mess?"

The big man shook his head.

"I dunno."

"Well, I know!"  Lucy flared.

"This is the heart of what's wrong with the world.

The single-minded waste.  What did you expect it to look like
heaven?"

"Destroy MT this will disappear," Scot said, as though convincing
himself.

"Beneath the squalor of this prison of rampant technology, there has to
be some basic pride and nobility of the human state.  Our action may
seem harsh at first, but it will free the soul of these people.  They
will have to seek gainful employment, return to the soil, to renew
their ties with the land..."

"And in order to develop this technology again," Lucy agreed, "they'll
have to abolish waste because there simply isn't enough left here on
Earth to do it wastefully.  So we'll either have a primitive culture or
a truly civilized one, unlike what we had five years ago."139 Scot put
an arm around her.

"I think you understand it better than I do."

"I understand the criminal I mean civilized mind."

"You know, if we could steal a car now, short out the ignition " She
trod on his toe.

"That's not funny!"

"Hey, don't fight," Brand protested.  And he was serious; violence
upset him increasingly, and he didn't understand their brawls.  He and
Bitsy never fought.

Lucy relaxed.

"All right, seeing as there's a gentleman present."

Nevertheless, they had to borrow a parked car for the night, for they
had no better place to stay.140 They could not camp in the street, and
had no money for formal accommodations, and could not afford to call
attention to themselves.

They located a lushly upholstered antique in a private parking space
and curled up on the seats for four hours' slumber: enough to see them
through the day ahead.

Well before dawn they advanced on the MT complex.  This was a huge
compound, girl with wire mesh fence.  Guard dogs roamed between that
fence and the fortress-like main building.

Brand surveyed it.

"We ain't getting in there without a hassle," he said.

"Of course not," Scot agreed.

"We aren't going to attempt any violence.  We have to use our
brains."

"And our nerve," Lucy said.

"I can't even read," Brand reminded them.

"You've got conscience," she reminded him.

Conscience... Scot mulled over that word, that concept.  He had
returned to it again and again.  Could he really justify what he was
about to do, on any ethical basis?

That will be for others to answer, he thought.  Was he contemplating a
"consequence" that Brother Paul would have approved, or an
"aggression"?  The line was fuzzy.

Lucy jogged his elbow.

"Don't start reasoning it out now, love.  We have to trust our
considered decision."

Scot sighed.

"Yes."

They walked up to the entry building and joined the line there.  Scot
was mildly surprised that there was still enough business to create a
crowd.  Apparently the predominant urge of most of the remaining
population of Earth was to get away from Earth.  How would all those
people react when that exodus was terminated?

Hardly with gladness... But he had to distrust these last-moment
doubts.  They were pretexts for inaction.

The office was very like the one Scot had entered so many years ago,
with his brother Tully and Fanny.

Fanny that thought still caused a little twitch somewhere in his gut.
The feeling he had for her was gone; now it was more a sensation of
irritation and wonder.  Though Lucy had cost him Fanny, he had long
since learned how he had profited in that exchange.  Fanny had been the
dream, and she was where she belonged: on the dream-world of Conquest.
Lucy was the reality, and she was where she belonged: here on Earth.
And the reality was better than the dream.

And he realized a fundamental parallel, his conviction that Earth was
ultimately better than any colony derived from his certainty that Lucy
was better than Fanny.  Even Lucy-on-Earth, against Fanny-in-Heaven.
Fanny had seemed perfect to start with; his mere touch would have
defiled her.  Just as man's touch defiled the perfect alien planets.
Lucy was imperfect, a thief, combative yet she had grown with the need
and become a woman more truly lovable than any other.  As Earth could
grow, given the chance un pretty criminal, combative Earth, with
immense potential being dissipated among the stars.141 He put his arm
around Lucy, there in the office, and brought her in for a kiss.

"You've had another chain of thought," she murmured.

"For Earth," he responded.

"You are my Earth, my everything."

"Always."

"Very touching," the man at the desk said.

"Are you two quite sure you want to leave Earth?"  And the people in
the line sniggered.

Scot straightened his face.

"I am Scot Krebs.  I was denied emigration five years ago, because I
was accused of attacking this woman."

"You don't seem to have changed your ways," the officer remarked,
punching the computer console for the name.

"I married her," Scot said.

The console flashed its verification.

"That charge is still outstanding," the official said.142 "But I told
you this is the woman.  She will testify that she has withdrawn the
charge."

"Anyway," Lucy said mischievously, "I like being attacked."

The people in line laughed, but not the officer.

"This is not my responsibility.

You'll have to have it cleared by the secretary."

"What's there to clear?"  Scot asked.

"All you have to do is verify her identity."

The official stood.

"This way, please."  He glanced at Brand, next in line.

"I

will be with you in a moment, sir."

"I gotta go to the bathroom," Brand muttered.

"Make it snappy."

The official didn't answer, but Scot could tell by the set of his jaw
that he meant to take his time.

As they followed the official down the hall, Brand complained again
about the delay and his need for a rest room.

"Oh, go ahead," the man behind him said.

"I'll hold your place in line.  We've all got a long wait coming."

And in a moment Brand would go off looking for the bathroom and blunder
into the wrong section.  Perhaps even the wrong building.  With luck he
might even make it back to his place in line before the official
returned, after untangling Scot's problem.

They entered another office.

"Mr.  Blount, there is an irregularity," the official said.

"This man has an unresolved charge on his record that he says no longer
applies."

"Very well, Bill," Blount said.

"I'll take it from here."

"Right."  The official left.

Oh-oh, Scot thought.  Brand couldn't possibly complete his mission
before the official made it back to the desk.  That was bad.

Mr.  Blount was businesslike and efficient.  With the aid of the
computer records he established Scot's and Lucy's identities, their
common-law marriage registry, and the separate charges against them.
Scot dropped his complaint of car theft, and Lucy voided hers of
attack.

"After all," she said, "spouses can't testify against each other."

"Unless they want to," Scot said.

"Don't contradict me, or I will testify against you, you bra-snatcher,"
she said.  And smiled.143 "I believe the matter stands resolved,"
Blount said.

"I will authorize your entrance for emigration on an alternate basis.
Should two approved transportees fail to appear on schedule at the time
your turn comes, you will go in their stead to whatever colony planet
is then current.  You understand, you have no choice of colony."

"We understand," Scot said.  His mouth felt dry.  Here he was, approved
for emigration, his years-long dream and he had no intention of taking
advantage of it.

"Where's the physical?"

The man raised an eyebrow.

"We dispensed with the physicals two years ago.

Insufficient trained medical personnel."

They returned to the waiting room and got in line again.  Brand was not
there.

Lucy squeezed Scot's hand nervously.  Had Brand failed or was he still
trying?

The line moved along, and this time Scot and Lucy were approved for
emigration as Alternates, and given numbers 451 and 452.  The head of
the line now stood at 429, so their chances of receiving an early
opportunity were good.  Too good; if Brand didn't reappear, they might
be trapped.

"Six vacancies on Sylva, Lot 4" the loudspeaker announced.  There was a
scramble as numbers 429 through 434 rushed to the second MT desk for
verification.  Here a difficulty manifested: 433 and 434 were two
members of a family of four, and they did not want to be separated.  If
there were two vacancies on the next Lot, the other two could catch up,
and they would be reunited fifteen minutes later.

But it was purely chance; six Lots might go by, or a dozen, without
vacancy.

Then the next two could be sent to a different colony planet.  That was
not to be risked!  Since none of the four ahead would yield their
places, the two finally had to give way to the next in line: 437 and
438.  "But we'll be on the next Lot," the man said grimly.

"We're at the head of the line."

"Another Lot in only fifteen minutes," Lucy murmured.

"Sixteen numbers..."

"I can hardly wait," Scot replied nervously.

They waited.  With the clockwork that had proceeded virtually
uninterrupted for five years, draining the planet Earth, the Lots went
out at the rate of four an hour.  Each Lot contained 256 people, with
the overwhelming majority showing up on time.  Sometimes a last minute
illness or accident caused defaults, and then the Alternates got in.

Sylva Lot 5 was unusual.

"Seventeen vacancies," the speaker said.  That carried it through 451:
Scot's.  But not Lucy's.

"I'll wait for my wife," Scot said, waving number 453 on.  He hoped his
hand was not visibly shaking.  This was getting way too close for
comfort and where was Brand?

But two Alternates were missing.  Suddenly there was room for Scot and
Lucy after all.  If they balked, it would be suspicious, and of course
they would have to go home.  If they didn't balk, they would wind up as
colonists on Planet Sylva.

Horrified, Lucy stared at him.  There was no time for temporizing; they
were already shuffling toward the transport chamber.

"We're here!"  a man called.

"Numbers 444 and 445!  We were in the bathroom!  Never thought it'd be
so soon!"

Lucy staggered to a chair and sat down so suddenly Scot was momentarily
afraid she had fainted.

"But now we're at the head of the line," he whispered.

"Where is Brand?"

"Do you think he came back in line and got shipped put before we
returned?"

Scot dismissed that.

"He'd wait for us."

"But they don't give you any choice!  You go, or you get
blacklisted."

"He'd take the blacklisting.  He wouldn't leave Bitsy."

"Then he isn't back yet.  Or " Or he had been caught.

"I don't feel so well," Scot said.

"Maybe I'd better go to " He paused.

"Could he be there?"

"Better check," she said.

He moved down the hall to the bathroom.  It was empty.  What had
happened to Brand?  Only ten minutes to find out.

He returned to Lucy.

"Not there."

"We can't proceed without that manual."

Tensely they waited while the minutes ticked off.  When the openings
for the next Lot came, they would have to balk and then their plan
would be spoiled, for they would be blacklisted and subject to
immediate arrest if they returned to MT.

Lucy squeezed his arm shakily.

"Would would it be so bad to emigrate?  Sylva that means forest.  It
sounds nice..."144 "They all sound nice," he snapped.

"It's all promotional.  Hell itself would be named "Fireside Soul."

" She burst into a titter that sounded halfway like a scream.

"I want to go to Fireside!"

"We'll face hell on Earth if you give us away," he gritted.

An officer entered the room.

"Does anybody here know a man named Brandon?"145 Startled, Scot looked
at Lucy.  Should they admit acquaintance or sit tight?  They had not
anticipated this wrinkle.

Then he shrugged.  What did they have to lose?

"He came with us."

"He has been arrested.  You will have to testify."

"Arrested!"  Scot exclaimed with unfeigned shock.

"Brand wouldn't commit any crime!"  Except one: trying to save Earth.

"Four vacancies on Sylva, Lot Six," the speaker said.

"That's us," Lucy said worriedly.

"Sorry," the officer said.

"You'll have to take another Lot.  We'll issue a deferral.  We need
information on this man."

With mixed apprehension and relief they followed the man down another
hall, to another office.  This one was manned by a uniformed
policeman.

"Your friend broke into an office and stole a manual.  Why would he do
that?"

So Brand had succeeded partially.  He had gotten the manual but hadn't
gotten away.  And what was Scot to say?

Lucy spread her hands.

"He's illiterate."

"Illiterate!  What use could he have for a manual, then?"

"Maybe he thought he could hock it," she suggested.

"Don't those books have all sorts of secret information?"

"No.  Only technical instructions and ephemerides.  Astronomical tables
locating the exact positions of the planets we ship to.  Only computer
and transport personnel have any use for such information."  He paused
thoughtfully.

"And why would he want money if he were about to emigrate?"

They were in trouble.  This was an intelligent official who had Brand
in custody and was suspicious, perhaps, of them too.  Yet they had done
nothing.  Yet.

Lucy, as she had promised, was better at lying than Scot.

"We hoped to get him away from Earth, where he wouldn't be tempted,"
she said glibly.

"He's something of a kleptomaniac.  Fascinated by official-looking
things.  Does your manual have complicated diagrams or different kinds
of type?"

He'll never swallow that!  Scot thought.

Incredibly, the man did.

"Yes, that's a good description of the manual.  With different colored
pages and tabs.  Actually it has very little material value, and
outdated copies may be obtained for a very nominal fee.  But I can see
that it would be impressive to an illiterate."  He shrugged.

"Nevertheless, your friend has committed a crime, and must be denied
the privilege of emigration.

You may proceed without him if you wish."

Lucy shook her head.

"I don't know.  We want to go, but what will happen to him?"

"He'll be turned loose at the gate and told not to return.  Should he
return, he would be jailed."  Blacklist was a taboo word.

"But without us, he would have no way to make a living."

"That is his concern.  No one has to emigrate.  Personally I feel that
Earth itself has a lot to offer if only people would take advantage of
it."

Scot was amazed.  This man had aptly expressed his own thoughts yet he
worked for MT!  Or was it a trap?  If they had learned that Brand was
married and had a baby, two babies Lucy looked crestfallen.  She
certainly was good at lying, even by mute expression!

"We wanted so much to go!  But now could we take some time to think it
over?"

Does the end justify the means?  Scot thought.  Here we are stealing
and lying in the name of a good cause...146 The policeman smiled.

"We'll issue you a 24-hour extension on your Authorization.  Then you
can go or stay, as you decide.  But that decision will be
irrevocable."

"Thank you," she whispered.

As they returned to the waiting room, Scot relaxed partway.

"Nice going but without Brand, what can we do?"

"He got the manual and they didn't recover it," she said.

"He must have hidden it somewhere " "The bathroom!"  he exclaimed.

Sure enough: tucked behind the tank of a corner toilet was the thick
leather bound Operations Manual.  Brand had done his part.147 Lucy
obtained the Extension Permit at the desk while Scot concealed the
manual in his shirt.  They still hadn't seen Brand, but could not risk
looking for him, much less trying to free him.  The authorities just
might be giving them enough rope to hang themselves, waiting to
discover how they were going to sabotage the MT unit.

Outside, they walked until they found a large blank building, circled
around it, and settled in the privacy of the back wall.  Eagerly they
perused the manual.148 "I wish I were an engineer," Scot muttered.

"This thing's a monster!"

"We don't need to understand the details," Lucy said.

"Just locate the time and place."

"The place we know.  But the time I can't make head or tail of these
technicolor tables!"

She closed her eyes and poked her finger at the page.

"Then," she said as it touched.

"We can't go into it randomly!  We'll either miss the mark or miss the
capsule entirely.  We won't get a second chance."

"It's not random," she protested.

"It's intuition."

Scot made a derisive noise.

"Intuition!"

"Well, what's wrong with that?"  she demanded.

"The nature Gods approve it."

Too late he read the signs: she was tired and nervous, ready to blow up
when balked.

"Nothing's wrong.  Only " "Only you can't read the manual, and Brand's
in jail, so it's all wasted!  What will I say to Bitsy?  We might as
well have stayed home!  You and your big ideas!

Save the world!  Blow up MT!"

"Pipe down," he cautioned her.

"Someone'll hear."

"I will not pipe down!  We left a perfectly good farm for this idiocy!
What do you think you're ?"

So it was to be a full-scale tantrum.  He couldn't afford that!  Not
here, not now.  But only desperate measures would cut her off.

He swept his arm out, scooped up a handful of snow, and thrust it down
her bosom.  And quickly covered her mouth to muffle her piercing
shriek.

His action had the desired effect.  Lucy went into a frenzy of
contortion to relieve the cold mush in her clothing, and didn't even
bite his hand.  He helped as well as he could.  Then she started
laughing.  Then they made love.  And finally they talked it out and
deciphered the manual's coding system.149 They had just two hours to
plant the radiation coder, when the MT program shifted from Planet
Sylva to Planet Oceana.  If they missed that, they would have to wait
another month for the shift over to Planet Zephyr.

"We can't risk that delay," Scot muttered.

"If we don't emigrate, and hang around beyond our permit extension,
they'll arrest us too."150 They took another thirty minutes to study
the MT complex layout by the wan light of the storm lantern, then
proceeded.  Scot kissed Lucy: "In case we have to part suddenly, and I
don't see you again."  Immediately he amended himself.

"Soon."

"Oh, Scot do we have to?"

"I promise: this is my last world-saving mission."

"That's what I'm afraid of!"

"Okay, darling I promise it's not my last."

She hugged him close.

"Without you, I'm nothing at all."

"Uh-uh.  Without that grinder you'd be nothing at all."

She twisted so as to strike him with her right breast.

"Just a thief."151 "First my car then my heart."

"I gave back some, you know."

He kissed her again.

"I love you."152 She pushed him away.

"Do your job, then come home, and I'll give you such a reward!"

It was now 5 A.M. by the huge outdoor clock above the capsule
building.153 The changeover to Oceana was to occur precisely at 6 A.M.
with a double dry run for fine-tuning orientation.  The calibrator had
to be in that first shuttle.

"You understand what you may have to do," Scot said grimly.

Now she was deathly solemn.

"I understand.  Forgive me."

"You I can forgive.  Myself will be harder."

"Sometimes you're so sweet..."  she said.

He was aching with love for her, but they had to proceed.  They had a
very narrow span of time to utilize.  They moved back up the street
toward the MT center.154 Thanks to the manual, Scot now had a clear
picture of the layout.  The capsule chamber was adjacent to the
processing building, connected by a series of air locks.  They had to
reach it deviously.  They entered the processing building, went down
the hall to the bathroom, and each entered the appropriate one.  Scot's
was empty.  He forced a back window open, then returned to the door.
Lucy was waiting for him.

"Mine's clear," he said.

"Come in."

She came in with him quickly.  He boosted her out the window, then
followed.  Now they were loose in the maintenance section of the
complex.  They walked briskly toward the rear of the capsule building,
just as if they belonged there.

There was the emergency lock, just as shown on the chart.  Dawn was
developing, and the increasing light made Scot nervous.

"Take my watch," Lucy said, handing it to him.

"I synchronized it with the MT clock, maybe a second fast."

He took it.  The time was 5:56 A.M. Right on schedule.

Scot took hold of the wheel that released the air lock and turned it.
The thing was stiff but it gave under their joint effort, then became
easier.  At length the lock swung open, like the door of a giant
safe.

"Okay," Scot said.

"Wish me luck."

"What kind?"  she asked, then kissed him quietly, desperately.

"Now quit dawdling!"

Inside there was a second wheel.  He took hold of it, but it wouldn't
budge.

"It's an air lock, dummy," Lucy called.

"Fail-safe.  You have to close the outer one before the inner one will
move."

"Oh."  Embarrassed, he closed the outer one.  Then the inner one did
move but he had wasted several precious seconds.

The portal swung outward, and he stepped into an accordion-pleated tube
crossing a narrow passage.  This was the space between the building and
the capsule, maintained as a vacuum; the tube extended itself
automatically when either air lock was activated, and would be folded
put of the way when the locks closed again.  A sophisticated emergency
access, seldom used.

He played the beam of his little flashlight over his watch.  The time
was 5:58.

He was taking too long!  He spun the wheel of the capsule lock, and
this was much better; the door popped open as the mechanism released
it.  He jumped in, drew it closed, spun the inner wheel, and turned to
the next.  This was like traveling between spaceships!  He rotated the
wheel just enough to be sure he could open the portal on demand, then
shone the light on his watch Lucy's watch again.  It was ten seconds
before 5:59; he had recovered his schedule.

He put his ear to the panel and listened, trying to make sure the
interior was clear, but no sound penetrated.  Well, the chances were
the personnel were gone;

they wouldn't play it too close!  That was why he was playing it
close.

Precisely at 5:59 he spun the wheel, opened the portal, and stepped
inside the capsule proper.  He was vaguely disappointed as he played
his flash about; it was merely a big, empty chamber with numbered
squares marked on the floor.

Why was he concerned?  It was empty as it should be, had to be!  The
timing was ideal, so far.  But he now had only forty seconds to
complete his mission and get out.  If he ran late, he would get shipped
to Planet Oceana or get caught in transit between capsule and building.
Either way, finis.

The calibrator sat in a holder near the main entrance; his light
reflected off its polished metal.  Scot ran to it and found it locked
in place.  He needed tools to budge it, and didn't have them.  Thirty
seconds.

Could he leave both calibrators?  No, surely the computer would get a
dual reading that would trigger an alarm.  Then the human personnel
would investigate and correct the error.  Everything had to seem in
order.

Tools!  There had to be some near!  Why take them all the way back to
the depot when they'd be needed again in just fifteen minutes?  Scot's
light and gaze swept across the room and he saw the toolbox.  He let
out his breath and ran for it, found a wrench, ran back to the
calibrator assembly.  He turned the main nut, loosened it, got the
checker out of its clasp, dropped in the other, tightened, and looked
at the watch.

Ten seconds remained.

No time to put away the wrench!  He slid it down toward the toolbox,
hoping the workmen would think someone had been sloppy.155 He sprinted
for the lock, hearing the satisfying clang as the wrench struck the
box.  He dived through the aperture, yanked it closed after him, spun
the wheel, jumped out the next.  Four seconds no time to close the
capsule's outer door properly!  He slammed it, leaped through the
accordion tube, scrambled through the next lock, hauled it shut and
spun the wheel as the watch's sweep hand passed the six o'clock mark.

Panting, he waited.  He should be safe now.

Nothing happened.

Had he mistimed it?  Or failed?  He started to reopen the lock, then
caught himself.  These capsules were precisely phased, and the walls of
the containing chamber were heavy.  Operation should be silent.
Probably the capsule had phased out on schedule, and now there was the
alternate capsule in its place.

He emerged and Lucy was not there.

Less than four minutes but it meant that in that time someone had come,
and she had had to distract him any way she could.  So long as she kept
suspicion off Scot.  And she had.  What have I done to you?  he thought
in momentary anguish.  He had prayed this would not be necessary!

He closed the lock and hurried away.  He could not remain in this area,
for his very presence could arouse fatal suspicion.

Now he had half an hour to locate Lucy and Brand and get them out of
the MT complex.  Fifteen minutes for the test capsule to return;
fifteen more for the "corrected" one.  Both empty, so that there would
be no loss of life.  With luck.

He turned a corner and almost collided with a guard.

"Hey you're not MT!"  the guard exclaimed.

"Where's your badge?"

Oh-oh.

"I'm looking for my wife," Scot said.

"She ran in here somewhere we're on the alternate list."  He shook his
Authorization and Extension.

"Well, get back to the processing area," the man said irritably.

"You've no business here."

That was what he thought!

"But my wife " "All right, we'll check in at the security office.  She
must've been picked up for loitering out of bounds."

To Scot's immense relief, she had been.  She had not had to do what he
had been afraid of.

"This woman tells me your friend was arrested," the sergeant said to
Scot.

"You're emigrating without him?"

"No," Scot said.

"We'll take him home.  Will you release him in our custody?"

"You understand, none of you will be able to come back, ever," the man
said.

"You only get one chance to emigrate."156 "Yes.  But we really have no
choice."

The man shrugged.  He spoke into the intercom on his desk.

"Bring out the prisoner; he's going home."

Beautiful!  Evidently these personnel didn't have much trouble, and
were lax.

They waited.

But the mills of a lax bureaucracy moved slowly.  Ten minutes passed,
fifteen.

They dared not protest but now hardly ten minutes remained before their
deadline.  What would happen if they were still here when the second
capsule returned?

Well, they had known there was risk in this venture.  They might be
incarcerated as traitors to their culture but the job would have been
done.  Lucy squeezed his hand, understanding.  She was ready to die
with him.

Another alternative was worse.  Suppose he had failed, and no
disruption occurred?

At last Brand appeared.  Scot stepped forward, frowning.

"I hope you realize, friend, that you have cost us our chance to
emigrate!"  he said.

"What on Earth did you want with a manual you couldn't even read?"

Brand looked properly abashed.

"Gee, it had such pretty colors..."

Scot shook his head in affected exasperation.

"Well, let's go.  Too bad you weren't color-blind too."

Then the policeman who had first investigated the case entered.

"A very pretty scene," he remarked.

"But I think too pat.  I believe these people are up to something.
We'll just give them a lie detector screening first."

Oh, no!  Five minutes to go and now this!  Scot had no idea how to foil
a lie detector apparatus.  And in any event, once the MT blew "Take 'em
to the interrogation office," the officer said.157 This, as it
happened, was set apart from the main complex.  They got into a jeep
and zoomed across the city, to debark at an unpretentious building.

"This is all routine," the officer said as they entered.

"If your story checks out, you'll have our apology and maybe another
chance to emigrate.  So don't " There was a shudder, as of an
earthquake.  One wall of the building collapsed.

Dust billowed up to mix with the snow from outside.

Amazed, they looked out through the open wall.  A monstrous cloud was
rising over the MT complex two miles away, like an old-fashioned
hydrogen-bomb follow-up, but somehow more authoritative than any film
from this vantage.  Already bright flames were licking at the base.

Gazing upon it, feeling the awful heat of an explosion a thousand times
as powerful as he had anticipated if he had ever really believed in it!
Scot felt a sudden surge of dej vu, the sensation of having been here
before.  Unbidden, his mind retreated into an experience that had been
buried.158

Into the great orange maw of his flaming house: now at last he
remembered.  He had wrapped a wet coat about his head and shoulders,
brief, insufficient protection from the intolerable heat, and charged
ahead.  Falling, blazing timbers dropped beside him, but he kept on,
choking on the roiling smoke.  It was like a descent into hell, and in
the heat-seared agony of his vision he thought he saw the dancing
demons of his torture.

He found the guest room on the ground floor, pawed at the bunk.  But
his hands fell only on the visitor's traveling pack.  Donald was
gone.159 So it had been for nothing, this charge into the holocaust.
The visitor had decamped without informing them, lacking the courage to
face the victims of his carelessness, or even to warn them about the
fire he had started.  If they died because of that neglect, or lost
their home and livelihood, too bad.  The true MT philosophy!160
Disgusted, Scot turned and staggered back, carrying the pack.  But now
a rising wall of flame cut him off.  He turned again, casting about for
the window, but the inferno was everywhere.  Bright, bright!  And
suddenly there shined round him a light from heaven... He could no
longer open his eyes; the smoke was too thick.161 Think!  he told
himself.  Find the bunk.  The window is beyond it.

The floor gave way beneath him and he fell to hands and knees.  The
heat was less intense here, but still too much.  Blindly he crawled
until he struck an obstruction.  A wall?  He felt along it and grasped
a piece of broken glass.  The lamp!

Therefore, the bed was near.  No more time.  He lurched to his feet,
braced his arms with the pack in them, and dove across the region where
the bed should be.

His shoulder struck something hard.  Debris fell around him.  Who art
thou, Lord?

He lurched again, thrashing and suddenly there was air.

He rolled into that draft, extracting his body from the fiery wall. His
coat hung up and he had to tear free of it; it was burning anyway. Then
strong hands were on him, hauling him forward.  His hair was singed,
his skin scorched, his watch broken, but he was out!

The fire spread to the surrounding brush and burned out the entire
block before being balked by the "natural" barrier of the surrounding
streets.  Scot faded in and out of consciousness as Lucy took care of
him.  They carried him to their neighbors several miles to the north,
the Browns.  There Scot recovered, contemplating the little metal
calibrator that was all they retained of their visitor.  What a price
they had paid for their hospitality!

In that period of infirmity, depression and near-blindness Scot had
time to do much thinking, and when he could function again he asked the
Browns to stand witness for his formal declaration of marriage to Lucy.
There were no priests, ministers or rabbis in the region, and they
regarded it as a civil ceremony:

fitting for the times, and binding as marriages of pre-civilized times
had been.

They returned and rebuilt on the cellar of the original house: a cabin
made of sod.  It was merely a matter of cutting oblongs of turf like
large flat bricks, with the grass roots holding the soil together so
firmly that it was a viable construction medium.  The living roots
strengthen the soil, Scot thought as he worked, as living friendship
strengthens the soul.  If compost were civilization, soil was soul.
Brother Paul would appreciate that!162 The turf house was dark but
substantial and fireproof.  Space was cramped, but since most of their
belongings had been wiped out they had less need of space.

They consumed roasted potatoes from the cellar, and then the snows came
and preserved much of the rest.  Nature's freezer better and cheaper
than man's poor mechanical imitations.

They adopted a hunter-gatherer mode of life, bringing down the
increasingly plentiful wild game with bows and home-made spears and
even thrown stones.  The beauty of stones was that they didn't have to
be carried or recovered; they were everywhere.

Brand's supply of firewood had been wiped out by the blaze, and that
was a critical loss.  But he was able to gather more from the
neighborhood.  Their solar water heating system had been damaged beyond
repair, the copper tubing melted.

But Lucy's grinder remained, and that pleased Scot because of what he
knew to be the wrong reason: not that they would have bread to eat, but
that she would retain a beautiful bosom.163 Other neighbors shared,
providing corn and milk and blankets.  Hardly a day went by without a
Brown or a Smith or someone else stopping by to "exchange news"
actually checking to make sure the crippled farm was surviving, and to
help as required.  Cultural regression, Scot realized, did not actually
mean barbarism; in many respects it meant a closer, warmer, more
meaningful relationship with one's neighbors.

"Do you know," Scot remarked one day in spring, "we're actually better
off than we were.  That wooden house was an anachronism.  Now we're
closer to nature."  He glanced at their house, noting how the grass was
growing tall on the sloping sod roof.  They had a living house!

Then Lucy told him about their coming baby.

Next month the Saxons came, and Scot remembered his debt to his
neighbors.164 Now, gazing on the magnificent blaze following the MT
explosion, Scot knew that America would follow his own course, and
after it, the world.  The anachronism of MT had been destroyed, and
though there would be much pain in that loss, the long-range result
would be beneficial.  Now man would indeed colonize his own planet, and
inevitably Earth would prosper and perhaps learn to avoid its past
mistakes.

The officer still stared, oblivious to all else.  Scot knew what that
shock was like; he had been through it himself.  A lifestyle had been
destroyed; few people could anticipate the better one that would
replace it.

Scot linked hands with Lucy and Brand and started walking.165 No one
tried to stop them; no one would.  They had a long hike ahead, but
their families were waiting: Scot's little boy, Brand's twin girls.
Families with better futures than they had had a moment ago.166 Man's
colonization of the fittest planet was commencing.167

Notes 1. I had a dedication which did not appear in the book:
"Dedicated to the anonymous real-life counterparts of Brother Paul and
the Holy Order of Vision.

Perhaps you will know them when you meet them."  The dedication page is
missing from the manuscript as it was returned.  By what right an
editor deletes a dedication I don't know.  The copy-editor's job, as I
perhaps naively understand it, is normally to correct spelling errors
and typos, to mark hyphenations for the typesetter (who is presumed to
be too dull to do it properly otherwise), change the author's -dashes
to dashes (it is of course correct the way the author does it;
fortunately the typesetter always changes it back to-) and the like.
Frankly, I regard it as make-work so that there won't be too many
unemployed girls tramping the streets of Parnassus.  But copy-editors
let's just call them copyeds invariably have delusions of literacy, and
cannot restrain themselves from rewriting the text itself.  Normally
the editor goes over the manuscript after it has been copy-edited and
STETs out most of the changes, and then the author eliminates the rest
when he sees the galley-proofs.  But in this case the Editor was
evidently sleeping, and no galleys were sent to me, so we have here a
clear example of the consequence of allowing copyeds to run amuck.

My manuscript was marked in several colors, as one person after another
went over it.  I believe that two, possibly three, were at the New York
office, and two were after the manuscript went to the other writer for
reworking.  I know from my own experience that the frame of mind used
to edit a book differs from that used to write or rewrite it.  Editing
is a critical process, while writing is a creative process, so that
though one copyed may in this case also have been the Writer, I choose
to distinguish between them.  It's a Jekyll and Hyde case:

the writer is a nice guy, while the copyed is an arrogant little
tyrant.  This is of course true of every writer who edits, not merely
this one; check with any writer for confirmation.  Thus my Rogue's
Gallery calls out five copyeds and one writer.  Here, then, is the cast
of characters in this ugly little drama, personified as I perceive
them.  (I, being a writer, am naturally creative, so my interpretation
reflects that.) PENCIL Evidently the first copyed to have at this text,
female.  She means well but does have her feminine hangups.

BLACK She must be the new copyed who was hired; she is really out to
prove herself.  That kind is dangerous.

BLUE an occasional dabbler, perhaps someone who happened to pass
through the office on the way to the subway.

RED Argumentative male; he remarks on everything, regardless whether he
has any basis.

PURPLE Androgynous copyed who sometimes resembles Red and sometimes
Red's wife.

Two hands with but a single pen?

WRITER I judged his actions by checking the published text.

EDITOR The person theoretically in charge, who contacted me
periodically on the phone to assure me that all was well.

And here I must make a disclaimer: some of the language quoted is
intemperate.

Readers may think I am making up some of the remarks; I assure you that
this is the nonfiction section of this book, and that the following
copyed remarks were indeed made, either directly on my manuscript or on
a separate sheet associated with it.  This presentation is not a joke,
even though I feel that much of the copy-editing was.  It seems to be
easy for some to sit on the sidelines and second-guess the one who is
doing the work, using uncouth language, as we shall see here.  Now I am
the one second-guessing them and believe me, it's a pleasure!

One other thing: though there are a number of notes called out here,
there were many more on the manuscript.  Not one page escaped
unscathed.  I have merely made a sampling of the juicier ones, to avoid
becoming unduly tedious.  The situation was in fact more extreme than
this presentation shows.  Few, if any, of my original sentences were
actually published in pristine form.

Remember, in the Introduction, I mentioned that Editor had asked for a
Prologue, Epilogue, and some technical material.  I don't feel any of
that is necessary, so I am running none of it in the novel proper.  But
for those who are interested, here is the Prologue, which did appear in
the published version of the novel:

A man performed an experiment on white mice.  A few pairs were given
the freedom of a large, well-appointed cage.  The climate was
maintained at a pleasant level for the species; there were no predators
and no diseases or natural hazards, and food and water were limitless.
The mice were left to their own devices in this simulated paradise,
while the man, like a beneficent but aloof God, watched.

The mice bred.  Soon the few were many, and the many became a dense
throng.  Yet there was still food for all; only the space was limited.
With the increasing press of bodies, the mice became irritable and
asocial, fighting with each other over trifles.  Some were neurotic;
others ceased activity and just lay like vegetables.  Babies were
neglected, left to fend for themselves in an increasingly violent
situation.  Many were trampled to death, and those that survived were
not sweet and gentle.  Paradise had become hellish.

What had happened?  The basic problem seemed to be the man's
interference with the natural order.  Mice depend on certain selective
forces for the overall health of their species.  Predators constantly
cull the weak or slow or stupid or old or merely unlucky.  Disease
thins the population.  On occasion starvation wipes out large numbers.
The mice must breed prolifically in order to survive these hazards. All
these killers are cruel on an individual basis but not as cruel as the
alternative of over breeding without concurrent elimination of the
surplus or expansion of the living area.

A mouse, looking at Earth as a planetary cage, might see distressing
parallels to man's present condition.  The human population of our
world has been increasing phenomenally but its resources are being
exhausted, and the habitable area is limited.  We show the signs of the
approaching end, as war and crime, disillusion and suicide and juvenile
wildness increase.  Already segments of the world's population are
starving, and the threat of nuclear or biologic holocaust hangs over us
all.

We cannot continue this way.  The day of reckoning is inevitable, and
it is not heaven but hell-on-Earth we face.

Unless there were some other avenue.  Suppose it were possible for man
to be freed from his cage, so that he could emigrate painlessly to
other worlds?

A remarkable breakthrough occurs.  This is instant matter transmission
to other habitable planets.  Suddenly the cage has been sprung, and
man's great adventure commences... [back]

2. Red penned in the margin of the manuscript, "Rewrite the entire
opening" and "Describe the participants."  Accordingly, Writer did so,
and here are the first three paragraphs as the novel was published:

As the drama on the giant screen in front of him worked its labored way
into one of the obligatory love scenes, Scot's arm almost automatically
tightened around the shoulders of the girl beside him.  Instead of
responding by leaning against him, however, she wriggled her shoulders
in annoyance.

"Stop it, Scot," she said.

"I came to see the movie, not to experience it."

Scot relaxed his grip in mild irritation.  Fanny was a lovely girl, but
she did have this evasive nature.  She resented any distractions from
whatever occupied her attention at the moment.  To be fair, he conceded
this did have its compensations; when she made love, she devoted
herself to the act with the same single-minded purpose she now
displayed in watching the screen.  But Scot wasn't in much of a mood
for being fair, so he settled back under the steering wheel in
annoyance.

Very well, back to my comment: Writer did a decent job here, generally,
but he changed my characterization of the girl.  Instead of being a
"don't paw me!"  type she became an "everything in its time" type, who
does make love outside of marriage.  If I were young and single again,
I'm sure I would prefer the latter type of girl but this is not the one
I had in this novel.  The "will she or won't she?"  question is
fundamental in characterization, and important in this novel
specifically, and I object to a change of this nature being made
here.

Writer reworked the remainder of the opening similarly; his text covers
the same territory as mine, in different words.  Readers who are
curious about the extent of the differences throughout the novel will
have to locate a copy of the published edition and compare in detail.
It seems pointless to do it here.  Thus most of my notes will be on the
notes the copyeds made on the manuscript.  Writer was required to honor
these directives, contrary as some of them are; he was in a difficult
position and should not be judged too harshly.  (How do you obtain a
copy of the other edition?  That is a challenge; I am naming none of
the other participants of this mess here.  So you would have to locate
a complete listing of my published works, and run down a
"collaboration" under this title, then see if one of those out-of-print
specialty stores will locate a copy for you.  I really doubt this is
worth the effort.) [back]

3. Miss Pencil inquired at this point "Cut?"  and Miss Black responded
"Yes!"

Note the exclamation point.  What was there about this innocent passage
that so offended these copyeds?  At any rate, it was deleted.

[back]

4. Miss Black, on her sanitary separate sheet, says "Fanny can't
imagine leaving earth."  Purple responds "Keep but....."  Note the five
dots in the ellipsis; that formation does not occur in nature.

[back]

5. The entire reference to Philip Nolan was cut by the Pencil-Black
combo.

[back]

6. Miss Black crossed out most of the technical detail (I suspect she's
a woman like Fanny), but Writer restored some of it.

[back]

7. Pencil marked most of what remained of the foregoing hundred words
for italicizing.  Miss Pencil was very free throughout, demanding
italics: I would like to hear her speak!  But Writer had the good sense
to ignore most of those directives.

[back]

8. At this point a chapter-break has been inserted.  I don't object to
this chapterization; I had avoided it solely to save space, and would
have chapterized myself had I had room.  It turned out that 55,000
words was meant to be the minimum length; I could have written to a
more comfortable length after all.  Ah, well.  I'll skip future
references to chapters, and just render this novel as I wrote it.

[back]

9. Writer changed Scot's grab from her bra to her hair.  Now I object
to this;

hair is no necessary distinction between man and woman, as a look at
contemporary fashions shows, but a bosom remains a pretty solid
indication.

[back]

10.  Pencil shifted the reference to her age from just before her
speech to just after it, and Blue changed the words "the early" to
"her"; Red marked this paragraph and said "Do something about that." So
Writer cut the whole thing.  I don't know what set them all off; maybe
they just had nothing better to do.

[back]

11.  Miss Pencil decided to rewrite this: "Scot shook his head and a
quick searing stab of pain shot through his temples.  Now pieces of the
scene began to fit together:" Remember, I commented how copyeds aspire
to become genuine writers.  Miss Pencil shows definite promise; I like
this bit, alliteration and all but Writer, perhaps jealous of his
prerogatives, changed the whole thing.

[back]

12.  Black asks: "He was knocked unconscious but still had a bra in one
hand and a pamphlet in the other?"  To which Red responds: "Make it
lying underneath him, then.  But he could still clutch the bra, since
he seems fascinated by teats anyway."  But as already noted, Writer
avoided the whole issue by having him grab her hair instead.  (Note the
cultural indication: where I would use the term "breasts" Red prefers
"teats.") [back]

13.  Black objects: "His car is stolen and he's in danger of a court
case against him unbelievable."  You think so?  There was a news item
in real life about a family who parked their car with their daughter
sleeping in the back seat.  Two men stole the car, raped the daughter,
wrecked the car and damaged other property in the process and the owner
was legally liable for damages.  There was another in which two men
engaged in a holdup; the police killed one and put the other on trial
for murder though he hadn't fired the shot.  Because the law said that
anyone engaged in a crime involving a gun was guilty of any damage done
by a gun something like that.  The law takes some funny turns!  But
Red, heeding this spurious objection, deleted the reference, saying
"Drop not enough police protection for them to bother with it."  Now
you might be wondering why I had such a devious way for Scot to get in
trouble, when there could have been something that made more sense.
Well, it was deliberate.  I am showing that Earth really does not have
much to offer Scot, in any respect.  He can't even get justice.  That's
the kind of person who would really like to try a new and possibly
better world.  Fanny, who has never been abused by fate, doesn't
understand.  This sets things up for the irony that is to follow for
the course we might reasonably anticipate does not become reality.

[back]

14.  Blue deleted the last sentence, whereupon Pencil and Black deleted
the whole paragraph.

[back]

15.  Pencil and Red had different problems with this paragraph.
Pencil's were of the usual pointless shift-words-about variety, just to
show that someone was on the job.  Thus the first sentence was changed
to: "In general terms, it described Conquest, an uninhabited planet
that circled the star Gienah in the constellation Cygnus."  Red said:
"Something about getting better descriptive terms, than constellation,
since that is not based on actual proximity but on apparents [sic
obviously spelling is not this person's strong suit.  Try "appearance"]
as seen from Earth."  Well, this is a pamphlet for popular consumption,
and for that purpose the constellations are just fine.  Red is simply
nitpicking.  He goes on to circle the words "making the overall climate
more vigorous" with a question mark.  Sigh.  Very well, Red, I'll
explain: it is Earth's oceans of water that stabilize its climate; land
gets hotter and colder, so a planet with more land and less water is
apt to have savage extremes of climate.  Writer understood this, and
kept the reference.  Writer also explained about the use of
"constellation" for Red.  I believe I have mentioned the superior
comprehension that creative writers possess.

[back]

16.  Blue changed "God" to "How."  I feel that people take God's name
in vain frequently in real life, and should be represented, as far as
is feasible, as they are.

[back]

17.  Pencil wanted to change "indigence" to "bills," so Black cut the
paragraph entirely.  So Writer had Scot watch TV after all, inserting a
rationale: the government, in an attempt to reduce violence, had
guaranteed a TV set for every household.  Writer was doing yeoman
service, trying to compensate for the damage done by the
hatchet-wielding copyeds, like a surgeon trying to rebuild a butchered
body.  How much better it would have been simply to muzzle those
animals!

[back]

18.  Here Pencil attached a pink slip, saying: "How could the MT
program be otherwise than free?  If colonization was the aim, it is
illogical to charge $6M.

God help the "Filles de Roi' if they'd had to pay."  To which Black
replies:

"Easy to solve instead of saying how much it costs have Scot worry
about the price."  Well, I can offer an even easier solution: just
leave my text alone.  I set emigration up as a privilege so precious
that no one could afford it then offered this special bonus deal, so
that the average man would jump at it without counting the other costs.
It's sound marketing policy; people grab eagerly for bonus deals,
thinking they're getting something for nothing.

Naturally the MT Agency inflated the original price, though not as high
as Miss Pencil suggests, so that the bargain would seem that much
better.  I saw clearly how this operated when I went to buy a package
of dried milk and discovered that it cost 30 cents more than the prior
week, but was now listed as a bargain: "20 cents off!"  People buying
that bargain would pay 10 cents more than they would have for the
non-bargain package, the week before.  No, I didn't buy it; I shifted
to a cheaper brand.  I try to learn from every experience, and so
perhaps that company had done me a service of a sort.  If private
companies misrepresent figures, believe me, the government is worse!  I
am convinced that this is the way such a program would be presented,
and that people would react to this "bargain" exactly as represented in
this novel.

[back]

19.  Pencil corrected my spelling to "pedalled" from here on.  This
shows another aspect of the arrogance of copy-editing: my spelling was
correct.  Writer ignored this change.

[back]

20.  Red circled and questioned the two references to General Mills, so
Writer deleted them.  Well, this reference was based on something that
actually happened to us at the time I was writing the novel: our
daughter brought home General Mills literature that had been
distributed at her school.  Now I come from a health-conscious family
Tully's lifestyle mirrors much of my own, tandem bicycle and all and
the pronouncements of the likes of Dr.  Stare and the sugar-merchants
are ludicrous to me.  A case can be made for sugar being one of the
more dangerous substances circulated in our society.  I happen to be
diabetic myself, so I am sugar-conscious, and I avoid it wherever I
can.  But regardless of the merits of General Mills products, this is
the way such a family would react; my portrayal is true.  A deep ire
gnawed in me when that happened to us.  Maybe all the copyeds munch on
sugar doughnuts while trampling on my manuscript, but they have no
right to substitute their tastes for mine, and I don't want them
diddling in my fiction like this.

[back]

21.  Black says: "They have a home and a bike shed + the mail arrives
somewhere else."  To which Red responds: "At a rural mailbox straighten
this out for confused copy-editors."  What do you know!  Red must have
been exposed to some aspect of reality, somewhere along the way.  Rural
mailboxes do tend to be somewhat removed from their houses; sometimes
you can spot a cluster of twenty of them at the mouth of a dirt road. I
really didn't think I needed to explain all the facts of real-life to
the city folk; perhaps I erred.  Then Red adds:

"No small P.O.?"  Yes, that too, Red; you're learning.

[back]

22.  Red challenges this: wood lot that close to a city?  Put in
explanation."

Earlier, Red had a problem with the country being only ten miles out of
the city.  Well, I now live in a forest ten miles out of town.  Red
seems to assume that all cities are the size of New York.  Writer, who
lives in a more rural setting, ignored this.

[back]

23.  Purple says: "Scot is a first-class Male Chauvinist Pig leave him
that way, but modify it a bit."  Writer left it, barely modified.  I
suspect Purple is on occasion a Female Chauvinist Pig.

[back]

24.  Red inquires: "Do people really talk like that?"  Yes, Red, the
literate ones do.  Those who say "breast" instead of "teat" when
talking of a human female.

[back]

25.  The last 27 words were cut by Blue.

[back]

26.  Black protests: "Scot surprised they had a phone yet he'd arranged
to come by phone but forgot.  Incredible."  Well, actually it was
Scot's father who made the arrangement, though Scot knew of it,
obviously.  Such peripherals do on occasion get misplaced.  Evidently
Black never had a miscue of that nature, but that sort of thing happens
to me often enough.  Intelligent people tend to have a number of things
on their minds, so they make minor errors that simpler-minded folk
don't.  Thus the "absent-minded professor" syndrome.  But Red,
evidently of Black's persuasion, agreed, curtly: "OUT."  So out it
came.

[back]

27 Black says: "Wherever the mail comes has a phone near it ANOTHER
PHONE."  And Red says "Back at the house explain in one-syllable
words?"  Writer simply deleted the whole business about the phones.
Sigh it's hard to know where to start, in addressing this copy
editorial preoccupation with minutiae.  The scene made sense as I wrote
it; why go through such contortions to revise it?

[back]

28.  Pencil started crossing out sentences, but Red circled the whole
paragraph, curtly saying "Rewrite."  Writer simply cut it out entire.

[back]

29.  Black says "Scot forgot he was banged by a car last week so he
can't pick the girl up he's just ridden 10 miles on a bicycle in one
hour!"  To which Red responds: "Change."  He circles these two
paragraphs, saying "OUT give the kid a thrill."  So Writer changed it
to "piggyback ride" and made it possible.  Here we go again!  I was in
a rollover in my car in 1956; the roof was dented in six inches, and
the clearance for my head was six inches, so I figure I came that close
to never having a writing career.  I was lucky; I escaped with no more
than a moment's unconsciousness and a bruised shoulder.  I was for some
time unable to lift that arm above head-height, but below that level it
was okay; I needed no medication and wore no sling, and in several
weeks it healed.  I gave Scot that injury, because I know its nature.
Riding a bicycle is feasible, especially when the other party is doing
the pedaling.  Picking up a child is not but it's easy to forget until
one makes the attempt.  This scene needed no modification.

[back]

30.  This six-hundred-word sequence of the child's problem was deleted
by Black, who says: "Neighbors on same block?  Is this a farm or a
house on a city street?

This whole scene with the kids and the neighbors is silly."  Now this
is a very interesting deletion.  I had been asked to do a novel that
was rooted in conventional matters, remember, rather than far-out
space-opera stuff, so I kept it very close to home closer than any
other I have done.  But Miss Black pronounces it silly.  I think her
attitude is silly.  First, farms do have neighbors, and acreage is
platted in large blocks.  We do live in the forest now the forest we
were making ready to move to as I wrote this novel and we do have
neighbors, who also live in the forest.  Distances tend to be greater
than in the city, is all.  Second, though Black may feel the sequence
is unrealistic, it is taken directly from life: it was my own younger
daughter who got hit, and I was the one who went with her to unravel
the problem.  I feel very strongly about the welfare of my daughters;
we lost three babies before we had two we could keep, and they are all
we will ever have.  I am a peaceful man until my children are
threatened; then all bets are off.  I acted with restraint, considering
the fury I felt.  To have my little girl dash out with such joy of
anticipation, to share her food and her home-made toy phone and be
treated like that, hurt and humiliated well, it is evident that the
copyeds did not understand, but I trust that those who care about
children do.

[back]

31.  This whole scene, too, was deleted.  Pencil attached another pink
slip, saying: "This whole incident makes no sense is pages on a child's
fight that appears to have no connection to the story perhaps a vague
comment on 'crowding' or a moral comment on the nastiness of 'some
people'?  Cut it?"  To which Black replies: "I did."  As though they
had any right to pronounce judgment on the content of a novel, rather
than spelling and typos!  Very well this, too, is taken exactly from
life, and I remain angry about it.  In the original episode, I called
the police, and told them, politely, that if they could not protect my
children from getting beaten up, I would do it my way.  No, I wasn't
bluffing.

After that, things settled down somewhat.  But let's address the issue
raised by Pencil: is this sequence irrelevant to the story?  That
depends on the level you're reading it.  If you assume that the only
relevant material is what happens directly to the protagonist, then the
byplay of children seems incidental.  But if you are looking at the
society in the larger sense, and at fundamental motives, the context
should become clear.  Why would a man desert Earth for a
perhaps-hazardous life on another planet?  Why would a whole family do
it?  Is it from high moral principles "Man deserves to conquer the
Galaxy, and I must do my part!"  or is it more likely to be from the
frustrations of a lifestyle that is deteriorating on every level, from
job security to the safety of children, so that a complete new start
becomes attractive?  I assumed that some few would do it from
principle, but that the greater number would do it from an accumulation
of mundane reasons such as these shown here.  Certainly we fought
through the situation, and in due course a couple of years later, when
we could manage it economically moved out of that neighborhood without
regret.  Up here we have concentrated much of our effort on preventing
development around us, preferring no neighbors to the kind we had.
(Actually, we also had some of the world's best neighbors; had we been
able to dictate which neighbors to keep and which to get rid of, there
are some we would gladly have kept.  But the good neighbors don't
intrude on one's awareness the way the bad ones do.) We did not step to
another planet, but the contrast between city life and deep forest is
about as substantial as this globe presently offers.  This is the way
Tully and his wife now feel and their decision intimately affects Scot.
I feel these examples are relevant to the theme I am developing here.
It may be that I misjudged the case but I believe, for both legal and
social reasons, that I should have been allowed to present it my way.
In short, even if I was wrong to adapt this sequence and I do not
concede that these copyeds had no business second-guessing my decision.
This was, after all, my novel, not theirs.  What the hell did they
think they were doing, hacking out entire scenes?!  Oh, yes there is
worse to come!

[back]

32.  Pencil marked this paragraph up, and Red cut it.  Naturally they
didn't understand the point I was making here: that no one could any
longer be certain of surviving, economically, on Earth.  That the
pressure was greatest on those with family responsibilities, with
children to protect.  Adding insult to injury, Red says that Janice's
decision to emigrate is too sudden.  Perhaps it is after my detailed
documentation of their situation, patterned after the one that caused
my family to emigrate to the forest, is deleted.

[back]

33.  Black says: "Scot phones Fanny to come!"  to which Red responds
"So?"

[back]

34.  Pencil writes: "Usage of "Earth' bothers me makes it unnatural,
far away."

But Red responds: "Modern usage copy editor is old fogy."  What have we
here backstabbing among copyeds?  It strikes me as akin to a
falling-out of thieves.  No, I'm not making this up; this particular
exchange occurs on page 32 of my original manuscript.  They really are
starting to sink their teeth into each other, in the absence of any
semblance of discipline exerted by Editor.

[back]

35.  Black says: "Fanny comes is this the same day?  (If so, Tully has
bicycled 40 miles, 20 with a person behind)."  Red retorts: "Elapsed
time has been implied I suppose I have to spell it out."  Well, I did
show it, by using a break with a centered asterisk, which is the
standard way to signify the passage of time between scenes.  But Pencil
had deleted my asterisk in response to Black's creation of a "Part II"
here.  Maybe writers should open a school for copyeds, to teach them at
least the fundamental literary conventions before they practice their
ignorance on an author's manuscript.

[back]

36.  The copyeds left this paragraph untouched, except for routinely
doubling the "l" in "pedaling," and adding an "a" at the beginning of
"esthetically," but Writer deleted the whole thing.  Writers of the
second rank do not necessarily appreciate the nuances of description or
characterization which is of course why they are second-rank.

[back]

37.  Black says: "For no apparent reason Fanny is now ready to go to
the planet Conquest (look at her on p. 5)!"  She is referring to the
manuscript page; the scene occurs on page 23 of this version.  It is in
the opening, where Fanny expresses no interest in leaving Earth.  Red
agrees: "God knows that has to change!"  So Writer included an
explanation: she had read the literature and talked with Janice, and
concluded Conquest should be better than Earth.  Well, now did I goof?
Why did I set her up as a woman subject to changes of mind without
apparent reason?  Well, first, this is the way women sometimes appear
to men; they have inner seasons that men simply don't understand.  They
don't necessarily give their reasons.  Second, Fanny does have reason
and here I have to do what a writer does not like to do, and give away
future plans.  You see, I had a sequel novel in mind, titled And What
of Conquest?  in which the story of the colonization of that planet was
to be traced.  Tully and family went there and, as we shall see later,
so did Fanny, alone.  Why?  Because she perceived in Tully a man worth
having.  Fanny, as I am showing here, is a very poised, reserved,
self-interested woman with very little conscience.  She goes to
Conquest because she means to take Tully for herself.  You are
appalled?  Well, people like this do exist, and this is her motive.
Naturally she doesn't give Scot her reason!  At this stage she expects
to go with him, and then see about Tully when they are on Conquest.
First things first, for she is very practical.

First get off Earth, then make the conquest on Conquest.  As you might
imagine, there is quite a story to tell on Conquest.  But Editor
bounced it as "juvenile."

It hardly seems so to me!  But as it turned out, that rejection was
fortunate.  I did not then know that people very like Fanny were doing
to Earth?  what Fanny is doing to Scot.  I trust this suffices to show
that I did have reason for the manner I presented Fanny's change of
mind.  I wanted the reader to be slightly perplexed at this point, so
he would remember and understand, later.  This is another example of
the difference between a writer and a copyed: the former plans ahead,
while the latter sees only the moment.  It's another reason why no
copyed should mess with the author's text.  I would be satisfied simply
to have my text rendered into print with no copy-editing, and face the
music for any trifling errors of punctuation anyone thinks I made.  I
was once an English teacher; this hardly makes me an expert, but I have
encountered no copyed or, for that matter, editor who knows more about
the language than I do.  I would prefer to see the copyeds dispensed
with, and the money saved thereby added to the advance paid the author.
That would eliminate a headache and serve as an inducement for better
writing.  But publishers are wedded to their arcane and money-losing
ways.

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38.  Black says derisively: "She's ready to marry Scot immediately."
Yes she is but she is merely using him.  If Scot had more sense he'd
realize that this really is too good to be true, and that this marriage
would be a disaster for him.  Miss Pencil and Miss Black are perhaps
unsympathetic to characterization of this nature.  They don't care to
concede that any woman would marry a man for cynical practical reasons,
though they have to know it is true.  Fortunately, most women are not
like that, as we shall see later in this novel.

[back]

39.  Red marked this paragraph: "Improve that."  Writer simply
eliminated it.

Sigh; none so blind... [back]

40.  Black says querulously: "Scot is feeling better can he now pick up
the child?  This is the same day?  If so, Tully has now bicycled Must
be days later!"

Yes it is, Miss Black; remember that asterisk?

[back]

41.  Black says: "3 days later Scot can't go to Conquest because of the
implied morals charge stemming from the accident beyond belief!!  (Does
P. Anthony hate women?)" To which Red responds: "It would seem obvious
that any clod could tell Scot isn't colony material, morals charge or
not.  However, spell it out again."

So Writer inserted a reference to failure of a psychological
examination.  Very well the termites are evidently having some trouble
digesting this matter, so I'll clarify my intent: I am making a covert
protest to the ponderosity and irrelevance of the processes of
bureaucracy.  Beyond belief?  Hardly!  Ask any person who has been
denied a job because of anonymous misinformation in a secret FBI file,
or had his credit-rating downgraded because of a computer error.  Scot
assumes he is in trouble because of the accident report, and that may
be but it could also be a simple glitch in the system.  What I find
almost beyond belief is the attitude of Miss Black.  No, I don't hate
women but in her case I'm considering an exception.

[back]

42.  Red cut these two sentences, since the rationale for Scot's
rejection has been changed.  This is an example of how one change, like
one lie, necessarily begets another.  My motto is: He edits best who
edits least.

[back]

43.  Black cut out the paragraph, and the following line.  Evidently
Miss Black has some trouble with the notion that a man can be either
romantic or idealistic, or that a woman could be to blame for his loss.
She is entitled to her sexist opinions but not at the expense of my
novel.

[back]

44.  This is one of several three-dot ellipses I used.  Today I might
use four dots to indicate the end of the sentence following the omitted
words "disturbed him deeply" but I am rendering this text unchanged,
deliberately, faults and all.

[back]

45.  Red says: "Get rid of this garbage and add something longer and
more believable."  Writer simply cut it.

[back]

46.  The copyeds really took off on this one!  Pencil says: "No
explanation is given for Fanny's behavior.  She was reluctant to
emigrate.  Why did she change her mind, let alone go off alone?  Again,
'the nastiness of some people' seems the only answer.  Cheap solution."
And Black says: "Scot finally thinks to telephone Fanny only to
discover she's gone to Conquest her parents think he's with her they
took her to the station, but didn't even look for him they assumed he
was on the train!  Yet she was leaving home for good their only
daughter they'd never see her again!"  Right, Miss Black.  When Fanny
told them that Scot was already on the train, were they going to say
"We don't believe you go locate him and bring him back so we know you
aren't lying, you disreputable creature"?  No they trusted her to know
what she was doing, and they were blinded by love and tears; it never
occurred to them that Scot might not be aboard.  They are ordinary,
caring people who believe in their daughter, odd as that may seem to ye
copyeds.  The parents, like Scot (and Tully), were completely deceived.
Fanny is a manipulator; she ran one extremely neat, cynical operation
here and surely she is going to bring similar misery to Tully on
Conquest.  Our Miss Black concludes: "Why did Fanny go?  Yes, why
hadn't she told him?  Why didn't P. Anthony tell us?"  Well, Fanny
went, as I explained in a prior note, in order to nab Tully, whom she
had come to perceive as a winner in the course of twenty miles on a
tandem bike.  He had all the qualities she liked in his brother Scot,
plus some significant strengths where Scot had weaknesses.  She didn't
tell Scot because he would only have made an unpleasant fuss, and she
doesn't like fusses.  I didn't tell the reader for the same reason the
author of a mystery doesn't announce who-done-it on page five.  I
think, in any event, that my explanation would have been wasted on
these rampaging females.  They were more interested in arguing than in
answers; they never bothered to ask me directly.  I never saw these
notes or even knew of their existence until months after the novel was
published.  If they had really wanted to clarify the novel, why did
they keep their questions a secret from me?  Because I might have
refuted their objections exactly as I am doing now?  And they profess
not to know Fanny's motive, these conniving bitches!  What hypocrisy!

[back]

47.  Pencil crossed out the reference to the little girl, and Black
says: "Scot waters the garden if he misses a spot the plants wilted."
Apparently Black is uninformed about farming, too; young, tender plants
are quick to wilt in the sun, if not properly watered.  I have
gardened, on and off, for years, and of course I was raised on a farm.
Whatever possessed Black to challenge this?  The arrogance of ignorance
amazes me!  But Writer, who may have had more exposure to rural life,
compounds the error in his version by having the tomato plants promptly
wilt when watered.  The only rationale I can see for such a phenomenon
is the drooping of plants in a downpour, they let their leaves down to
avoid getting bashed by the force of the storm.  Plants are smarter
than we think; as a vegetarian I appreciate their qualities.  But a
gentle watering on a sunny day never made my tomatoes wilt!

[back]

48.  Red says: "Check energy book for a better system."  The system
described is the one we had at the time; it was operative and
satisfactory, and cut our water-heating cost substantially.  We finally
got an electric timer that turned on the pump automatically in the
morning, and off in the evening, but Tully hadn't yet gotten around to
that.  I could say a great deal about solar water-heating systems, but
for now will merely point out that the "best" systems can be quite
expensive, so most people settle for second-best.  A highly-efficient
solar water-heating system is no bargain if it saves you $500 a year in
electricity but costs $15,000 to set up; it will spring a leak before
it earns out.

[back]

49.  Black observes: "Scot was alone on his block is this a farm?  Scot
talks to a neighbor in the next block."  Very well, once more over
this: here in the Florida country the forest is platted in blocks one
mile on a side.  These are subdivided as convenient.  Thus we have one
immediate neighbor across the street, and three more (in three
directions) a quarter-mile distant.  We are on speaking terms with all
of them, and exchange favors, such as feeding each other's animals when
someone has to be away.  We are the only residence on our block of 30
acres, but other blocks have several farms.  I assume that similar
setups exist elsewhere on the continent.  Actually I visualized Tully's
farm as closer in to town than ours, so he is near "the fringe of
suburbia" that is, not that far out of the more densely settled region,
but definitely in the country.  Got it straight now, city-girl?

[back]

50.  These lamps, again, are taken from my own experience.  Faced with
that short deadline for completing the novel, I found it easier to use
the things I already knew, rather than inventing new ones as I might
otherwise have preferred to do.

The farm that I was raised on, in the Green Mountains of New England,
had no electricity, so we used wood-burning stoves and kerosene lamps
that operate exactly as described.  But Writer thought he knew better,
so he added this sentence: "After being pressurized with a little
gadget attached to one side of the base, it burned with a pure white
light."  He's thinking of another kind of lamp.  He should have let
well enough alone.

[back]

51.  Red says: "Dumb.  Worry about vandals, maybe, or mention trees and
bushes shading unit part time."  Well, of course the trees and house do
shade the ground, which is why less sunlight reaches it; I thought that
was obvious.  But Writer took another route, having Scot install a hand
pump for water circulation.  Now that's dumb!  Let me explain a little
more about solar water-heating, as we have used both the pump and the
pump less kind, and I do know whereof I speak.  If you use a pump, you
must run it pretty much continuously, because only a small amount of
water heats at a time.  You have to keep it circulating, the warm water
being brought down to the tank and the cold water being forced up to
the hot copper pipes of the collector.  An electric pump is continuous,
but a hand pump is not; you'd have to stand there all day pumping,
slowly.  So the practical answer is to put your collector below the
holding-tank; then the warm water circulates automatically up and the
cold down.

That is the best of all systems, completely automatic; if a cloud hides
the sun, the heating stops and the water stops moving, preserving the
warm water in the tank.  Once again, the arrogance of ignorance has
struck, rendering my sense into nonsense.  Why do people who haven't
done something assume they know better than one who has?

[back]

52.  Now here is one I wince at: it makes it seem that he is in the
city.  He isn't; the civilized amenities, such as electricity and
phone, emanate from the city, so he feels their impact out here.  Bad
phrasing.

[back]

53.  Black says: "Beauty knocks on door she doesn't want to spend the
night outside what about the empty houses in that block?"  Well, Miss
Black, if you were a lone woman, would you trust yourself to a deserted
house that could be hiding any man or beast and would have no civilized
amenities?  Or would you seek company you could trust, so that at least
you could sleep without fear?

[back]

54.  Red circled this, with a question mark, and Writer excised it.  In
case it is confusing to present readers, I'll clarify the reference:
When Fanny suddenly agreed to go to Conquest, Scot could hardly believe
it, as he had expected her demurral.  Now he sees this woman, who
evidently expected to be turned down, reacting similarly, and he
understands.  Experience is a great teacher.

[back]

55.  Red exclaims: "Gak!  Do something about that."  So Writer fudged
it some.  Now Wanda is a special person, honest with herself and
others; I portray her as I see her, in her hour of desperation.  She'd
rather make a gift than suffer a theft, of whatever nature.
Specifically, she'd rather give a man sex than get raped.  I respect
that.  Another woman might react differently; perhaps most women would.
But this is not most women, this is Wanda, an individual.  What is
there about this portrayal that warrants this illiterate "Gak"?

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56.  Red remarks wryly "He didn't even give her a blanket, the cheap

SOB."

Well, Scot is simply not smart about things like that phones, blankets,
women or whatever.  He just didn't think of it.  He is in fact a pretty
unlikely hero.

Fortunately, heroism is not defined by things like that, as we shall
see.

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57.  Black says: "He checked around the farm outside with a stalled car
down the street!  Is it a farm or a town?"  Very well, ma'am, let's go
to the big dictionary: my 1913 Funk & Wagnalls, bought second-hand for
me as a gift for my tenth birthday, over forty years ago and still my
favorite reference.  This has several definitions of "street," one of
which is: "A public road or highway extending through a considerable
tract of country."  As a synonym it lists "Road."  Now where the hell
is the problem, Miss Black?  If that word "street" bothered you, why
didn't you simply change it to "road"?  I wouldn't have objected; upon
reconsideration, I think "road" is the more appropriate term.  But no,
you had to Make an Issue again.  Don't you have better uses for your
time than this?  Or were you just trying to impress Editor by making
mountains of molehills?  As I understand it, you were hired right after
this novel was accepted as it stood whereupon you sought to prove
yourself by quibbling it to death.  Miss B, your kind should be
abolished.

[back]

58.  "This is springtime," Black remarks.  Indeed it is; what of it? Do
you have a point to make, or are you hinting at something?

[back]

59.  This passage about stealing Pencil, Blue, Red and Purple took off
on this, and deleted it entire.  They concluded that it didn't make
sense.  Doesn't it?  Or is this a nuance that no one at this
establishment was equipped to comprehend?

Where was Black, on this one?  When something ridiculous is going on,
she's usually right in the thick of it.  Ah, well maybe she was in the
Lady's Room at the moment.

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60.  Red circled this 150-word dialogue about decency, remarking that
he was uncomfortable with it, and cut it all out.  I'm not surprised.
As far as I can tell, none of the folk associated with this outfit have
much to do with decency.

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61.  Red crossed out the last two words, labeling them "crap."  Need I
comment?

[back]

62.  Ah Miss Black is back from the Lady's Room.  Here she crosses out
three lines.  No, wait that's Blue doing that.

[back]

63.  Now Black is back!

"He received a letter from Tully 63 light-years away!

(And did he mention Fanny, by chance?)" Sigh I see I'll have to clarify
the obvious again.  Because Conquest is 63 light-years away, there is
no way to transmit a message by radio or beam; it would take 63 years
to arrive.  But the MT shuttles are going back and forth regularly,
carrying colonists there, returning empty.  Empty MT's, per the pun. So
Tully sends a physical letter back;

there's plenty of room for it, and the shuttle is going to Earth
anyway.  This is the only feasible type of communication.  No, Tully
didn't mention Fanny; he's a decent man who doesn't want to rub salt in
the wound.

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64.  Here is one they should have challenged, and didn't.  When we
built our new house in the forest, we discovered that there are no
sewers out here.  Most country houses are on septic tanks; Tully's
house should have been too.  But com posting refuse is a good
alternative.

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65.  Writer killed them off instead.  I regard this as gratuitous
violence.

[back]

66.  Blue cut most of three paragraphs.

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67.  Red exclaims: "Wash it, you nincompoop!"  Um, Red, I'm tempted not
to break this news to you, but my conscience compels me: the problem
with many of these poisons is that they are absorbed by the leaves of
the plants, and therefore cannot be washed off.  But you go ahead and
wash and eat it if you want to.

[back]

68.  Red marked this entire scene for deletion, but Purple said "STET
or whatever."  Yes, Purple, that was the correct term; Writer left the
passage in, except for the song.  That could be a correct decision; I
assumed the song was in the public domain, but if it's not, then it
shouldn't be quoted.  Black, meanwhile, has a sour note: "Bugs eating
lettuce Wanda says let's stomp on them Scot is chagrined that he
doesn't think of this brilliant solution?"  That's right, Miss B;
wouldn't you be?

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69.  Black again: "Only when Scot stays outside at night does he
realize that when they're in the house at night someone could sneak up
on them!"  Right on, Black!  The obvious can be the hardest thing to
recognize which is why women disrobe in lighted apartments with
uncurtained windows, providing the men of the neighborhood with nightly
entertainment.  Ever do that yourself?

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70.  "Prowler comes and goes does nothing," Black remarks.

"Scot checks area where prowler had been.  Sure enough, there were
footprints in the dirt SURE "NUFF!!"  To which Red adds: "He expects
maybe tire tracks?"  All right, enjoy your feeble sarcasm, folks.  In
starlight innocent things may appear menacing, and the mind's eye can
generate a human shape where only a moving branch exists.

Would you have Scot not check the region?  Then what is the basis for
your ridicule?  Forgive me if I'm getting paranoid, but somehow I
perceive something other than helpful literary criticism operating
here.  In fact, I see something other than proper publishing practice
operating throughout.

[back]

71.  "Do something about that," Red says, so Writer cuts it.  I remind
my readers that these notes are only samples; spot cuts are so common
that it would be tedious to document them all.  I have not found one
single page of my manuscript unmolested.  What, incidentally, was so
bad about this passage?

[back]

72.  "Wanda suggests digging holes and covering them up to protect the
house.

Scot thinks this is INGENIOUS!"  Black sneers.  Red responds: "So he's
still stupid.  So?"  No, folks, Scot isn't stupid; he's just an
ordinary guy, learning as he goes.  What he does makes more sense to me
than what this clutch of would-be critics is doing here; I'd certainly
rather have him for a neighbor than them.  But Red does add one valid
note: what Wanda describes is not a deadfall.

[back]

73.  This entire 1,000-word scene, from the time they go upstairs to
this point, was eliminated by Writer.  Pencil says: "This whole
discussion of sleeping vs.

screwing seems very dated, but worse, very drag-g-ed out.  Boredom sets
in on the 3rd paragraph."  Black says: "I agree!  Three pages of shall
we, shan't we terrible."  And Red says: "Yes."  It is evident that none
of these folk have any patience with the struggle of two people to come
to terms with themselves and their relationship.  Well, I prefer to let
the reader judge; did boredom really set in on the third paragraph?  Is
the scene terrible?  I'm sure I'll be hearing if this material is
really that bad.  Meanwhile, I'm inclined to trust my own judgment,
which says that sexual engagement is no light matter, and that
characterization of this nature is vital.  We have to see how Scot
handles his personal commitments, in order to understand the basis for
his later actions, which affect the whole country.

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74.  Black says: "

"That's what I like about you, Scot, you're a normal male."  HE IS!" To
which Red replies: "A normal prick, yes."

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75.  Black continues: "Scot's digging, Wanda's gathering wood.  She
pitches a shovelful of dirt at him!  (Impossible.)" To which Red
responds: "No, he isn't digging you missed a sentence."  Yep she
doesn't have time to read carefully, but she certainly has time to
carp.  How typical.  But Red carps too: "Cutesy-poo.  Do something."
And I say: Yes, it is cutesy but real-life dialogue gets that way.

Ordinary folk aren't as clever as copyeds.

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76.  Black says: "They didn't talk 'cause they didn't want to make any
noise they ate potato salad.  The rest of the neighborhood is making
noise."  Red responds:

"Well, potato salad isn't very noisy."

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77.  "THE NEIGHBORHOOD AGAIN" Black exclaims indignantly, tossing her
ebony tresses, but Red responds soothingly, "The term does not refer
only to city blocks, you know."  Purple is less charitable: "Dumb
copy-editor."

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78.  Despite my objections to Miss Black's objections about the locale,
I do feel that some of this is imprecise.  Obviously I was thinking
partly of the neighborhood I left, as well as of the one I was coming
to.  You can hear voices and cars and dogs at a distance of half a
mile, but they have to be pretty loud and you have to listen carefully.
Obviously Scot and Wanda are listening carefully now; still, I am not
quite at ease with this.  If I were reworking this, instead of showing
it exactly as it was, I would delete the "voices talking."

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79.  "Scot has her in a bear hug she's unconscious," Black says.

"HE DIDN'T KNOW

SHE'D STOPPED STRUGGLING."  So?

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80.  Both Black and Purple had trouble with this entire interrogation.
Black says, "The triteness of the interrogation of the girl intruder
this is all padding.  SCOT ADMIRES IT!"  Purple says: "Get some decent
and less male-chauvinistic questions."  That's an interesting remark,
since Wanda is doing the questioning here.  Maybe I'm dense; I just
don't see what's so male-chauvinistic about questions like "Can you sit
up?"; "Who are you?"; "Are you hungry?"; and "Why were you wandering
around our yard?"  Those were the ones asked on the page where this
comment was penned.  Maybe Purple considered the tone of the complete
interrogation to be male-chauvinistic, though it was conducted by a
woman.  As for it being trite, the reader will have to judge; how do
you question someone in this situation?  Certainly it was not written
as padding; I was trying desperately to keep this novel short, without
sacrificing necessary elements.

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81.  Ouch!  Downtown is ten miles away.  I was raised in the country,
and we walked one and a half miles to reach our mailbox, and four miles
to town, but ten miles is not a reasonable distance for Wanda to walk
alone to pick up an old newspaper.  As Miss Black would say well, let's
just let the subject drop.

[back]

82.  Ouch again!  I had definitely slipped in my thinking back to the
metropolitan setting.  Miss Black does after all have a point, much as
it galls me to admit it.

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83.  I perceive a reader challenge developing here: if two months have
passed, hasn't the lettuce matured yet?  The answer is that they are
staggering their plantings, spacing them out so as always to have new
plants developing as the old ones mature.  In Florida, a garden can be
maintained the year around; the farther north you go, the more limited
the season becomes.  I see this as a southern region, not necessarily
Florida you don't see much snow in Florida but with a fairly extensive
lettuce season.

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84.  Now, mysteriously, the marks and comments are thinning out; I
don't know whether the copyeds in their wisdom decided that my text was
improving, or whether they simply ran out of carps.  (Maybe my
confession that Miss Black did have half a point about the city-country
confusion mollified her?) But here Blue changed "Negro" to "black." But
reference to his race was deleted from the published version.  Like
sharks, these people seem to pounce on whatever gobbet has already been
touched, each one adding his chomp.  Now Brother Paul, here about to be
introduced, is perhaps the most important single character I have
generated; he is the main figure in my quarter-million word novel Tarot
(published in three volumes, to my dismay; it was written as one) and
appears in the Cluster series, which shares the framework that spreads
across nine diverse volumes, with others contemplated.  I don't like
major figures getting messed-over.

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85.  Blue deleted this 100-word exchange.  No reason given.

[back]

86.  Here I used the subjunctive mood where it does not belong.  Make
that "was preaching" etc.

[back]

87.  Blue deleted these 50 words.

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88.  Blue deleted these 50 words too.  I don't think Bluebeard likes
Brother Paul.

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89.  Purple exclaims "Do something about that!"  and Red says "Gak!" so
out came the whole paragraph.  Now it happens that I have done com
posting too; the compost pile assimilates the least-appetizing refuse
and converts it to the soil on which most land bound life ultimately
depends.  It is a marvel, physically and philosophically. This is my
favorite concept of this novel.  What does it rate from these copyeds? 
An exclamation of disgust, and excision from the text. Know what I
think?  I think these folk have souls that reek of manure and garbage,
and they desperately need com posting so that they can learn to
perceive the significance of a compost pile.  Meanwhile, annoyed that
this concept was cut, I put it in Tarot, where it survives to this day
and not one reader has cried "Gak!"  to me.

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90.  Ye copyeds had another field day with this sequence.  Pencil says
of this paragraph: "You believe this you'll find the premise of this
book believable."

Red says: "Right on!"  Black says: "The 'thugs" behavior is not
believable.

Scot's thinking of p. 96 [the manuscript page page 109 of this book] is
silly."

To which Purple (maybe Red sometimes they're hard to distinguish) says
"No more unbelievable than the rest of the plot, but try to liven it up
a bit."  It seems that not one of them was willing to let the reader be
the judge, or to let the author handle his novel his own way, right or
wrong.

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91.  The published version had Brother Paul hurting the men somewhat
which misses the point.  The truly proficient martial artist can subdue
others efficiently without hurting them, and Brother Paul is no
hypocrite.  Writer evidently didn't catch on that it is a deliberately
crude, TV-violence type scene that is nevertheless concluded by
pacifistic means.  You don't see that as often.  The point made here is
not the merit of gratuitous violence, but that of competent pacifism. I
was raised as a Quaker (The Religious Society of Friends), and a
guiding principle of Quakerism is to seek the nonviolent solution.  I
did not join that faith, but I remain impressed by its tenets, and they
do guide my life in subtle ways.  As an agnostic I am not against
religion, just apart from it.

[back]

92.  Most of this paragraph was deleted by Blue.  Any hint of
philosophy is anathema, it seems.

[back]

93.  Writer changed this to a .25 automatic pistol with a magazine of
six cartridges.  I don't remember why I set up the gun as I did, but I
normally draw from reality unless I have reason for fantasy.  I believe
I had reference to a derringer of this description the kind of tiny gun
that can kill.  People tend to assume that all handguns are standard;
they are not.

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94.  Writer deleted this prayer, apparently objecting to any religious
expression.  I am, as I said, agnostic, professing no belief in any
religion or any supernatural phenomenon, but I respect those who do
believe.  Brother Paul is a deeply religious man, and so I portray him
as he is.  I do not feel it is the place of the writer to impose his
private religious, political or moral code on the reader; thus you
would not know from the text of the novel that I do not believe in God.
I do feel it is the place of the writer to characterize people
realistically, and I did my best with Brother Paul.  This is the
attitude Brother Paul has, and I daresay he's a better man than I am.
He does pray openly when he feels it is appropriate but only then.
Nobody else had any business castrating him like this, cutting off his
prayer.  It is a matter of artistic integrity a concept evidently
foreign to these revisionists.

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95.  Black can't handle this.

"Beethoven's 9th on a piccolo!  (where did he get the piccolo?) No he's
whistling, but it sounds like a piccolo perfect pitch while he's
stacking wood (150 pound logs?)" Here we go again!  Miss Black
evidently was so eager to pan this scene that she started her note
before completely reading the passage, then had to correct herself as
she went along.

I've commented before on her evident motive: the sheer need to make her
mark, regardless of the good of the novel.  Here her ignorance about
country life betrays her again.  Brand is not at this point hoisting a
150-pound log, he's stacking split wood.  To trace the process of
reduction, that I did not feel was necessary in the novel (never
underestimate the ignorance of the copyed!): the 150-pound log was four
feet long, a handy size for hauling in from the forest.

It was then sawed into three sixteen-inch-long billets, each weighing
about 50 pounds.  These were split into quarters, each quarter weighing
about twelve and a half pounds.  It is these quarters Brand is stacking
as he whistles.  He's a powerful man; he can pick up such a piece of
wood with one hand without bursting out in sweat or gasping from the
strain.  I do it all the time, preparing wood for our stove, and I'm
not as strong as Brand is.  This whole process, like so much of what I
present in this novel, is taken directly from my own experience.

I know whereof I speak, here.  Yes, the whistling too: certainly it is
possible to play the theme from Beethoven's Ninth on a piccolo; I can
do it on the recorder, which is a flutelike instrument, or on the
harmonica, or I can whistle it.  I'm no musician, so I don't do it
well, but anyone would recognize it.  Brand is better at this than I
am, so he does it well.  You don't have to render Beethoven with a full
orchestra; it's excellent music however you do it, and a haunting
theme.  I believe the song for the United Nations uses that tune: "Walk
beside me, O my brother,..."  Not only is it possible on such
instruments, it's easy one of the readiest classical themes to adapt.
As Miss Black would have known, had she bothered to try it herself.
Meanwhile, Writer checked with his wife yes, his note to that effect is
right there on the manuscript!  and she evidently reassured him about
this point, so he left this scene in.  This whole challenge was much
ado about nothing.  In fact, this whole blundering editing job but I'm
starting to froth at the mouth!

[back]

96.  But our dear Miss Black simply can't let it alone.

"Given the state of the world," she asks plaintively, "where did he
learn these melodies he's illiterate."  To which Purple responds, with
appropriately purple prose: "He isn't deaf, you jackass."  Which misses
the point of Black's objection; with the power out, there will be few
radios playing for Brand to listen to, to pick up tunes.  However, this
is no problem: Brand wasn't born yesterday, and he has had most of his
life to listen when there was plenty to listen to, before MT changed
things.  Melodies learned in childhood remain in adulthood.

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97.  Blue and Pencil marked this whole 500-word discussion of women for
deletion, but Writer digested it down and kept part of it.  Let me take
this opportunity to clarify part of what I was doing here: the business
about letting a small woman struggle with a tough chore like grinding
grain.  Naturally I've had considerable experience on exactly the type
of hand-grinder described.  Not only does it produce flour, it develops
the arm and chest muscles.  Well, Lucy craves a larger bosom, having
correctly ascertained that this is the way to a certain man's eye.

Childbirth and nursing will increase the mass of the mammary tissue but
what's a girl to do before that?  Lucy realizes that the grinder
represents her opportunity to develop the muscle-sheath underneath the
breast, hence a more prominent outline.  This is a recognized
technique; the muscle boosts the breast outward, and the effect is
similar to additional mammary in appearance, though not in function. So
she grinds.  It's hard work, but she's determined; she's playing for
high stakes here.  Brand, perceiving this, agrees.  He sees what Scot
does not: that Lucy, not Wanda, is the proper woman for Scot.  But it
is necessary for time to pass before the grinding and the situation do
their work.

Scot really is rather foolish about women, as men tend to be. Naturally
the female copyeds don't want this sort of thing publicized; trade
secrets are precious.

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98.  Red challenged this figure, not for the first time: he feels that
not enough people are being shipped to account for the observed impact
on Earth.  Well, this is an accelerating thing ten million in the first
year, more thereafter from this country alone.  Within a decade, at
this progression, the nation will be entirely depopulated.  That seems
fast enough to me.  But what of the initial stage, when fewer than a
million were gone, yet things seemed to be falling apart?  That I
perceive as more an effect of the huge energy strain on the nation, to
support the MT effort.  The society contracted rapidly, leaving the
fringes to wither.  To save power, electricity was cut off first from
the less-economic farm regions, and that caused the residents there to
vacate rapidly.  Had Scot resided in a big city, he would have noted
relatively little change.  Since it is my purpose as a novelist to
dramatize the situation, I have him out in the country where the
cutback and depopulation are most apparent.

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99.  Actually, in Tarot I go into Brother Paul's background more
deeply, and it turns out that Paul actually was his prior name.
Sometimes it works that way.

But the symbolism and significance remain; he did assume a new meaning
for the name, as we are about to see.

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100.  More recent theory has it that Paul was epileptic but the
principle is the same.

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101.  This 1,000-word scene of religious discussion is condemned by Red
as "Elementary Sunday School" material and eliminated by Blue.

[back]

102.  Red marked this "Balls" and adds: "Remarkable cures throw in some
garbage on that."

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103.  More recent research suggests that the lemmings have been
unfairly characterized; they don't blindly charge into the sea.  But it
remains an evocative analogy.

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104.  "What does it all mean?"  Red asks plaintively, and Writer
reworked and digested this section down so that the thesis on which the
novel is based hardly shows.  I suspect that what it all means is that
copyeds should not tackle a manuscript they do not comprehend.  Would a
surgeon operate without understanding what he is doing?

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105.  Red expresses objection to these two paragraphs.

"Does he have to be quite so obviously a teat man?"  Beauty is in the
eye of the beholder, these paragraphs discuss breasts, face, skin,
health, hair, legs, arms and torso yet all Red perceives is "teats."
Well, not quite all; Red adds "And an MCP to boot."  I believe the
initials stand for "Male Chauvinist Pig."  Thus the mere act of
noticing the attractive qualities of a woman makes a man an "MCP."  And
what of a woman who notices the attractive qualities of a man?  Is she
automatically a Female Chauvinist Pig?  Must we be limited to noticing
only the unattractive qualities of the opposite sex, to avoid being
branded chauvinist pigs?  Why do I have this nagging feeling that this
so-called "editing" is mainly an exercise in name-calling by closet
bigots?

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106.  Well, they had done a little of it before Brother Paul arrived,
but he had made it more scientific.

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107.  Red circled this clause, saying in his expressive way: "Gak!
Yeast gone bad and unable to get more."  Not so, Red; this, again, is
from my own experience.

The yeast culture bubbles along as long as you take care of it, as with
any living thing.  You simply have to keep it reasonably cool (to avoid
over activity and keep diluting it with new flour and water every few
days; when you want to bake, you take some of this mixture and put it
in the mix in lieu of new yeast.

It's the same stuff, in a different form.  The practice of cultivating
yeast, like that of baking itself, has been largely forgotten in recent
times, but it's the kind of thing that makes perfect sense in the
context of this novel.  As a boy, I kept my own yeast-culture, and
every so often I would eat some of it directly.  I called it "fizzly
pudding," for it fizzled on the tongue.

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108.  Naturally they couldn't let this revelation pass!  Having missed
the point about the grinding and Scot's best choice of women, the
copyeds are enraged to have it revealed here.  Pencil says "This is all
truly ridiculous.  Must we?"  Red says: "Both MCP's on Brand it's
logical" and, on Scot's comment about there being more to a woman than
a bust, "Nice that he finally discovered the fact."

But as I have noted, Scot always was aware of that; it's Red who is
evidently hyper about "teats."  So I agree with Pencil: this is all
truly ridiculous only I'm not talking about the narrative.  But Red
isn't quite finished; Black (naturally you couldn't keep her out of
this!) is looking for a better word than "bastard," so Red obligingly
suggests: "asshole?  prick?"  Writer simply eliminated the whole
sequence.  Actually, "bastard" is not the ideal word;

technically it means a person who was born when his parents weren't
married, and if this signals a fault, it can hardly be in the person,
who had no control over his generation.  But it is a commonly used term
for denigration or, in this case, admiration, and so I elected in this
instance to go for realism rather than proper use.

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109.  Yes, you guessed it: all of the text following my last note was
deleted by Writer.

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110.  Black remarks smugly: "Lucy reveals she stole Scot's car (that's
what I thought when she fell into the pit and Scot thought he
recognized her)" to which Red retorts: "So?  We've already established
that Scot is stupid."  Very well:

when I first drafted this novel, Lucy wasn't the one who stole his car.
Then it occurred to me that there would be a certain poetic justice in
this, so I pondered making her the car-thief.  My wife, as I recall,
was doubtful: misuse of coincidence, etc.  But art prevailed over
coincidence, and I made the change.

Then, to be fair to the reader (a thing ye copyeds wouldn't understand)
I put in the early references about her familiarity.  That way, the
perceptive readers could make the connection immediately, while others
could wait for the revelation.  This is not a mystery novel, but in
ordinary fiction there can be elements of that.  I feel this change
worked out well, and I have no trouble myself, believing that Lucy is
the car-thief; had it not worked out, I would have changed it back.  So
Miss Black caught on early (she claims); that's no sign that the author
of the novel is stupid.  Some readers will be surprised at the
revelation, learning Lucy's identity for the first time; that's no sign
that those readers are stupid either.  I like to write my novels so
that they can be appreciated on more than one level, and this is an
example of that.  There are also different philosophic levels, that
have been giving the copyeds even more trouble.

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111.  Red circles these two paragraphs and says: "More psychology and
less fucking."  It's pretty plain what level he's reading on.  So these
paragraphs were eliminated.

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112.  Pencil, Blue and Red ganged up on this scene and eliminated it,
and Writer had them get married instead just like that.  This evidently
is their notion of realism.  Scot has in effect been jilted twice, and
is on a double rebound, but suddenly he's sure?  My portrayal is not
intended to make of him an MCP, but a genuinely hurt and uncertain man
who is not about to make the same mistake a third time.  This may be
ungallant, but it is realistic and it's about time he got realistic. So
he does not suddenly marry the car-thief; he takes time to be sure this
is the proper course.  Taking that extra measure of time to make an
important decision has saved me an enormous amount of grief over the
course of my life, and I'm sure it will do the same for Scot.  But of
course these copyeds have not been noted for thinking before shooting
off their multicolored pens.

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113.  Blue marked this entire technical discussion for deletion, but
Pencil said, "STET" that is, keep it in.  In fact, Editor called me to
ask for a repetition of this explanation later in the novel, as they
didn't understand it.  This shows how the first instinct of these
people is simply to cut what they don't understand, regardless of its
importance to the novel.  This is idiocy, of course but it does seem to
be the operative principle.  Meanwhile, Red circled the reference to
ease of sabotage and said: "Really?  Bullshit."  Evidently Red thinks
he knows something I don't, again.

[back]

114.  Red says, "Show the action, don't put it offstage," so Writer
amplified the scene.  Now I had reason for doing it the way I did but
let's let that wait for now.  Have no fear, I will discuss this at
length before the end of the novel.

[back]

115.  Red says "Try to get this mildly plausible."  So Writer has Scot
fight through, but fail to rescue Donald.  I have instead saved this
material for a flashback that occurs late in the novel.  Why did I, a
writer who abhors unnecessary obfuscation, do something as artificial
as this?  Why did I skimp on detail here, where it seems most relevant?
Well, my reason obviously bypassed the massed wisdom of ye copyeds
except, oddly, Pencil, who seemed to perceive it, but disagreed.  I'll
clarify everything when I get to that flashback.

[back]

116.  Red circled most of the fourth sentence of this paragraph,
saying:

"Bullshit!  They came in from the outside.  Rewrite this to comply with
history."

Now this is an interesting view.  History happens to be a hobby of
mine, and the largest section of my private library is devoted to it
several hundred books.

Put very simply, in the fifth century A.D."  when the Huns overran
Slavic and Germanic Europe and contributed to the disintegration of the
Western Roman Empire, England was left unprotected.  The Teutonic
Angles, Saxons and Jutes raided and then colonized the island, finally
becoming dominant; hence the "Angle-Land" became "England," as Brother
Paul clarified earlier in this novel.

Actually, the invaders merged with the prior population and, with an
overlay of Norman stock, became the modern-day civilized kingdom.
America was colonized by this British amalgam, and by peoples from
other regions, and now there is further merging.  Here in Earth?  I am
showing cultural as well as technological reversion, with modern stock
assuming the attributes of ancient tribes, though of course this is
only a semblance, not the actual original tribes.  Details differ,
naturally.  Red's comment, in the present context, is nonsense.  I
suspect that he simply misunderstood my thesis, and thought that I was
saying that the real Saxons formed from the remnants of some prior
civilization.  He read carelessly, and in the arrogance of his
ignorance assumed that I was the one talking nonsense.

[back]

117.  "Why not Mongols?  Or Zulus?"  Red demands.  Red has been harping
on this, in prior marginal notes.  Now the Mongols are one of my
favorite historical subjects; my novel Steppe is based on them.  But
the Mongols never invaded America.  Neither did the Zulus.  The Saxons
did, in the manner I have described.

Our contemporary American heritage is thus more Saxon than Mongol or
Zulu, so that is the identification made here.  However, I do later
have reference to the Huns.

[back]

118.  "Saxons aren't nomads.  (And nomads don't, anyway.)," Red
objects.  Some things it seems I must clarify again for you, Red. These
aren't exactly Saxons;

they are a regressed, reconstituted tribe that our folk have chosen for
convenience to call Saxons.  Whatever the historical Teutons may have
been at whatever stage of their evolution, these contemporary people
are of necessity somewhat nomadic.  They do take care of their horses
as did the true nomads of history, such as the Mongols.

[back]

119.  Black says: "Man's arthritis abates because he is more satisfied
with his life?"  To which Purple replies: "Read up on medicine it
happens."  True which is why I mentioned it in the novel.

[back]

120.  Of this statement of faith, Red says: "Totally unbelievable, but
can it be improved?"  And Purple says: "[Editor] or no, I won't have
that gullible a priest.  He was a city slicker just a couple of years
ago."  Now I could get into an extended discussion of what can be
believed in the name of religion, such as crackers and wine converting
into literal flesh and blood of a man almost two thousand years dead,
but let's just say that I find this Priest of Lugus perfectly credible.
He may also be insane, but he is credible.  People have an enormous
capacity to believe in what benefits them materially or stokes their
self-esteem.  Red himself, for example, believes that he is a good
editor and an informed person.

[back]

121.  "A crop of farmers led by Attilla of the soil," Purple chortles,
evidently unaware (like some contemporary celebrities) that the name is
properly accented on the first syllable and is spelled with a single
"l."

[back]

122.  Which is a deliberate reversal of the original maxim.

[back]

123.  Black protests about this whole situation: "Technology still
transmitting people with all the apparatus that implies AT THE SAME
TIME Barbarian tribes building camps and fighting with bows and arrows.
THIS REALLY IS NOT BELIEVABLE."  Purple responds: "Ask one of your
Eskimos about that sometime."

Precisely we have barbarian tribes in remote jungles today.  I marvel
at the sheltered life Miss Black has evidently led.  She finds reality
unbelievable.

Perhaps she prefers it that way.  But why, O Lord, did she have to be
inflicted on my manuscript?

[back]

124.  Black is aghast: "The Druid priest is a former lawyer the King,
his superior, is "God knows what' who believes in magic a cloud passes
in front of the sun the King thinks its magic and lets the Druid priest
have his way.  [THIS IS DESCRIBED AS AN IMPRESSIVE MANEUVER.]" (Those
are her brackets, not mine.) Exactly, Miss Black.  What is your
point?

[back]

125.  Black again, outraged: "The whole joust with its false conclusion
is silly.

This followed by a no sleeping no eating contest!"  Purple responds
"But takes up space."  Now it is interesting that these folk who seek
so constantly to advise me on realism and history do not recognize the
point: This tribe has adopted its mode of Celtic culture, and is true
to that mode.  This includes acceptance of some magic, single-combat,
and an appeals procedure of exactly the nature described here.
Contemporary folk may feel it is "silly," but this is the way the Celts
did it.  Let's face it, copyeds: you can't condemn me for being untrue
to history (rightly or wrongly) and also condemn those scenes that are
true to history.  And I remind you again that regardless of the merit
of a particular scene, or your private opinion of it, this is my novel,
not yours, and you should not be interfering with it.  If you believe
you can write better novels yourselves, by all means do so on your own
contracts.  The attempt might have a salutary effect on your
attitude.

[back]

126.  Red protests: "You've already said that about 6 times."  Really?
That the emigration of Earth's best and brightest might have caused the
reversion?  Seems to me that when I mentioned this before, it was to
present the notion that the diminishing population caused the
regression, without comment on the quality of the exodus.  I could be
wrong.  I'd like to see page-and-line references to those prior six
times, Red.

[back]

127.  "But chest muscles aren't used in carrying back muscles are.  Put
something less banal in there," Red says.  Well, now; it depends how
you carry.  Having kinked my back more than once by lifting a heavy
load improperly, I have learned caution, and I now try to lift with a
vertical torso.  For that, and for carrying, I believe I use my arm and
chest muscles, which are better developed than those of most other
writers.  I did 30 chins in the morning on my study rafter, and 75
Japanese pushups three times a week until tendinitis wiped them out.  I
don't do any back-muscle exercises.  So I believe Lucy could carry
things the same way I do and would have trouble if she lacked those
chest muscles.  But that's not really the point.  The point is, how do
these men see it?  They are making polite conversation, seeking some
way put of their dilemma.  Scot could be in error on this matter but he
still could say it, and the Saxon could agree.  I don't believe it's
banal.  Here we are seeing the gradual mellowing of their contact, as
the two men come to respect each other.  But this is of course an
aspect of characterization that Red is not equipped to perceive.

[back]

128.  Black corrects my "we" to "us."  Yes, I'll buy that; I can still
foul up on we/us and who whom even though I once taught such usage.
Were it any character except this educated Druid speaking, I would not
accept the correction, however, because most people do not use the
language perfectly.

[back]

129.  But nobody corrected this to "vassalage."  Well, consider it
corrected now;

I, too, have a more critical perception when editing than when writing,
and my base of information is broader than that of these meddlers.

[back]

130.  "Scot's wife is pregnant?"  Black demands.

"Is Scot married to Lucy?"  Red retorts: "Never heard of common-law
marriage?"  I suppose I'll have to comment.

Yes, Scot and Lucy are married now, and she really is pregnant.  But it
is my preference to have the reader wonder at this reference, exactly
as Miss Black does.  (Women do prefer to be married before being
pregnant, for some reason.) If Scot is married, when did it happen?  Or
is he just saying it?  What's going on here?  Well, a minor mystery is
what's going on here, for now.

[back]

131.  "The Saxon's sister is matching up with Brand " Miss Black
protests, evidently sneaking a peek ahead.

"This is getting just too silly!"

"Agreed," Purple agrees.

"Banal dialogue," Red puts in banally.  But Writer keeps that matchup.
The fact is, Brand has expressed his interest in finding a suitable
woman several times, and here for the first time we encounter an
available one of the required type.  The matchup is not unreasonable;
it has been a long time coming.  One might protest that the encounter
is coincidental but the fact is, almost any initial encounter between
people is coincidental, and the majority of contacts are transitory,
such as folk passing each other on the street.  But when this random
sampling produces a promising prospect, the average person follows it
up, and thereafter it is not coincidental.  The factors that brought me
to attend college, when I had not planned on a college education, were
to a considerable extent coincidental, and largely random events put me
on a dishwashing crew with a coed whose attendance was perhaps
similarly unlikely.

Such an encounter probably would not happen again, if our lives were
rerun with any modification at all.  But as I retyped this novel for
this republication, we celebrated our 28th wedding anniversary, and had
our 33rd by the time of publication.  Miss Black would surely find this
silly.  Miss Black is surely unmarried.

[back]

132.  And here is the crucial revelation of this novel, on which the
title is based: man is colonizing the planets of distant stars but what
of Earth?  Earth needs his attention more than any of those other
worlds do.  This realization changes Scot's life.  But Writer
eliminated this entire Celtic-appeals-endurance contest, and this vital
revelation with it, rendering the novel relatively pointless.  He
substituted what seems to me an ineffective decision to have Brand and
the Saxon fight again; to head that off, and free himself from
harassment, Scot agrees to swear fealty to the King.  I feel that this
endurance-contest is the most effective part of the novel, mirroring as
it does the struggle of the whole Earth, which is being depleted much
the way Scot is being depleted.  Not least is the matter of honor both
Scot and the Saxon have it, and it shows here, and it is a major part
of the key to settlement.  But of course such artistry and symbolism
are wasted on this bunch; these folk perceive only silliness and
banality here.

[back]

133.  If there is a feeling of dej vu here, it is because of the
oblique references to Brother Paul's presentation of the conversion of
the Apostle Paul which material was deleted by the copyeds.  Indeed,
Scot is experiencing a similar, if muted, conversion; from this point
on he has a mission as important as Paul's was.

[back]

134.  "Too goddam formal for a previously uneducated man," Red
complains.

Strange I don't perceive the Saxon as uneducated.  Live and learn.

[back]

135.  "Dumb," Red grumps.

"He can't just get handed a wife have to show some previous interest."
Red, you forget you're among Celtics now.

[back]

136.  The changes in the text become so substantial in the later stages
of the novel that it's difficult even to define them, so I'll continue
with spot notes on the markings on the manuscript.  This paragraph was
emphatically ripped out by Blue; I don't know why, as it seems
innocuous.  I suppose copyeds don't have to have reason for what they
do.

[back]

137.  Again I misused the term.  We all have our smudges of
ignorance.

[back]

138.  If you are wondering why I should develop Brother Paul so
carefully, then write him all the way out of the novel it is in part
because he is no longer on Earth.  You must go to Tarot to find him.
No, on reconsideration, years have passed; he has been back long since,
and is now married and raising his own family.  But it can be tricky to
coordinate the characters of different novels;

if I had Brother Paul appear again in Earth?  it would limit him for
his own novel, and I needed him free.  An author dares not wield his
godlike power over his characters carelessly.

[back]

139.  This is overly optimistic.  As we see in the Cluster series,
which takes history a couple thousand years forward, man does not
change his nature.  Man merely discovers better ways to exploit the
galaxy.  But it's a nice dream Lucy has.

[back]

140.  Black inquires querulously: "They sleep in a parked car?"  Yes;
what's wrong with that?  But Writer obligingly has them sleep in an
alley instead.  I trust Miss Black approved.  She seems to be
suspicious about what goes on in parked cars.

[back]

141.  This sentence was excised by Pencil.  How these copyeds resent
any effort by a writer to state his theme!  This whole novel draws a
parallel between the individual situation and the planetary one.
Without that allegory, this becomes just another entertainment which is
evidently what this publisher wanted.  No wonder this line of books was
noted chiefly for its mediocrity; in the end it possessed neither
literary nor commercial appeal, and collapsed.  Don't misunderstand me:
I find nothing wrong in entertainment fiction.  The wrong is in
requiring that entertainment be the only value of fiction.  To me, the
ideal novel is one that both entertains and stretches awareness, so
that it is an experience that embraces the reader.  Earth?  attempted
to be such a novel; I fear it failed, and in the process may be
insufficiently entertaining and stretching but by this time it should
be evident that the effort was made.  Far better to try, and fail, than
not even to try.

[back]

142.  "DID LUCY ENTER A COMPLAINT THAT SHE HAD BEEN ATTACKED?"  Miss
Black demands imperiously.  She's sort of pretty in her fashion when
she gets her dander up.

"There was only a suspicion of a morals charge, remember?"  Good point.
But Lucy was not the one who made the charge; that was done by
witnesses who saw Scot seemingly attacking a young woman in a car. Such
charges, in a bureaucratic file, assume the force of facts, even if
they are nonsense.  This whole morals-charge business is outrageous but
such things do happen in life.  I speak as one who was surcharged and
ride red for all mental disease on his insurance because of my
complaint of slight fatigue stemming from then-undiagnosed diabetes. It
took ten years to get that straightened out.  (And to forestall
objection by the insurance industry: yes, I know that policies are
either surcharged or ride red for a specific liability, not both; I was
after all once an insurance salesman myself.  But it was done to me.  I
bounced the policy and demanded a refund.  They granted it, probably by
then being certain I was crazy.  I would have some rather unkind things
to say about the medical and psychiatric professions' perception of
sanity, if I got going on that subject.

But it can indeed be difficult to tell sane from insane, as I learned
when I worked at a mental hospital.) Now my insurance surcharges me for
the diabetes, though I am in fact one of the healthiest men of my
age-range; my diabetes is a marginal condition requiring no medication.
That's why it took so long to diagnose: no sugar in the urine.
Meanwhile, that same insurance ignores the fact that my wife smokes.  I
am not a doctor (though I was at one time engaged in a collaborative
nonfiction book on kidney disease and there's a type of illness to
avoid, if you have any choice!), but I could get rather disparaging
about the bases on which insurance companies rider and fail to rider.
All of which would no doubt serve as the final proof for both the
medical and the insurance industries that I am insane.  Such industries
have a very convenient shelter from common sense.  Anyway, I stand by
my assertion that people can be severely penalized for ludicrous
reasons, as I think anyone who has lived in the real world for any
length of time will agree.

[back]

143.  Naturally Pencil snatched this exchange out.  Note the reference,
just above this, where Lucy voided her charge of attack.  She had never
made the charge she didn't even know his identity at the time but now
she formally withdraws it.

This is the way you have to deal with the bureaucracy.  It reminds me
of the man who was unremittingly billed by a computer for $0.00.
Nothing could get him off that dunning list until at last he got smart
and wrote a check for $0.00.  That satisfied the computer.

[back]

144.  Black objects: "Lucy asks if they mightn't consider emigration
after all WITHOUT THEIR CHILDREN."  Miss B, Lucy isn't serious.  It's
like a person with acrophobia, wondering how it would be to jump from a
high building.  We are ironically tempted by absolute folly, sometimes.
As the following lines show, she is near hysteria, from the tension
just as you seem to be, Miss B. [back]

145.  Black notes: "BRAND arrested?  man comes in.

"Anyone here know BRAND?"

" So?

[back]

146.  Yes, of course Pencil took this out.  Ye copyeds were intent on
destroying my theme.  I proffer these insights for consideration: You
can learn a lot about an editor by noting what he edits out of a
manuscript.  And the person who believes that the end justifies the
means is apt to have an end that is unjustified.

[back]

147.  Naturally Miss Black objects: "The officials couldn't find the
manual but Scot and Lucy can in the bathroom!"  Yes, because Brand had
mentioned going to the bathroom; I thought it was a reasonably obvious
connection for Scot to make.

They probably discussed such exigencies before they embarked on this
mission:

"If we get separated, and I have the manual and am about to get caught,
I'll hide it under a red chair, or maybe the bathroom..."  Do we need
to spell out every single detail?

[back]

148.  I'm not satisfied with this; I wish they had a better place to
be.  But the day is getting on, and I suppose they can't be choosy.

[back]

149.  All hell broke loose here, of course.  Pencil didn't like his
poking around inside her shirt to help get the snow out.  Black had
objections to their making love and to their being unwilling to wait a
month lest they be arrested.  A month?  I believe it was a 24-hour
extension.  Red said: "Oh, come on!  Have to put something plausible in
there."  And this was the place that I had to add in a redundant
technical explanation, because Editor didn't remember the one I had had
before.  I am giving my original version here, as I'm sure that you,
the reader, don't need such repetition.  Red had so much trouble with
it anyway that he finally growled, "Rewrite the whole damn ending," and
Writer did.  But if I had it to do over, I would make some changes,
because if Scot and Lucy are wearing clothing heavy enough to keep them
comfortable when sitting in snow, it would have been tricky to get much
snow down her front, and trickier to make effective love.  Can be done,
I'm sure; I just would have made it easier on them.

I live in Florida now, so haven't had much recent experience making
love in snow.  Sigh.

[back]

150.  Ah there's the one month Miss Black notes.  Still, that's no
alternative, because they would be arrested, and have no chance to
complete their mission.

Maybe Miss B favors MT, and wants them to be arrested.  And to be
confined in separate cells, so they can't engage in any more nasty
s-x.

[back]

151.  Need you ask?  Naturally that exchange was deleted by Pencil.

[back]

152.  Red had trouble with that, but then blacked out his own comment,
so I don't know what he said.  You know, years later a reviewer
criticized my awkward dialogue, so I wrote to him to ask for examples.
He sent some, among which was "I love you."  Now dialogue is another
subject I could expound on at length, as many writers have distorted
notions of its nature, but the essence is that it is often necessary
for me to use a kind of shorthand in rendering it so that it doesn't
become tedious.

"I love you" can be such a shorthand but I would not call it awkward.
It is my suspicion that the person who objects to this sort of
expression on the grounds of awkwardness or lack of realism actually
has some other reason for his or her opposition such as, perhaps, being
turned off by the honest expression of emotion.  There is a lot of
alienation in our society, and true love and understanding can be hard
to find but very precious when it is found.  Scot and Lucy, after their
difficult beginning, have found it.

[back]

153.  "It's 5 A.M."  Miss Black protests.

"THIS HAS ALL TAKEN PLACE IN THE MIDDLE

OF THE NIGHT."  Yes they spent the night in the snow outside, talking,
clearing snow out of clothing, making love, perhaps sleeping, talking
again, poring over the obscure manual, puzzling it out, working out the
details.  Not comfortable at all, but this is a desperate business.
Miss Black, you will remember, was the one who objected to them
sleeping in a parked car, before.  Something about a man and a woman
spending time together that sets her off, apparently.

[back]

154.  Black says: "They get into the bldg what about guards and dogs
they were there yesterday!"  Yes they were but that was afternoon; this
is early morning.

Somebody is being slack about guard duty.  I know how it is, having
served on guard duty in the U.S. Army.

[back]

155.  Red demands: "If he's blowing up the whole place, why does he
care?"  I'm referring to the workmen in the area before the blowup,
Red, who might spot something amiss.

[back]

156.  "WHY?"  Red demands.  Well, a lot of people are being processed,
at enormous expense; the government just can't fool around with those
who change their minds.  So an arbitrary limit was set: one chance
only.  That encourages people to be decisive, and prevents any
quibbling about which world they prefer to go to.

Take it or leave it forever.  It's not a compassionate policy, but it's
effective, and easier for the bureaucracy to handle than a policy of
free choice would be.

[back]

157.  Pencil objects: "Dialogue/situation too elementary.  Shall we
re-write?"

These copyeds, having misunderstood or deleted anything in the novel
that threatens to become other than elementary, are now objecting to
what remains.  As Red would say, Gak!

[back]

158.  Black says: "They're within 2 miles of the center of a blast like
that of an old-fashioned H-Bomb!  The scene strikes Scot as dej -vu!
(his house burning)."  Actually, the blast was not like that of a
hydrogen bomb, but the cloud reminded Scot of the films he had seen.
Try reading the passage more carefully, Miss Black.  As you may not
know, the mushroom-shaped or globe-shaped cloud can derive from other
types of explosion and in this case it does.  But there is not the same
type of damage, and no lethal radiation; it's relatively sanitary.
(There has not been an explosion of this nature on Earth before, so I'm
free to define it as seems reasonable to me.  At such time as such an
explosion does occur, I'll update my description.) But the effect does
indeed send Scot into a searing memory he had pretty much suppressed
before.  Now at last we discover what happened when he plunged into his
burning house.

[back]

159.  Note the imperfect syntax: a comma instead of "and" in the first
sentence of this paragraph.  I have on occasion been challenged for
such usage, the challenger assuming that I did not know how to do it
properly.  No, I know the grammatical rules; I merely set them aside
when they interfere with my effect.

Here Scot is in a desperate strait, and my style is intended to reflect
this.  If the sentence seems forced, so is his situation.  I have had
trouble from the outset of my career with copyeds who laboriously
"correct" my usage, thereby damaging my prose.  Yes, of course Pencil
did that to this; could you have doubted that?

[back]

160.  Here is where Pencil shows a modicum of perception: "OK this is a
flash-back to the fire at the farm.  It's a good idea, but I'm not sure
it quite works yet.  What do you think?"  Very well think about it for
a while, and I'll have another note at the end of it.

[back]

161.  Note the Biblical reference, again, signaling a significant
change of outlook, as in the Apostle Paul's conversion to Christianity.
Naturally this was excised from my text; I suspect that in this case
the copyeds understood the symbolism and persecuted it.

[back]

162.  Pencil says here: "Let's move this description up to p. 137: the
details of the house, building and change in mode of life."  Red
agrees: "Right!"  So Writer moved it to that place in my narrative, so
that the story carried through with no break and no flashback.
Meanwhile, the riddle continues: why did I set it up this way?  Tune in
to Footnote #164, coming up soon.

[back]

163.  Pencil amputated that with an indignant exclamation point.
Remember my comment about judging an editor by what he (she) excises?

[back]

164.  All right.  Flashback ends, and it's time for explanations, as
this flashback was perhaps the most controversial aspect of this novel.
Why did I do it?  Well, I found I had a problem with this novel: it
built up, peaked, and then lost force toward the end.  A novel's climax
its height of tension, its point of critical decision normally comes
near the end, not in the middle.  This one had the wrong dramatic
configuration; once it was evident that Scot had found and married the
right girl, and had the will and the means to destroy the MT program,
all else seemed anticlimactic.  What to do?  So, though I much prefer
to tell a story straight through from beginning to end unless I am
trying for something special, I decided in this case to revise the
structure not the story, but the presentation so as to place that
climax where it belonged, near the end.

This had the advantage of making clear the parallel between the
carelessness of an MT technician at great cost to his hosts and the MT
program itself, which was heedlessly depleting the planet, at the cost
of civilization.  This was a deliberately artistic juxtaposition of
events: the heat and violence and destruction of the fire, versus that
of MT's blowup.  The loss of Scot's house that actually leads to a more
stable family life, vs.  the destruction of the MT program that
actually will lead to a better Earth.  I did not place this scene here
to confuse my readers; I did it to clarify the real message of the
novel, and finish with the double impact of physical and philosophical
climax.  The personal and the global, culminating together.  And Scot's
marriage to Lucy, superimposed on the moment.  And the obvious justice
of Donald's disastrous visit providing them with the tool they needed
to bring similar destruction on the effort Donald represented, MT. This
sort of thing seldom happens in life, but it can happen in art and I
deemed it my responsibility, as the artist here, to make it happen.

Obviously the significance of this effort of mine bypassed the massed
copyeds, whose perception of literature seems inextricably limited to
the pedestrian.  It also bypassed the Writer, who did their ignorant
bidding.  It even bypassed a reviewer, of whom there will be more in
the terminal essay.  (Unless you are reading these Notes last, in which
case you have already encountered Reviewer.) If it also bypassed you,
my Readers, then I am truly sorry; I was attempting to enhance your
pleasure and contemplation of significance in this novel.  There are
writers who confine themselves to the pedestrian level, but I like to
think that I cater to a readership that desires, appreciates, and
indeed expects more than that.

[back]

165.  "Scot and Lucy walk away hand in hand," Black sneers.  May God
preserve the man who tries to hold your hand, Miss Black!

[back]

166.  "Get them farther away," Red says, evidently concerned about
their proximity to what the copyeds assumed was a hydrogen-bomb blast.
So Writer reworked the ending to provide them two hours' lead time
before the detonation.

But it seems that the copyeds weren't satisfied even with that; Writer
advised me later that they had reworked his ending.  Indeed, Editor
phoned me to inform me how brilliant that ending was; obviously he was
proud of it.  He mentioned the phenomenal exodus from the MT site.
Well, let's sample that ending.  In it, Scot and Lucy tell the folk of
the city what is about to happen, so that people have a chance to
escape.

By now the flood of people was outside the town moving down the main
road toward the open countryside.  A few children whimpered, but for
the most part, an unearthly silence enveloped the people.  Were they
relieved now that it was finally over, Scot wondered.  He grasped
Lucy's hand and turned to look at the trail of refugees.

Thousands formed the exodus men, women, and children hurrying away from
the center of the impending holocaust, their faces mirroring the pathos
and grim strength that has sustained every group of refugees.  Scot
wondered if the two hours they had were enough to insure that all would
make it in time.  What about the stragglers?  Especially the old, the
lame?

That sort of thing; there's more.  I'm not sure I should be too
civilized here, as I'm not a disinterested observer, but just let me
pose one question: if everybody knew, two hours before the event, that
MT was going to blow why didn't the MT technicians use the time to undo
Scot's sabotage?  All they had to do was remove the faulty calibrator.
Of course, Writer reworked that aspect too but if the damage was too
great for the technicians to fix in two hours, why didn't they simply
shut down operations until they got it fixed?  Certainly they didn't
have to wait for the detonation!  Where was Miss Black's acerbic
critique on that one?  My logical conclusion was deleted in favor of
nonsense!

And at the end of the published version, Scot hugs Brand and Lucy to
him, laughs, and says "Let's go back to the farm."  So it seems that
holding hands is only worthy of a sneer, but hugging is all right.

[back]

167.  Remember, I said Editor asked me to add a prologue and an
epilogue, so I did, though I felt that neither was necessary.  They ran
the prologue, as noted above, but deleted the epilogue.  Accordingly, I
give it here:

Epilogue:

There could hardly have been a less likely savior of Earth than Scot
Krebs; yet he had performed as his nature and the circumstances
dictated.  He returned to his Saxon King, who conferred with the Druid,
who in turn consulted with his counterpart in the Holy Order of Vision.
Now the way to stop MT had been shown, and the need to act or fail to
act was upon them.

The Saxons sent emissaries to the Huns and to other tribes, bearing
this key information.  Swift horses raced to all the centers of culture
across the continent, and Viking boats crossed the oceans, spreading
the word.  And in very short order, all of the MT units of the world
were shut down.  Not all were destroyed, but those spared were curbed.
The Age of Emigration some called it the Dark Age was over.

Almost half Earth's human population remained on the planet.  This was
more than enough to restore civilization.  There was a period of
reorganization and uncertainty.  But out of this, in time, emerged a
much more disciplined program of colonization that considered the
welfare of Earth as well as that of its colonies.168 Eventually an
organized interstellar empire developed, using the much more economical
physical space travel rather than energy-wasteful matter transmission.
This was Sol Sphere, expanding to a radius of a hundred light-years.
Contact was made with non-human spacefaring species, ushering in an
entirely new era.  Man, having surmounted his planetary shortcomings,
was now a Galactic species.  His real history was only beginning.

And what of the man who had made it all possible?  Like many of the
world's true benefactors, Scot Krebs disappeared into anonymity.  His
personal fate is unknown but it is presumed that he was satisfied, and
that he lived in simple health and achievement with his family, friends
and neighbors: loving and loved.

That was, after all, his dream.

[back]

168.  Pencil remarks: "Well it's hard to find believable a barbarian
mode of life can combine with the technology and sophistication
necessary to become a Galactic power."

[back]

Conclusion So the deed was done, and my solo novel had been illicitly
rendered into this abomination.  What happened thereafter?

Well, I wrote a six-page missive to my agent, dated October 14, 1976.
In it I summarized the history of the novel and described what had been
done to it, pointing out the clear violation of the contract.  This was
an "open" letter, intended for wider circulation, as my agent
understood.  In fact, he made copies of it and distributed them to
Editor, Writer, Editor's boss whom I shall call Publisher, and I'm not
sure who else.  Naturally the feces hit the fan.  It turned out that
Publisher had not known what was going on either.  He sent my agent an
apology and reversion of the novel.  That meant I could have it
republished elsewhere without penalty which is what I am doing here.
The entire line of science fiction books was shut down and Editor was
fired.  This means, I suspect, that the various copyeds lost their
jobs, and Writer lost his major market.  I have little sympathy.

Now I can't honestly claim that this was all because of my letter, this
line of books had developed into such a disaster in terms of quality
and sales that it could not continue much longer.  Condemnation of the
merit of the line was widespread, and sales of individual novels,
instead of being in the projected quarter-million class, were in the
10,000 class.  The final statement on But What of Earth?  showed total
sales of 8,489.  Only $664.47 had been earned toward the advance of
$2,500 to me and $500 to Writer.  In my letter I had said that Writer
should be paid all the royalties accruing beyond the advance until his
share of the money matched mine, and that they should be split evenly
thereafter, because I believed that even an unauthorized promise to an
innocent person should be honored.  Honor is perhaps the guiding
principle of my life a fact that the great majority of people I have
interacted with have failed signally to understand.  My word is my
bond, in letter and spirit, even when, as in this case, my word has
been given without my consent.  Thus I now had a commitment to share
the money evenly with Writer and a similar commitment to destroy
Editor.

I did not know, at that stage, that my offer had been rendered
meaningless by reality.  Sales of 250,000 copies would have earned out
the advance many times over; sales of under 10,000 left us in the hole.
We did not have to return any money, but we never got any more on that
novel from that publisher.

So probably I did not single-handedly close down this operation but I
believe I could have, had that been required.  I could have sued for
the contract-violation and the detriment to my literary reputation done
by this outfit.  But Publisher was not really at fault, not having
known what was going on; in fact Publisher took a phenomenal bath on
this line of books.  Certainly, after my letter, Editor had no further
prospects in the science fiction genre; he faded quickly from the
scene.  If I were to mention his name here, the vast majority of my
readers would draw a blank.

Meanwhile, I wanted to establish the relative merits of the two
versions of the novel, so I arranged with the editor of an amateur
genre magazine (fanzine) to have both texts reviewed by an independent
reviewer, who would publish his conclusion: which version was better,
my original or the published one?

Naturally my commentary here is one-sided; I am after all the aggrieved
party.

It was only fair to have a competent third party decide the issue of
merit.  The reviewer was selected one whose prior comment on my work
had been generally unfavorable.  In fact, the one who later quoted "I
love you" as an example of my awkward dialogue.  (See Note 152.) Sigh.
But I kept my mouth shut and waited with a certain dread for the
verdict.  I knew my version was superior, but was hardly assured that
he would see it that way.  I have had much to say about the
inadequacies of copy-editors here; I could go into a similar discussion
of reviewers.  Any writer could!

But when the day of reckoning came, this reviewer concluded, as I
remember, that though the published edition had substantially benefited
the novel by eliminating my flashback (see Note 164 for my rationale on
that), and by having Scot marry Lucy (somehow he got the notion that I
had never bothered to get them married), the characterization of my
version was better.  He found both versions mediocre, but the published
one slightly worse than my original.  Now this was hardly any striking
recommendation, but it did validate my point: After all the struggles
of up to five copyeds and a reWriter, what had been accomplished?  A
worse novel than the one they had started with!  What better argument
can there be than that for keeping other fingers out of an author's
novel?

When it comes to that, why should any changes be made other than
correction of spelling, obvious grammatical flaws, and deletion of
anything obviously libelous or obscene or inaccurate?  I, for one, am
ready to face the music with my fiction exactly as I write it, spelling
and all.  I feel that copyeds generally do more harm than good to my
text, often introducing errors of spelling, syntax or fact, and
eliminating important and necessary material, such as the rationale for
destroying the matter transmitter.  This is not the only publisher with
whom I have had a copyed problem; this is just the most egregious
example.  Copyeds strike me as resembling termites, tunneling through
the supporting frames of the structure.  They may think they are
improving it, but their unchecked attention can cause it to collapse. I
suspect that publishers could publish better material, and save money,
by simply eliminating the copy-editing stage.  Somehow they seem to
assume that the author is illiterate, and that any young woman hired
off the street can do a better job.  It just isn't so!  I hold a B.A.
degree in Creative Writing, and I have been a proofreader and an
English teacher, and I have an excellent literary and commercial track
record, and, not least, I do know how to write.  I will concede that
writers may exist who are less literate than the typical copyed, but I
am not one of them.  When, oh when, will I be suffered to present my
work in peace?

Actually, I may now have an answer to that rhetorical question: When
more publishers computerize their typesetting.  Then material can go
directly from the author's word-processor to the publisher's
typesetting system, untouched by any human hand.  I am, I understand,
the next-to-last well-established writer to convert to the computer, as
of this book.  I held out because the computer companies claimed they
couldn't provide my Dvorak keyboard, and in part because I knew my
manual office Olympia typewriter was more reliable than any computer,
considering things like accidental wipe outs and power failures.  The
first situation has changed, and I bought a unit to protect my power
supply, so this reworked novel was the first I did on my Digital
Rainbow system.  I did write this concluding essay in pencil, and this
particular paragraph during a four-hour power failure; nothing's
perfect.  But they no longer make good manual typewriters, and my
present machine has ten years and ten million words on it and was
beginning to tire; my hand had been forced, and if I had to go
electric, I concluded I might as well go whole-hog.  Especially if it
offered future leverage to cut out the copy-editing middleman.
Publishers will battle to the very end to avoid taking such a
reasonable step, so we won't see it soon, but some starlight glimmers
at the end of the tunnel.

I don't claim that everything done to my novel was evil.  Writer
changed the system of measurements from mile, acre and such to metric:
kilometer, hectare and such.  Certainly metric is more sensible than
our chaotic present system.  A hectare is a square 100 meters on a
side, or almost two and a half acres, which happens to be the size (but
not the shape) of the local lots.  But logically, it doesn't wash;
Americans are simply not going to change over, now or in the near
future, so it is more realistic to show the society as it is, flaws and
all.

Some questions remain.  Whatever possessed Editor to suppose that he
could do something like this to an ornery writer like me?  I can only
conjecture that he simply deceived himself about the likely
consequence, just as contemporary politicians do about an ongoing
budgetary deficit.  He had allowed his copyeds to run wild, then had to
cover up their mischief by hiding it from me.  I cannot believe it was
an accident that prevented the galley-proofs from reaching me;

had I seen them, I would have acted instantly to prevent publication of
the novel in that form, and I would have required them to revert it to
its original form.  Perhaps he deluded himself that the collaborative
version of Earth?

actually represented an improvement, and that I really would be
pleased.  But mostly, I suspect that he had dug himself into such a
hole that he could do nothing but carry on with blinders, praying to
God for deliverance.  Well, God delivered him into minor religious
publishing, where he remained the last I heard of him.  Mainly, Editor
lacked plain common sense but because he was a persuasive promoter, he
built himself quite an edifice on sand before the tide swept it away.

How could something like this have happened in our fair genre?  Well,
it happened because most people, like me, prefer to believe in the good
faith and common sense of others.  We are not paranoid; we accept
assurances as given, and we assume that contracts and standard
practices will be honored.  A great deal of business is instigated on
faith.  Publishers extend faith all the time and money too!  that an
author's promise to deliver an original and satisfactory manuscript
will be honored.  Most writers do indeed honor such pledges; the few
who don't quickly achieve a bad name, and have increasing difficulty
getting contracts.

Most editors, too, are honorable by their peculiar code.  I have dealt
with a number, and seldom have been met with outright dishonor.  If a
writer deals with an established publisher, I believe the chances are
20 to 1 in favor of the given commitments being honored in the major,
if not the minor compass.  This does not mean that such publishers
can't be rapacious; they can exploit unagented authors unmercifully,
they can misrepresent their sales figures to the authors' disfavor (so
as to avoid paying royalties), they can give novels shoddy treatment,
and they can blacklist authors who protest.  I have been the route!

That's why I am considered ornery: because I do stand up for my rights,
and will take action against those who violate them.  But many
publishers don't regard such behavior as dishonorable; they think of it
as good business practice.  They will correct such errors if jogged in
the right manner.  It's a bit like a runner in baseball taking a lead
off first base: if challenged by a throw to first, he will return to it
quickly enough.  The writer simply has to keep his eyes open and assert
himself politely when necessary (an agent is useful for this, and
sometimes a lawyer), and he will get along.  Note that the Publisher of
Earth?

quickly accommodated my complaints, when I made them formally.  Perhaps
I should say that God helps those who help themselves; publishers are
as honorable as the writer requires them to be.  Unfortunately, many
writers rather resemble sheep in this respect, and so they do get
shorn, but it doesn't have to be that way.

Publishers can on occasion be generous, too; at times I have been
treated with greater kindness than the contract required, and not just
because of my increasing leverage.  So Parnassus may be a mixed bag,
but honor and even generosity are sometimes to be found.  This general
trust and good feeling does leave open avenues for abuse, but on the
whole we're better off with it than without it.

How can we prevent any recurrence of such mischief?  Only by continued
vigilance.

It is my regret that so-called writers' organizations are not very
consistent in policing the trade; sometimes they do excellent service,
but sometimes their involvement only exacerbates a situation.  The
individual writer has to watch his own jacket and wallet.  But he can
do this; a little backbone helps.  If it were not possible for a writer
to stand his ground and ultimately prosper, though scarred by just such
abuses as this one, I would not be presenting this present
commentary.